READ THIS ITS VERY IMPORTANT! I made a few changes, like now, instead of Hinata's parents dying at 6, they die at the age of eight. And about Hinata still having a part of the old her is only half true I guess, the thing is she can be gentle, but ugk how do I explain this!
Okay, the thing I'm saying is that Hinata has a heart and could be nice when she wants to, she wont stutter in this story, nor will she act shy, but she will blush on some scenes, what I meant when I said that she still had a part of the old Hinata was that shes a really easy person to befriend and is very caring and what ever, I don't know how to explain, just reread what I said and try to get it.
NEW STORY I'm WRITING READ AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, EITHER WAY I'm STILL GOING TO POST IT,LOL!
The thing is I'm writing another story called the Hyuuga Clan Massacre, instead of the Uchiha clan getting murdered, it's the Hyuuga clan that gets killed by Neji leaving only Hanabi and Hinata alive. In this story shes very emotionless to people, (which is what I planed to do in The Orphan but though against it) and shes very quiet and prefers to keep to herself. Her only friends here will be Ino, Shikamaru and Choji, whom she meets when they were 8 years old, she helps them fight off bullies. And maybe Shino too.
And not only that…BUT SHE IS THE VESSEL OF THE NINE TAILED DEMON FOX KYUUBI! Hahaha, didn't expect that did you, but yeah in this story the fourth Hokage and Kushina live.
When her clan was killed the council placed ROOT ANBU around the Hyuuga compound so Hinata wouldn't go in, and live in her own home, forcing her and Hanabi to live on the streets and fend for themselves. Since she held the kyuubi they wanted her to die out of hunger or something. They did this secretly, so Minato didn't know.
So the village hates her, but she doesn't pay mind to it, and instead of Sakura being in team 7, it will be Hinata, and instead of Kakashi, Itachi is going to be Naruto, Sasuke, and Hinata's sensei, seeing how this is an ItaHina story, they're is going to be A LOT of adventures and they get more than one c-rank mission of Zabuza and what ever, they'll have much more interesting quests if I can write them well. And also D rank missions but cool ones, I guess.
Anyway, in this story besides Hinata seeming cold and heartless in THIS story is where she still is a bit like the old Hinata, she is very kind and gentle to the people she cares about, and try's not to let any harm come to them, and she stutters when someone is invading her personal pace and that makes her nervous seeing that she doesn't like people close to her unless she trusts them, and she is still a bit shy and blushes a bit too in some parts, though I don't know where yet. But she can be very heartless, but protects those she needs too, even if she doesn't like them, which is Naruto and Sasuke whom she hates both every since the first day she officially met them, but will still protect if in danger, I will explain why she would protect someone she doesn't like, and no its not the normal because their you're teammates and blah blah blah, there's more to it in my story. So once you read this chapter of The Orphan leave a review of my new story, i already started on it a few weeks ago, so please tell me what you think of it, but no matter what I'm making Hinata the way I described her and everything, oh yeah and in my new story the kyuubi is a girl, weird yeah I know but I have my reasons. But I'm open to ideas, so review, seriously.
And I might not post every month like I have been doing because it might take longer to write two different stories and stuff. And I know my new story sounds like The Orphan, but to be honest I though about my new story first that this one, the thing is that I just forgot when I wrote this story, so there is a bit similarity in them, and when I finished a couple of chapters, it was then I realized how similar they both seemed, so don't blame me and what ever, again REVIEW AND GIVE ME IDEAS FOR BOTH THE ORPHAN AND THE HYUUGA CLAN MASSACRE!
Have a cool day or night, either way just review.
Bye!
Chapter six
"What can I say, you took my keys remember?" Tenten pouted at Hinata's accusation before walking to the front door and opening it with the keys. "You should have just waited for me to come to open the door like a NORMAL person would do, y'know." Tenten scolded lightly glaring at her blue haired friend playfully.
"Yeah but were not normal are we?" A voice said behind them.
Tenten jumped in surprise and Hinata just smiled at the person.
"Hey Temari." Hinata waved while Tenten glared at the dirty blond haired girl. "Stop always sneaking up on me!" She yelled her face turning red and if this were a cartoon she probably would have smoke coming out of her ears and nose.
"Aww stop being bitchy."
Hinata blinked as she stared back and forth at the two girls arguing back and forth. Like she though earlier this morning, it was amazing how they could change conversations. First they were talking about taking out the glass on her, and now they were yelling about which meat tastes better on what. It was confusing, really.
Hinata frowned as they completely forgot about her. They couldn't help her with the glass couldn't they?
Standing up she walked quietly into the living room and sat on the couch, already focusing on her wounds.
She didn't fell the pain, since it was only shards of glass, nothing too big.
A while passed and Ino arrived and as soon as she saw Temari and Tenten fighting she immediately went to find Hinata preferring not to get involved. Last time they all ended up wrestling on the floor for six hours for the last bag of Ho Ho's.
They had to buy new furniture.
