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Chapters will be dedicated to someone who answers the questions at the bottom!

This chapter is dedicated to~ OtakuHeart

Answer to last chapter question: Sonika!

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Chapter 9: Pinocchio Syndrome

Red curtains swished open on the tiny stage. Illuminated were a single tree and a dirt path that spilt two ways. Just as the audience was able to enjoy the scenery, the lights flickered off. The crowd gasped in unison wondering if there had been a technical issue.

Then a song started and a single light turned on. A boy popped onto the stage within the ray of light. He stood on one side of the tree. The group watching stared in awe and delight. The boy wore an odd assortment of clothing, and had upon his head two animal ears.

He sang a song, beginning his story. Then another light turned on. At the opposite end of the tree a young girl came along. She sang a line facing her back to the tree trunk. The song was fast paced but filled with longing as the two voices blended together in a perfect symphony.

Smiles spread through the crowd as they watched the actors on stage. Children and their parents sat glued to their seats, focusing hard on the two. A blonde girl couldn't tear her eyes away for even a second. Her grandmother chuckled at the interest the girl was showing to such a simple display.

The actress dropped a red apple near the tree, and ran off the edge of the stage. The boy at the other side lifted the apple sadly. Claws adorned his hands, making him look more animalistic. Lights dimmed the song changing slightly the girl returned to the tree tears splayed across her face.

Children in the audience laughed at the display others gasped, some lost interest. The blonde clutched a hand to her chest as if she could feel the actors' pain. Though the song was fast, the words she only understood some of had captured her tiny heart.

'So sad that they can't reach each other' she thought, drops of water trickling down her cheeks.

She watched as the boy, the different boy desperately tried to reach for the crying girl on the opposite side of the tree. He couldn't touch her, fearful that she would hate him. Rin shook with tears as the stage lights turned off and the audience of children burst into applause. Sweet Ann glanced down noticing the notable frown on her darling granddaughter's face.

"Oh Rin, It's just a play"

Rin couldn't calm herself feeling so terrible for the actors who couldn't touch. The four year old cried her heart out. Ann pulled her into a hug trying to sooth her with light caresses of her hair. The room began to clear, parents and children leaving for refreshments. The two remained in their seats as people bustled about the stage area cleaning up.

"Excuse me? Is she alright?" a voice asked.

Ann looked up from the child in her arms. "She's just a little emotional about the characters." She answered.

"Oh, well why doesn't she come back here and meet them? Maybe that will cheer her up?"

The woman smiled as Ann peered down at Rin, whispering to her. Rin blinked drying her eyes and nodded. Ann smiled softly and lifted the girl to her feet. The woman held out a hand offering to guide Rin. The three walked along the path of chairs up to the stage stairs, and through the dark curtains.

Workers bustled about packing up their supplies. The woman led the two further in, up to a chest in which a young woman was packing a pair of dolls. She looked up as they approached and smiled at Rin.

"Why Hello there, what brings you back here?"

Rin shyly hid behind Ann's skirt, clinging to it with one hand. The new woman looked up at the guide sharing a quiet conversation. Finally she looked back at Rin.

"I see that this story has really affected you, could you tell me why?"

Rin glanced at Ann before speaking in a soft voice "It was so sad, they couldn't touch each other, and they wanted to so much."

The woman gave her a sympathetic smile, and then looked into the box again. "Would you like to see them?"

Rin's curiosity grew and she released Ann's skirt. The woman beckoned her forward and Rin took a cautious step. In the woman's hands were the actors, two puppets. Rin glanced up from them confused. She hadn't expected them to be dolls.

"See it's only a story no need to get so upset." The puppeteer told her.

Rin lifted a hand gently touching the dolls 'skin'. Taking the boys hand she linked it with the girls and held it out to the three adults. They exchanged glances, with wide eyes. The puppeteer took them back.

"Every story needs a happy ending" Rin simply said, smiling fondly at the puppets.

The adults burst into laughter. "She's so adorable!" "How cute!"

Rin tilted her head at the two unknown woman as Ann guided her back to the seating area. She couldn't help but look back at the stage. She re-wrote a happier end to their story as she walked out of the theatre with her grandmother, posing a question to her.

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"Don't dolls have feelings too?"


Chapter 9

"Ne, Annie-Chan?..." Rin mumbled reluctant to open her eyes. Her blonde hair spilled over her cheeks like a silken curtain. She lifted an arm and rubbed her eyes with the back of her hand. Still, she didn't open them. She was extremely tired from the previous events at Gumi's house.

