(A/N: Who wants another chapter of a stupid trollfic? You do! Oh, and because I've been told to advertise for people: please read Breaking Boundaries by A Castle of Glass and Endless Leaf-bare, Beyond Oblivion, and Turn Away by Guestpersonanonymous.

I'll check them out.

I have read these stories and loved them, and I believe these stories deserve more recognition. Give them a chance! :)

I will.

Know on wit teh stori! Its tim 4 de kites 2 bee born!)

But they were already born and named.

Chatper 10

Teh Rescoo

I glanced over the word and my brain processed that as Tabasco before I actually read it.

Chapter 10; Tabasco.

"We must get Redkit back!" Brokentsar sed.

And now I keep seeing Reddit in place of Redkit.

I still don't get why Brokenstar is here.

Den the rest of Perfectclan showed up. "We'll save him!"

And fail, I hope.

Moralstar and Firestrom and Ashfone nd Hopvegetable and Sunmuffin nd Vitaminheart and Tacobreath all run after Nicepaw. Empresskit and Brokenstar ran after them. Dey had 2 save Redkit!

Is that all the cats in PerfectClan or the only ones willing to return a kit to chaos?

They got 2 the Meanclan camp, but Nicepaw wus nowhere 2 bee fund.

"Hopestar!" Brokenstar cryed.

Don't cry! You're one of the most feared leaders out there! YOU ARE BROKENSTAR!

"Wut?" the leader sad.

"Wheres me son?"

Hopstar shrugged. "Idk."

He is not good at keeping track of kits. Or had he had nothing to do with their kitnapping?

Brokenstar wus mad. "Nicepaw stole my babi! We're here 2 recluse him!"

This does not sound like Brokenstar at all, Brokenstar would expect them to be able to handle themselves in a fight by now.

"Well u'll have 2 fight four him!

"I'll do it!" Whitekit shrieked.

You're a kit.

You're not even a day old yet!

She leeped at a kat and scratched him. Den she leaped at another cat ad killed her.

This is...this is ridiculous.

My thoughts exactly, she should be able to kill the entire clan at this point, not a few cats.

Then she attacked a ginger kween who threw her 2 the ground.

Fatality.

"Ow!" the tik cried. "Mommy! Daddy! Help me!"

Bronekstar grabbed Whitekit and ran off.

He's a coward?

Brokentar would not run off! HE WOULD KILL THE QUEEN WITH NO MERCY

The ginger queen stod in front of the nursery. "u will never see ur presious Redkit agan" she snarled.

Thank StarClan, the kit is safe.

Empressglitter glared at the queen. "It is not nick to steel kits! Give him back!"

Don't!

I wonder if Nicepaw works for Social Services and MeanClan is a part of Social Services, that would explain a lot.

"Never!" the he-cat spat.

Then Dumbpaw waked up the ginger queen nd stood beside her. "Tansystarheart is write.

Tansystarheart? What was she Tasnystarkit, Tansystarpaw? That is a horrible name!

But it's the author.

Redkit will half a better life here in MeanClan than he ever wud have had in PerfectClan. I'm going 2 raise him as me sun!"

I support you, Tansystarheart, you have a great plan and Redkit is better off here.

"NOOOOOOO!"

YEEEEEEEES

Why did you yell that? Right next to me?