Hey it's MoNoChRoMaDdiCt! Sorry to inform you but this is NOT a full chapter

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Merely a preview of it (I guess you could call it that)

Answer to last QOC: SuperHero by Nem

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Read at the end for explanation please!

Disclaimer: THE PLOT IS MINE! xD but nothing else is Dx

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Chapter 14 Preview

Men and Women dressed in dark uniforms lined the usually empty street. Blue lights flashed brightly, illuminating the darkened faces of the crowd. They all stood behind the yellow tape, demanding an explanation. Only one thing they knew.

Someone had died that night

The smell of blood was evident as a stretcher was wheeled across the pavement to the truck. Red lights of the ambulance flashed across the covered remains of a body. A pale hand lay limply over the side. It could just be seen under the white covering.

The crowd gasped as the stretcher was pushed along. Gossip spread among them. No one wanted to believe it. It had to be a prank, but the stretcher was proof.

"Another one and so soon after the last"

"Is that the whole family now?"

"I wonder if someone has a grudge against them"

Eager faces watched as the stretcher was then moved carefully into the back of the ambulance. Red light mixed with the blue as the curious the crowd continued to watch. They were trying to get a sign of who it was. They only knew that it was a wealthy family, THE wealthy family.

The parents had been killed just about a month or so ago, or so the people had heard on the news, or by town gossip. It was hushed up quickly, everyone knew though…

No one had found the murderer.

As the ambulance doors slammed shut, a shout was heard from the house. A few of the officers, and much of the crowd turned to the direction. Everyone watched with wide eyes as a second stretcher was wheeled through the front door. Quickly the crowd covered their faces to block out the revolting stench. Coughing and gagging, the front row of people pushed the crowd back.

The people backed away, but not too far. They still wanted to see and hear what was going on. The second stretcher like the first was wheeled down the side walk. Unlike the first the second's occupant was covered by a dark colored cloth.

However as the paramedics turned the stretcher, one of the wheels hit a stray rock and the entire stretcher was jostled. As the paramedics tried to stop the body from falling, the sheet slipped. It was now apparent as to why the cloth was so darkly colored. People gasped in horror as they saw the mangled corpse underneath.

It was torn apart. Every inch, a bloody mess. It was a horrifying sight that the crowd couldn't bear to look at. The once had been beautiful girl was now a reverse. Her outside now resembled the horrible inside she always had. No one wanted to look at such a girl. No one cared for such a person.

Quickly the paramedics got the sheet back over her and busied themselves with shoving the stretcher into the ambulance; they took much less care, making getting it out of sight a priority.

The officers began trying to clear off the people telling them to go back to their homes. The crowd responded by demanding more information but was quickly denied by the officers who shooed them away. The smell still remained, floating in the air like a haunting memory.

Afraid to resort to violence the officers shouted.

"Just watch the news! Go home"

Deciding it was the best thing to do, the crowd slowly began to lessen and lessen. Once the road was finally clear of people, and the ambulance had driven off. Only a few officers remained. The blue lights flickered, eerily over the large house.

Lastly a tall white haired person stepped over the threshold clasping a tiny bag shut one-handed as they spoke rapidly on a small phone with the other.

"Yes it's just like the other case. No finger prints, no evidence at all. Just two people brutally murdered. This is indeed a strange case."

The figures mouth twitched slightly, almost as if trying to form a smile as they walked past the officers. Pressing the phone closer to their ear, the figure grew further and further from the flashing lights. White hair nearly hid the phone from curious officer's sights.

"Don't doubt me, I will solve this case. As I have with any other." The person spoke with rushed tone.

"I know you can Detective" a muffled voice said from the other side of the line.

Smiling the white haired detective clicked the phone off and approached a small car, nearly hidden amongst the police vehicles. On the front seat sat a file, the detective leafed through it once with a blank expression before placing it back down, and putting the small bag on top of it. The officers watched as the detective drove out of sight, so fast it was as if the person had never been there.