With a light yawn, she stretched but found herself restricted. She moved her arm again, finding it pinned to her side. Confused, her eyes snapped open and widened. In front of her was not her pillow, blankets, or futon but…

"KYAAAAA!" Rin screamed struggling in the tight hold.

Len opened his eyes at the sound of his owner's alarmed voice. He jolted up seeing her panicked form in front of him. How he hoped she was too tired to notice him moving. Len tried to still his breathing, his eyes casting curious glances around the area.

"Wait, how did I get back?"

Len could only remember being trapped under debris in that familiar alleyway. Rin gasped causing Len to divert his attention to her. She was frozen, kneeling on her bed with a hand pressed to her mouth.

"Rin?"

She gasped again. "H-How do you know my name?!"

Len's gasp mirrored Rin's "Y-You can hear me?!"

Rin didn't speak but gave an almost undetectable nod. Len didn't know how to react. How should he feel?

Worried?

Afraid?

Excited?

A jumble of emotions rumbled through him like an indecisive storm. He couldn't speak, terrified of the circumstances. If Rin could hear him, then obviously she could see him moving. Was it the end of the world? She looked so afraid and confused. Len wanted to do something to help her. And then Rin was gone.

She pushed herself off the bed and turned, running from the room.

"W-Wait! Rin!"

He could hear the front door open and slam shut. Len's expression pained. He scared her…he FREAKING scared her. He didn't know what to do.

No…

Yes he did. Len stood up. He wasn't going to lose her. He'd find her and show her, help her understand. She'd accept him of course, she had promised. Smiling at the thought, Len took a step forward and promptly collapsed over himself.

The blankets had tangled around his legs, which he found odd. He twisted to see around him and pry them off. Len nearly screamed.

These were not the legs he thought he had. Pulling them free he took a closer look, then at his paws….no HANDS?!

Len had hands! Wasn't a bear disqualified from being human? (1) How was this possible? He finally understood why Rin ran from him. It wasn't because her bear was talking, it was because an unknown person had suddenly appeared in her room.

'So she doesn't hate me'

He smiled, sure of it. His worry ebbed away replaced by curiosity. Using the bed to support him, Len struggled to his new feet. He collapsed backwards, onto the covers almost automatically. After a few more attempts, he almost gave up. Why couldn't he move properly? He was always able to before. Then the thought dawned on him.

Of course, being human, he'd have to calculate all the extra weight he didn't have as a bear. Being smarter than your average teddy, (2) Len was highly capable of doing as much. He practiced using the new legs, testing his weight before he was finally able to stand still.

He put one foot in front of the other, and began walking (Though a little shaky) towards the door of the room. Rin was not in sight, though currently she was not his destination. Len turned, trailing a hand along the wall to keep balance. He continued walking until he reached the door near Rin's.

He pushed it open, marveling at his strength for a moment before stepping onto the tiled floor. In the room he found what he was looking for, a mirror raised above a sink. Clenching a fist, and closing his eyes he stepped in front of it. Slowly he opened them, afraid he might look like a monster.

The result both shocked and pleased him. He wasn't a monster at all, actually he looked…pretty good. He had blonde hair, which was messy in the front. Bright cerulean eyes were perfectly aligned, on a perfectly flawless pale face. His pink lips twitched forming a smile as he saw he bore close resemblance to Rin. Heck, they could be mirror reflections of each other.

He tousled his hair, getting it out of his eyes, and then ran his hand to the back of his head, turning a bit to see how long his hair was. Tilting his head he processed the image. He had SO MUCH hair. His eyes darted around the small room, for something to solve the issue.

His sight fell on a hair band lying on the side of the sink. Len reached forward and picked it up, stretching it between two fingers. Recalling a commercial he had seen about tying up one's hair, he did his best to copy it from memory.

The result was a tiny pony tail at the back of his head. His smile widened as he was satisfied with his new appearance. He could spot the white teeth, lining the inside of his mouth, it made him grin more. Len then took a look at his clothes.

They were yellow like his fur had been as a bear. A hoodie and a pair of shorts were both covered in slightly off color patches, placed precisely where Rin had sewed him up as a bear. He tugged at the sleeves, adjusting himself to the feel of clothing. Peering down at the yellow sneakers, tied to his feet, he remembered what he wanted to do before he grew curious.