Ino found Hinata sitting on a reclinable seat pulling out shards of glass out of her arms and legs. 'Well that explains the broken window' She though amusedly.
"Hey Hinata, need help?" She asked walking over to Hinata and sat down on the foot rest of the chair and began taking out the shards of Hinata's legs and watching the cuts heal.
They spent at least five minutes removing the glass and three minutes cleaning the blood off Hinata's pale skin and now they moved to the couch waiting for Tenten and Temari to stop fighting.
Ino and Hinata sighed loudly. Hinata was laying down on the couch her head resting on Ino's lap while they both glared angrily at the ceiling. You could hear their shouts all they way from the front door to the living room annoying Ino greatly but Hinata more because of her sensitive hearing its like their shouting to each other through a mouth loudspeaker.
"That's it!" Hinata yelled sitting up and stalking towards the two girls already raking her veins.
Ino blinked when Hinata left the room before abruptly standing and running towards the commotion. This might get bad like the Ho Ho's incident. (Wow, amazing….)
Hinata stood next to the girls that hadn't noticed her with Ino behind her grinning like an idiot.
"Shut the FUCK UP."
Temari and Tenten stopped arguing and snapped their heads towards the blue haired girl, their eyes widening at the look in her eyes. It was painfully obvious if they even opened up their mouths they would probably end up tied up in the shower with ice freezing cold water and having crickets and worms dumped on them, it's happened. Twice.
Ino of course was the only one who Hinata really hasn't done much, but has done the worse.
One time she had entered Hinata's room and practically rearranged her entire wardrobe. Hinata had been so mad she had tied up Ino upside down on the ceiling with burning candles under her and cut her hair and burned right in front of her and Hinata placing the goriest movies for her to see. It practically left Ino both traumatized and avoiding Hinata for four months strait.
And its also the reason they barley have neighbors the entire block.
"Now you have three seconds to go to the living room, and sit you're fucking asses down, and if I see you arguing Temari I'm telling Gaara you're the one who broke his collection of tailed demon figurines, and Tenten I'm telling Neji you're the one who had cut his hair and then bathed it in syrup and pink hair dye." She grinned evilly pointing the way where she and Ino came from. And in two seconds flat the only ones in front of the door was Hinata and her blond haired friend.
Ino snickered at the girl's predicament. "You aren't telling Gaara and Neji even if they fight are you."
Hinata smiled. "Of course not Ino, I would never do that to any of you, you three are my best friends, I would never black mail you guys."
Ino nodded and smiled back before heading towards the living room with Hinata, both making sure not to step on the broken glass on the floor.
Once they were in the living Temari and Tenten where talking like nothing even happened, which always happens.
Hinata was sitting next to Tenten when she decided to call Neji; he would be pissed of when he found out about the broken window.
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Neji sighed as he stepped into the limousine followed by Sasuke, Gaara, Naruto Kiba, Shikamaru and Kakashi.
About an hour later they were stuck in traffic and man it was HUGE! They were probably going to be stuck there for hours.
"So what are we going to do about our problem?" Kakashi looked at Shikamaru who was sitting in front of him.
"Hold auditions I guess, there isn't much that we could do." Kakashi sighed. This was going to be stressful.
Shikamaru opened his mouth to reply when suddenly U2's song "Ultraviolet" started playing making every one in the car jump in surprise not expecting the sudden noise. (The limousine is sound proof so they can't hear the cars honking outside and stuff, well they can but they are just ignoring the sounds so yeah)
Everyone glared at Neji since it was his phone that scared everyone. Neji just smirked at them before answering.
"Hello." He plainly said.
"Sup lil'cousin!"
Everyone in the car snickered at the nickname that the mysterious person had on Neji, but… They didn't know that Neji had an older cousin, he never told them. They all sent questioning glances at him which he just brushed off.
"I told you to stop calling me that."
"Make me, I'm older and taller, and you're miles away you can't touch me asshole." The voice replied in a mocking tone.
Neji scrunched up in his in frustration. Hinata was one of the few people who managed to piss him off. "Yeah but I'm getting there."
"Uh-huh, you're stuck in traffic aren't you?" She replied in a knowing tone.
Neji blinked in surprise. "How did you know?"
On the other line Hinata smirked. "Guess."
After three seconds Neji suddenly slapped his forehead in disbelief. 'How could I ever forget my cousin is a Hokuro, of course she'll be able to hear.'
"Yeah I remember now."
"Anyway, I called because I got kicked out of my school."
Neji eyes widened completely forgetting that his friends were watching him intently.
"Just what the hell did you do?"
On the other line Hinata placed her finger on her chin in a thinking pose. "Um, I got into a small fight, nothing big, and I called the principle a fucking asshole, hentai cock sucker, then asshole again, I was going to get out anyway, I drew graffiti all over his car."
Neji paled more than he already was. Sometimes he felt he was the oldest and not her. He was much more responsible, mature and defiantly less crazy than her.