A little down the road, the headlights passed quickly over a large window. The curtains were ever so slightly pulled back. Sonika looked into the dark of the night her hand clenched on the pale curtains.

Beside her Rin slept clinging to a yellow and patched bear. She had a calm expression. Sonika let the folds of the curtains fall back in place. She knelt and brushed the girl's hair from her forehead, caressing her cheek.

She wondered if her decision was right. Rin could not go home, she couldn't know.

It would be too much for her to handle.

It was to protect her.

Everyone had agreed not to tell her.

It was the police's idea, it couldn't be wrong. Right?

Sonika didn't want to see that innocence disappear. Rin had already been through so much. She didn't deserve this.

No child deserved this.

Sonika did not want Rin to lose her smile However, she couldn't help but feel as if the decision was wrong. Deep inside her she felt a huge regret. But she brushed it aside as she draped a blanket over Rin's shoulders. Rin smiled in her sleep and wrapped her arms tighter around the bear.

Sonika smiled as well, but only lightly. She stepped back flicking off the light switch. Taking one last glance at Rin, Sonika but her lip in worry. With a single sigh she turned away to walk down the hall wondering how long she could keep this up, how long she'd have to lie to protect people. And…

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Could Rin really remain naïve forever?


GASP the detective is BACK :O Whats gonna happen now?!

Sorry dear readers, but that's all I got for now, I wrote this during my school's spring break :D I would have been done faster if I didn't get sick.

So sorry to say but I'm going on a TWO month HIATUS due to a play that I'm in IRL. It takes up like ALL my time. I really feel terrible not posting a full chapter. But, I will update in the end of April (If i'm lucky) or Mid May. So very sorry. DX


But here are the review replies to last chapter!

Sourpatchkid03: Yes that day is just a day. A simple stupid day. Thanks for the review~

Retorica-San: Congrats you didn't get logged out! Hmm… is that so it logged you out? That's odd, maybe has a ghost :D…Yes the glasses boy was Len in glasses, I wanted to see if people would mention it. Yup dead Lily! And sadly dead Oliver…I'm wondering when someone is going to freak out at me for killing him D: Yes I wanted to make the readers "forget" Oliver so I could have him show up later. I gave out hints of what he was doing, or not doing. Example the full bowls indicated Oliver wasn't eating. Waiting for the next death? Really!? Well there won't be one too soon, but there will be more! That chapter was a challenge for me to write.

Nem's Superhero you say. ABSOLUTELY CORRECT! You get the dedication. I haven't mentioned Garbage Parade yet, but I will. It's a Neru song after all. ;3

AliasStars-San: It's Nem's Superhero, hint the red cape and white suit. I am satisfied that Lily is dead too. It's okay short reviews are loved too. Any review is loved. I'm just happy people are reading. Thanks for the review!

Mochimoshi1234-San: That answer is correct. I like your description of the song btw. Yes it's not a Kagamine song if there is no dying. Someone dies, usually Rin…or Len.

Lengthyness can be a word for whoever wants it too, and thanks. GRAMMAR MISTAKES! I know DX I didn't check over that chapter for any mistakes, and I don't have a beta. So there will be mistakes. Constructive Criticism is welcome though!

I make you want to put footnotes as well. AWESOME! They are very helpful and I like writing or reading chapters chuck full o' them.

So you've been reading before? Well nice to meet you then, and thankyuu for the review!

xXShocking Mist Xx-San: Yes yes that is the song XD In some ways Lily's death can be a yay. Oliver's is not though. Who is next? You'll see :3 predicting the end huh? Well I can't reveal a thing. I looked up that game its…interesting.

StargazingMiracl-San: Ah, the times when we don't want to log in. Know the feel. Thankyuu for the information on Valentines and White Day!

Emily the Soaring Jaybird-San: Yes it's super Hero indeed. I'm starting to think I made that way too easy to figure out. Thanks for the review!