"Find Rin"

He spoke his thoughts aloud as he left the small room.


Rin fell onto her knees worn-out from running. She panted, coughing a few times. Her heart raced as she took a few gasping breaths, trying to calm down. She thought back to the scene in her room.

'Who was that boy? Why was he in my room? How did he know my name?'

She grew dizzy with the thoughts, nearly to the point of fainting on the pavement.

"Rin-Chan?"

She looked up at the sound of her name, to see Gumi peering down at her worriedly. Gumi had her hands set on her knees as she knelt close to Rin inspecting her with raised eyebrows.

"Whatcha just sitting there for?"

Rin came to her senses blinking at Gumi, "oh, It's just...no- nothing"

Gumi didn't believe her, she knelt closer making Rin flinch and back up with a nervous sweatdrop.

"Really, Nothing"

Rin nodded trying to avoid Gumi's piercing eyes. "Y-yes" she squeaked.

Gumi's gave her an empty look then smiled with a small chuckle. "Nothing makes you leave the house in what you were wearing yesterday?"

Rin glanced at her disheveled clothing she had indeed worn the previous day, and then fell asleep in. She flushed embarrassed and tugged at her hair in an attempt to hide her face.

"I-I..."

Gumi stared at her with concern, then sighed. "Why don't we and go and get you some different clothes. Kay?"

Rin stared at her with big eyes, full of confusion. "U-uhm"

Gumi took hold of Rin's arm and lifted her to her feet. "And, you can tell me whatever is making act all jittery, ne?"

Rin didn't answer allowing herself to be pulled by Gumi. She glanced back over her shoulder at the way she had come. Nothing but silence was behind her. She wondered what had become of that boy, and who he was.


Len walked down familiar streets learning quickly how to balance properly. Even though it wasn't something he had never seen, everything was "new "to him. Was a bear THAT different from a human? The sun seemed so much brighter, every sound so much louder.

Yes, It all seemed New to Len. It was different walking rather than being carried. Though Len had to admit, he missed Rin's shoulder. Len halted remembering the feel of Rin's arms around him, how he longed for that again.

He wondered where she could have gone. School, wasn't an option right,? since it was break currently. Where else was there?... Park? Market? He only knew places Rin had taken him. Would he need to check them all? Or...could she be elsewhere?

Len's arms dropped to his side 'How am I going to find her?.'

"Onii-chan?"(3)

A voice started Len, making him realize he had been stopped for a long time, just standing there.

"Hello~"

A hand waved in front of his face from below. He backed away from it and looked to the owner. A little girl wearing tiny pig tails in her brown hair, was waving. He stared unspeaking.

"Hey, Onii-chan you ok?" the girl frowned.

Len blinked staring at the human talking to him. He had never been in the situation before, as he had always been just a teddy bear. A crease formed between the child's brow and she pouted her bottom lip.

"Can you talk?"

"Yes" Len finally decided to speak. The innocence in the girl's eyes reminded him of Rin.

"What's wrong? Why're you just standing here?"

""I'm looking for someone?"

"You're saying that like it's a question." The girl stated.

Len hesitated. "I have to...go" He turned when the girl suddenly yelled out.

"W-WAIT! Maybe I can help you" He looked at her waiting for her to continue. "I've been standing here all morning" she indicated a bus stop. "I saw a lot of people come by here."

Len felt a surge of interest and he turned fully around to face her. "blonde girl, really big..uh cute white bow."

Len's cheeks heated up as he heard his own words. The girl placed a finger on her chin thinking. Len tried to wait patiently but the suspense was killing him (not literally). At last she spoke.

"I did see someone like that, she was running fast like she was late for something?"

"WHERE!?"

The girl jumped at Len's sudden raise of voice, but pointed in a direction. Immediately Len took off.

"Hey wait a-" He was out of her sight in a second. She crossed her arms, pouting childishly "How rude." Sighing she returned to her bus stop.

Rin spun around modeling an orange dress for her friend. Gumi clapped her hands complimenting her. "Perfect! Let's add that to the others shall we?"

Rin blushed holding the cloth at her chest. "Wh-Wha! It's too much Gumi-Chan!"

"Nonsense, it's a birthday gift!"

Rin couldn't object to Gumi's smile and kindness (though she had tried many times). Sighing she gave in and stepped back into the dressing room to gather the other items. After she came out, Gumi paid for them. Gumi was still wondering what had happened to make Rin so out of breath. She was waiting for the right moment to ask.

