(A/N: Isn't this story awful? Poor Brokenstar! :(

I'd say, he's forced to become Empresssucks mate.

Anyway, I've got up through Chapter 14 written,

Fourteen chapters of twenty, we only have nine out of twenty done.

so I'll be able to post these pretty quickly. I don't know how long this story will actually be.

I think Spades said it was twenty chapters.

I'm thinking around 20-ish chapters.

Yeah.

Now on with the story!

Tank u 4 teh nice reveiws! Dey mak me so happi!)

No one cares.

Good reviews are nice.

Chapter 8

The Reveel

"I am teh true father of Empressglitter's kites!" Brokenstar sed.

Way to take the initiative and refuse to let another tome take claim.

Moraltsar gaped. "Is dis true?" he asked.

Empresspaw noded. "It is. He is my kits' fadder."

And the lies come out. See, she's not perfect at all.

"Noooo!" Nerdpaw cryed. He leeped at Brkoenstar and scratched his noose. He diied.

...a scratch on the nose killed him?

That is just ridiculous. Seriously ridiculous.

"Brokne-baby!" Empressglitter cried. "How can u be dead?"

Well, he was already dead. He died in ThunderClan, remember? So he was killed while he was dead by Nerdpaw.

I say he's lucky to get out so quickly.

Hopstar didnt car aboot Empressglitter, so he took Meanclan home.

Smart. Though it was a lame and quick Gathering.

Empresspaw waked bak 2 Perfectclan sadly. Her life wus so horrible!

Oh, really?

You're making my life horrible, Empressglitter.

"Moralstar" he meowed. "I have 2 be leader know. Step down!"

Seriously? Like that?

What is with everyone and wanting to become leader?! It's a horrible position!

"I cant" the leader sad. "I don't want 2 bee a warrior agin."

I do want to be just a warrior again. Empressglitter, here, you can take my place!

NOPE!

Empressglitter wus angry. She deserved to be leeder!

Sorry, but that's a load of foxdung.

Her 1 true luv had just ded!

What happened to Moralstar and Nerdpaw being your love?

"Mak me leader! Starclan wants me 2 be the leader!"

Ugh...I hate it when StarClan decides who to be leader.

"You will be leeder one day, but dat day is not 2day" Moralstar sad.

Yeah, Empressglitter, that day isn't today.

"Den u are not my mat anymore!" Empresskit yowled. She stalked away form him.

Smart,.Empresskit, and yes, you're a kit again, finally left Moralstar, maybe he'll regain braincells.

Nerdpaw smiled. "u r still my mat right?"

Empresspaw nodded. " r my only make."

What about Brokenstar?

"Den I will be the kites' father!"

"Oak. But now I have to work on my plan 2 becom leeder of Perfectclan," she sed.

Wait...is that the bells of rebellion I hear? Is she going to revolt against PerfectClan and steal leadership Tigerstar style?

I think I'm starting to feel sorry for PerfectClan...

Then…THERE WAS PIANO!

Who's playing the piano? Cats are not supposed to have pianos in their clans. It's a Twoleg thing.

(A/N: dun Dun DUN! A piano! JK...it's pain.

Pain and Piano. What's a Piano?

Flame away!)

Why would anyone want fire to burn their things?

So much to learn, Cometblaze, there is still so much for you to learn.