Violet-rash-San: You cried? Gah I feel bad that my story makes people feel sad. Sorry bout that. Thankyuu so much for reading and reviewing. I wouldn't really call it beautiful but thankyuu. I will try to write well

And you reviewed twice, you read it all night? Wow…more romance… Oh I can try but it's not actually a romance story. But I will try. It does seem like including it would be beneficial. Idk about a kiss…I've no experience with writing that. But Len is starting to like her more…it's something :D Yes, Rin did say she will accept him. Thankyuu for the review!

Len-chibi-San: Yes, Super Hero is it. Your user name makes me think of a fanart I saw recently.

Chibilove-San: You didn't notice I updated XD that's funny.

Yes, according to the song. Oliver had to go. Yes, Len really did not mean to kill Oliver. If Oliver could speak he'd say it was an accident. Yes, Len knew that Oliver was a good person, and he was okay with him. How Rin will find out? Or if…Rin will find out?

Yup that's the songs name. Next question I'm making harder WAY too many people got it right XD that's actually good thou. With the next update if you don't notice it's ok. Thankyuu for the review

OtakuHeart-San: Obligatory? Really? Thanks for the information!

Tsubasa Tsukino 88-San: so you're Imonz-San. That's a lot easier to type XD Rui and Rei; hmmm I have an idea for them now actually. So I will try. Yeah DX I'm not happy about my updating schedule. I should have more time during summer break! I'm hoping to return to weekly or biweekly updates. YES! Much better than discontinuing which I would never do.

Sheshe-AnimeLuver-San: By the first few lines? Really? I wonder if everyone else got it that quickly. You might be the first to get the answer eventually. Crying? I feel bad for that, but I guess it's a good thing as well. I will keep trying to improve.

GeminiCross-San: Why do they hate her? Who are you referring to? Her parents, Lily, the class? The bullies? People in general? Well I can answer all of that. Her parents find her an embarrassment, Leon liked to take out frustrations by harming her. Miriam who always wants to look good saw her as someone who would get in the way. So she started to block out her existence. Lily, was because she was always afraid Rin would surpass her and she was jealous that Rin was liked for who she was rather than who she pretended to be like Lily. The class, followed suit with the bullies, to look cool and to gain sensei's attention. The Bullies, have their reasons I will get into further later.

Lily died so the chapter was awesome? I'm wondering how many people wanted her dead. Yeah, I will miss Oliver as well.

Darkflower123-San: Yup! You are correct. There is a Legend of Zelda Rap? O.o I must hear that! Thanks for reading!

another1270-Chan: Thanks for the review! And I shall call you "Chan" from now on then.

Guest-San: That song is right! Thanks for reading!

ownitlikeaboss-San: Lily be ded indeed XD Len didn't mean it, he's sorry! Well that chapter was my longest chapter, so I would understand it taking a while to read. Yes, that is the correct song. That is a nice part of the song. Len is a hero, in a sense, in this story.

Yukari Wada-San: You listened to the song while reading? The entire time? WOW! That's cool! I listen on repeat when I type it, I feel it enables me to feel the story more, and write a bit better. You're from Indonesia? I'm Chinese Filipino and American. You're English is just fine. An epilogue? Well I am thinking of having one but the story is only half done. Probably will have one…since you asked nicely XD

M. Luka-San: I think everyone loves Rin, I'd be shocked if someone didn't she's the type of person you love instantly. Including the one I based her off of. :3 Well, her family is now gone. So they can't hurt her anymore. Thankyuu for reading! And the review!

Chemical Emotion-San: Your user name...Love that song, by Gumi right? Yup Superhero was the name of the song. Thanks for reading!

And Thankyuu for reading, favoriting, following: Dolce Pianissimo, Rheina-chan, Yukari Wada, , punkinprincess2, Haulau, Chemical Emotion and anyone else who read!


Again sorry for the Hiatus I will update soon as I can!

Thankyuu to everyone who reads or clicks on this story. It really makes my day. You're all wonderful! ^W^

No Question of the Chapter this time but Feel free to ask me questions

If you want ^^


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