"There's more isn't there?" He asked helplessly, he just couldn't believe that Hinata could cause so much trouble, she used to be so sweet back then, and now she's the damn devil!
Hinata made a popping noise. "Yeahh, when I went to you're house to wait until you got here, I didn't have my keys since Tenten took them, and um well let's just say you have to buy a new window."
"WHAT!?"
Everyone in the car jumped at the tone of Neji's voice and moved away from him, a pissed off Neji was not a good Neji.
"YOU BROKE IN THE KAMI DAMNED WINDOW TO ENTER MY HOUSE INSTEAD OF WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO GET THERE TO OPENED THE FUCKING DAMNED DOOR!?"
Hinata grinned on the line while the girls next to her laughed hearing the shout.
"Yup." She answered nonchalantly.
"Damn it Hina why do you have to go doing stuff like that, what else did you do, I know there's more!"
They guys in the car blinked…There was more…
"I beat the shit out of a couple of guys because they knocked over a flowered vase."
"Hinata you can't just go on doing stuff like that, don't you care what people think of you?" He yelled again into his phone. For the guys this was probably one of the best phone calls that they have ever heard that they didn't notice that the car started moving.
Hinata frowned on the line. "No actually, I don't care what they think of me, it's their problem, I like doing stuff like that its fun."
Neji being as mad as he was responded with out thinking. "No! You do that to forget what happened all those years ago, you get into trouble, get kicked out of schools and you've even gone to jail because of all the shit that you do and you're causing us a lot of trouble trying to find schools that will accept you with you're background which affects us as well, seriously I wise I wish I wasn't related to you at all and maybe that would save us some kami damn trouble!"
"…"
Neji froze and his eyes widen when he realized what he said. He couldn't believe he had just told her that… (Oooh dramatic…)
On the other line Hinata grew tense while Tenten, Ino and Temari where gaping at her. They couldn't believe Neji would stoop so low to say that just because of the things Hinata did.
Neji gulped as fear, guilt and pain showed in his eyes making his friends gape at his emotions. Neji wasn't the type of person to show his emotions freely like Sasuke. So for him to actually show those three…(I have no idea what to put in this sentence so I put the dots for dramatic affect.)
"H-hina, I-I didn't mean that."
Neji bit his tongue in worry and panic, she wasn't answering.
"Hina,Ireallydidn'tmeanthatyoujustgotmereallymad,m eandmyparentsarereallyhappythatyoufoundusandI'mrea llyhappytohaveyouasmybigcousin."He said in a rush already panicking. ( Hina, I really didn't mean that you just got me really mad, me and my parents are really happy that you found us and I'm really happy to have you as my big cousin)
To his friends it looked like Neji was having a panic attack the way his face was really red and stuff.
Silence issued longer before a quite response was heard. "It's okay Neji, I know I got you mad, I'm sorry too."
Neji's shoulders slumped and he sighed in relief. He was so scared she was going to disappear again leaving them alone again. Though he doesn't say it he loves his cousin very much, he didn't want to lose her again, and she was his family. She saw her parents get killed when she was only eight years old. He never should have said that, Hinata had every reason to do the things she does. It helped her forget a type of pain that he has never felt.
"But if you ever raise you're voice at me like that again I swear I would come over there and kick you're damn ass!" Hinata yelled into the phone. The situation was just getting to emo for her.
Neji smiled softly, he knew that she had forgiven him. It amazed him how easily she forgave him after what he had said.
He shook his head lightly, and then put his phone on speaker. He didn't like keeping a phone to long to his ear. Then he remembered something.
"So how my baby?" He asked which emitted chocking sounds from the band but again, he forgot they were there.
"Tenten? Shes fine."
"Not her, my car!"
Both the guys and girls burst out laughing while Hinata just rolled her eyes.
"Gee, wonderful boyfriend Neji, you know you're on speaker, right?"
Neji paled slightly "Oh, I mean how's my baby girl going?"
This caused everyone to laugh even more and Hinata to smile.
"I don't think you fooled anyone here."
"Oh well. But seriously, you haven't ruined it yet, have you?"
"Okay, I SWEAR the tree jumped in front of me!"
"Hina!"
"I'm kidding, I'm kidding, it's still intact."
"Don't do that again, knowing you, you WOULD drive into a tree."
"Yeah I would wouldn't I?"
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Hello my people, I feel so happy I've written this chapter, and do not forget to write a review!
Oh yeah, and the how's my baby, and Hinata thinks Neji is talking about Tenten, well that scene isn't mine, its from a different story, its really funny, the writer is called gar-a-ash the story called Crack Fit. Its kinda stupid in a way, very silly, buts its so kami damned funny! Anyway, I used this little scene I have no idea why, but I wanted it to happened and what every so I wont end the chpt with emo'ness. That is not a word. I'm sorry if I offended the writer of that little scene, but it was just so damn funny! Anyway… Review, I command you to review, just kidding. But yeah review I need to know about my stories. I didn't write the summery perfect b/c I didn't feel like it, so yeah.
Peace out!