"How about we go to a cafe Rin-Chan?"

Rin blinked and looked up from the folds of the dress she had been playing with. "A ca-cafe?" her voice squeaked slightly making Gumi chuckle.

"Yeah to get something to eat aren't you hungry?"

Rin suddenly became aware that she didn't eat anything. She laughed nervously. Gumi took her hand and together they ran off. As they exited the store a blonde boy in a yellow hoodie turned a corner that led to the shop.


Oliver flexed his fingers, looking up from the computer screen after a long time. He turned to the notepad on the corner of his desk, and jotted down some quick words. His eyes opened wide and he lifted his notebook to cover them, reading them from only inches away. He stood and in one motion dropped the notebook and went to his door.

He remembered, vaguely, having heard Rin scream. But how much earlier, he didn't know. He bent close to the door and removed a pencil led. (4) He then picked up a contraption from his shelf and slid it under the door. With a few reflecting devices he was able to see a clear view of the hall.

Finding it empty, Oliver removed the mechanism and replaced it on his shelf, next to James. He opened the door just enough to slip out of and did so kneeling to replace the pencil led and piece of paper. Oliver stopped, listening hard. He was met with only silence. He took a step then peeked over his shoulder.

Seeing the empty hall, he rotated slowly around and continued walking. But...after a few steps he spun. His eyes scanned every corner of the hall. He took a few steps backwards then flipped around again, scanning the other side of the long hallway.

Oliver continued all the way down in that fashion. Once he reached the stairs he inspected the railing, and then the actual stair. Slowly he proceeded down them. But then he turned thinking he had distinctly heard something. He took the last few steps at a run.

He gasped for breath, holding onto his sides in pain as he looked at the banister with an odd smile. Nothing was on the stairs. Rubbing his temples he turned to go to his little sister's room. He felt dizzy, amazed at how easily tired he had become just from running. He didn't have problems with athletics before.

When he saw the sliding door was wide open anxiety flowed through him, fueling him to get there faster.

10 feet away

He stood from the wall he had nearly collapsed on, his breath coming quick.

6 feet

His palms started sweating, his lips twitching.

3 feet

His breath was coming so fast he could hear it.

1 foot

He was shaking, literally. He almost thought it was an earthquake.

3 inches

His other eye could be seen through his matted, sweaty hair.

0 inches

He grabbed the edge of the wall and threw himself into the doorway with a wild cry. only to find the room...

'Empty?'


Rin could have sworn she was being followed. She had that sort of paranoid feeling one gets in a scary movie. Gumi didn't appear to have noticed, as they went from place to place. They stopped to sit on some benches, but right after Gumi hopped back up. Rin glanced at her but was waved back down as she tried to stand.

"Want some cocoa Rin-Chan. Hey I'll go get some!"

And with that she ran away. Rin plopped back down onto the bench and the feeling of I'm-being-followed returned. Rin bit her lip clenching a bag Gumi had given her, that was shaped like an orange. She willed her hands to stop shaking, then froze hearing the snap of a twig. She spun around and spotted a bush just behind the bench she was on.

Fear and curiosity took her and she found herself standing. Curiosity was winning. She circled around the bench heading (slowly) towards the bush.

"RIN-CHAN I'M BACK!~"

Gumi called from a short distance. Rin jumped then ran back to the bench for Gumi's arrival which happened a split second later. Gumi handed her a hot cup of something (cocoa) and rushed her off again.

From behind the bush, Len stood up. He watched the two leave and frowned.

Sure Gumi had run Rin around practically the whole town, but she had a plan. That was to get Rin to tell her what was wrong earlier. She noticed automatically that Rin wasn't herself again when they stopped to drink the cocoa. What she didn't expect was for Rin to confess.

"Gumi-Chan! I keep feeling like I'm being followed!"

Gumi took a choking sip of her drink, then swallowed glad the liquid had at least cooled down, and looked at her blonde friend. "F-Followed, What do you mean?"

Rin tugged at her hair, "Like followed, everywhere. Everywhere we've been going today, the store and the restaurant, the fruit stand and the little candy shop, even the street and the bench! And And this morning there was a-"

Rin cut off mid speech her mouth agape. Her eyes doubled in size as she stared ahead. She pointed, her finger shaking her expression changing to fear. Gumi followed her finger as Rin covered her face.

"What're you pointing at Rin-Chan?"

