yay ok Im so happy about how my first chapters turned out all the reviews mean ALOT TO ME! I was reading over my last chapters and I realized that I forgot to tell you the second pov on chapter 1 it was 4 so sorry about that now enough of this stupid authors note
Disclaimer- if I was veronica roth I wouldn't be a teenager, I think we can all agree on that
Four pov
"No, not unless you know someone named Four." The girl looks at me shocked I am getting confused does this girl know me? The girl with the blonde wavy hair asks me "Do you remember in 7th grade one day this girl came crying to the chasm in the back of the woods and was screaming at you to leave?" OH MY GOSH I do remember that, I always wanted to see her again but whenever I came she was never there. "T-That was YOU!" I say i'm so shocked, she was changed so much she's so much more...Beautiful. WAIT WHAT! I did NOT just think that I haven't liked a girl in 2-3 years. I decide to stop thinking and listen to the girl. " I'm tris and Yeah that was me I thought I would never see you again and you were so nice ..." I block her out. I cant help but stare at her lips, the perfect shade of pink and her hair is all wavy framing her face and even though she is wearing mostly black she looks like a doll not a pie face, I can tell she doesn't wear that much make up, that's when I notice the tears in her eyes.
I walk up to her slowly by now they are running down her face like a waterfall. I take her into a hug, "Everyone leaves me." she cries out. I pull back, I think Im one of those people. "Well now that I have you again i'm never going to let you go." I hug her tightly and she hugs me back, it brings a goofy smile to my face. WHY CANT I STOP SMILING! Ugh this girl is going to make me crazy. " My brother left for college, my mom and dad are always on business trips, my boyfriend cheated on me 5 minutes ago and-and I just feel so alone." Tris says still crying. I pull her tighter. Hearing this makes anger boil inside my instead of blood . "Four could you let me go your hurting me." I look down and see I was squeezing her without knowing I step away and I feel my face warming up and I feel like I was just shoved inside an oven and Tris is looking at me. "um...why don't we get started?" I say embarrassed. she nods and we start with reviewing some of the notes she remembers and then we learn a few new notes and techniques.
Tris pov
As we are practicing I'm trying to get this new called A but its really hard because you have to roll your finger up really quick. "I remember how hard this used be." I say angrily. I have stopped crying and now there are only a few minutes till the period is over "here let me you" he stands behind me wrapping his arms around me and putting his large hands on top of my tiny ones guiding them to the right place then he tells me to play I bring it up to my mouth and I finally get the note. I smile set my clarinet down and turn to Four who is smiling at me proudly I hug him tightly and whisper thank you. he reply your welcome I pull back and look at him. I automatically get lost in his eyes. They are a dark blue which I have never seen in eyes, it makes me love them even more. I snap out of it and say "can I see your schedule?' he hands it over I smile. "We have last period together gym I guess ill see you then ok. "sure" he says I cant believe it because I just got cheated on but I actually leave, with a smile.
How did you like it sorry its kinda short and for the mistakes in the other chapters. Review and I think I have time to do one more chapter so expect it. :) When I get to 10 reviews ill update (we can do this come on show me you know how to review just press the button below).