Rin pulled her hands from her face and looked at the spot that was now empty. "But there was a- the bo- I mean there- I-"

Gumi had a confused look as she took hold of Rin's stretched out arm. "You feeling okay Rin-Chan?" She peered at her with concern in her eyes. Rin slowly met hers.

"I ...thought I saw a bear" Rin whispered, saying the first thing that came to mind to cover it up.

"A Bear? In Tokyo?" Gumi chuckled. "Silly Rin-Chan, come on, Let's go and get a rest somewhere okay?"

She started to pull Rin who glanced back up at the previously occupied spot. She had really thought she had seen the boy from that morning.


Len didn't know what to do. He had found Rin, obviously, but he didn't have a chance to go up to her. That girl Gumi was with her. Plus, the look on Rin's face, that scared-to-death look was really hurting him. He was partly afraid to go up to her.

The last time he had seen her, he ducked behind a trash can when Gumi had turned. When he gathered the courage to stand up again, Rin was gone. Len sighed.

"It's like last night all over again"

Len walked randomly, hands in pockets. Everything hurt so much more now that he was human. He had that thing called a 'heart' he had seen on TV now. He couldn't find her, or in this case catch her, no matter how hard he tried. He attempted to talk to that voice, but got not answer.

'Figures, now you go away'

A group of children ran past him playing a game on a huge set of stairs. He indistinctly remembered seeing it, maybe on TV again.

"Oof!"

He hit something or someone.

"I'm sorry..."

The voice was high pitched and extremely quiet. His head snapped up recognizing it. She looked very distressed he felt the need to help her. She was alone...wait... Alone?

NOW WAS HIS CHANCE!

"Rin!"

She lifted her eyes from her wringing hands and froze.


Gumi ran along the street looking everywhere. She lost Rin in a huge crowd when their hands had been pulled apart. As it turned out no one had seen her. Gumi mentally scolded herself for losing Rin, especially when she was so troubled.

"Gosh I'm a bad friend"

She continued searching and asking everyone on the street. People, it seemed were too into their busy lives to notice the disappearance of a girl with a BIG white bow. She thought it would have been an obvious give away.

"I'm going to have to buy her a cell phone" she told herself as she ran.


Their azure eyes met. They took in each other's features. The similarity was astounding. For a moment all they did was stare at one another, like looking into a mirror. Then Len braved a step forward, though they were already close. Rin made no movement.

"Rin it's me...Len"

"..."

"I... I'm sorry for scaring you this morning"

"..."

"I don't know how it happened"

"..."

"I didn't know how to tell you..."

"..."

"Rin?"

She was still quiet, Len became increasingly worried. He watched her closely for any sort of reaction. "Rin, Hello?"

"..."

"Rin I-" he touched her shoulder.

"Len..."

She finally spoke, her voice was barely a whisper. Len perked up at his name.

"Is a bear..." she finished monotonely.

Len nodded feeling relieved she had spoken. "I was but somehow I became-"

He cut off, tears had filled the girl's eyes and were streaming down her cheeks. The look on her face was pure horror. She was crying in fear

OF HIM

Len backed up, rejection, sadness, longing, pain, and regret all rushing through him. He had made her cry, and she was giving him such a face.

'So you can't accept me'

He took another step back

'I only wanted'

And another

'You to smile'

The ground disappeared under him. He found himself falling back. Snippets of memories flashed before his eyes as the Rin above him got smaller. He just remembered there had been stairs behind him. Everything was moving slowly, sound was on mute.

"I don't want to die"

He felt himself hit the ground and all went black.


Rin had seen the scene in slow motion. Each step the boy took as he looked like he was having an inner battle. When His foot slipped on the step, the look of confusion and panic he had as he fell. She saw it all. She felt it was her fault, indirectly.

Despite her fright before she knew she needed to do something. Instincts kicked in and she started running down the stairs, shocked at the distance the boy had fallen. The next thing she saw shocked her. There wasn't any blood...The boy well... wasn't...

She dropped to her knees covering her mouth in regret. She brought her hands forward and touched his head.

"He was telling the truth"

She was convinced now, having seen it happen right before her eyes. She wouldn't think it was possible. She lifted him and hugged his broken form.

"I'm sorry Len"

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Shorter chapter! Late update! I'm SO SO SO SO SORRY for such a late update and lame chapter. UGH I'll try to be quicker! The next chapter will be better I swear!

Review Replies

So many in one chapter :O

OtakuHeart(Guest)-san: That is correct this chapter is dedicated to you! Thankyuu for the review and read. Here is the update

annamydoll(Guest)-san: Your user name reminds me of Len's song "bloody my doll" Sonika is right! Thankyuu for the review and read.

Blackrockshooter(Guest)-san: uh... your review confuses me... are you telling Leon to die... or me? :O I'm sorry either way! I don't mean to make the characters so bad! I don't hate them. They just fit the roles I came up with. Sorry sorry . Thankyuu for reading anyways and reviewing.

MaddyTheAwesome-San: Oh? you know banzaipro too. :D The voice... hmm will be explained... but not too soon. Adds more mystery ne? Luka is the student body president. But good guess. Here is the next chapter. Thankyuu for reviewing.

AliasStars-San: WOAH long review again. :D kay

A) I have heard in other fics with Gakupo as Gumi's brother as well, but I wanted her to have a big sister. So Sonika was it. (Because she has green hair xD)

B) reluctance and conflict? well I wanted to show readers that Lily does have a heart and isn't as cruel as her parents. She cares for Oliver, but her own value to her family is tested.

C) yes poor Oliver. I really love that character. Oliver's cruelty? I'm confused.

D) Yes Len is learning that. Don't worry Rin loves Len too much to neglect him for real.

Here is the update thanks for the exciting review!

KimmyG15-San: Your friend? may I ask who? Thankyuu for the read and review. And thankyuu to your friend for referring you here! Here is the update.

Mitsu-San: Yes the chapter 8 was dedicated to you! I'm happy I made you happy (that must mean you weren't before I'M SORRY!)

Kiyoteru was correct! Hmm I love all of Neru-San's songs but I heard Abstract Nonsense first.

I will keep Rin that way!

With or without eyebrow the face is still cute! I had to go to my e-mail to see it my phone fails showing me it. o(_ _)o

This reply is long as well xD Oliver is being ignored I shall write more on that soon.

Len as a human x3 I have to congratulate you on that! You were absolutely correct! We seem to think alike

You pat his head alright then...

Len: -blinks at the unknown person, while trying to remain still like a real teddy bear-

Yeah he doesn't do much sorry DX

Thankyuu for the review!

ownitlikeaboss-San: Thankyuu for reviewing! Good that the chapters are longer? well yes, but not too long. xD Something that starts with an S? lol Sonika? Here's the update

Imonz(Guest)-San: Aww I love that feeling too.(I also like when a reviewer replies to my review reply. If that makes sense orz) I like to reply to all my reviews in the chapter. Thankyuu for reading and reviewing. Yes Possessive Len is awesome!

BlackRockShooter(Guest)-San: another confusing review? wha? well I can't do that I already have the whole story planned. You don't seem to like Oliver much O.o Interesting idea though. Might I suggest writing something yourself?

Clavemien Nigram Rosa-San: Yes Len is insecure. Erase existence? of Rin's parents? or...Oliver is a bit obsessed yes. He is smart and likes to understand why things happen, guess you would say logical. It's driving him crazy. Yes, the parents will do whatever they can to stay on top. I wasn't very clear but Oliver wasn't doing above amazing in school anymore, so they got fearful that they would lose reputation. (which is why they are rejecting him). Rin and Gumi will have more friend time together. Here's the update! thanks for the review!

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Rinny-Chan-San: WOW !~ Hehe Thankyuu for reviewing and reading! Here is the update

Pink Vixen-San: My story is sad? and beautiful? Why thankyuu! ^^ I will try to keep that up. Thankyuu for the review and read.

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Footnotes

(1) Disqualified Human- or Human Disqualification, a reference to NERU's song Ningen shikkaku. Told ya I wanted to put some NERU song references in :D

(2) Almost wrote "smarter than your average bear" xD yogi bear ne?

(3) Onii-chan- the girl uses this term to refer to a boy older than her, she's not actually calling him her brother

(4) pencil led- a reference to Death Note. Oliver has the same trap set on his door as Light does.

Constructive criticism is welcome, but please don't flame me. I'm new to this

Review please! Please! PLEASE

(I'm almost to 50 :O )

Thankyuu

P.S. What Vocaloid song is featured in the play at the beginning of the chapter? HINT it has a long name in English.

AND/OR

Which Vocaloid does Len meet in this chapter (that hasn't been in other chapters)?


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