I know this chapter is out of order but, who cares? So feel free to go back and read this chapter. Onto the review!
(A/N: So a few days after finishing the story- or rather, thinking I had finished the story- I realized I had forgotten to post this chapter. Oops.
No big deal, happens to everyone now and again.
The next chapter begins with talking about how a certain character is dead, but you never got to read the actual death.
I was so confused when I read about the death.
*Tansy laughs nervously* Sometimes I'm a bit scatter brained.)
It's okay Tansy.
We forgive you.
Captr 166
Figting 4 the Kites
Why do these people love kites more than kits?
"Perfectclan we half 2 attack now!111" Empressstar cryed as she went in2 teh camp.
Perfectclan, we have to regain sanity now!
Or kill Empressstar.
"I had me kits and Niceisactuallyevil STOLE THEM!11!"
Can't say I blame Niceisactuallyevil. You're a horrible mother.
"Oh no!" Evilisactuallynice cried. "My sitter stoled my kits! WE HALF 2 GET DEM BACK111111!"
No, we don't.
Let the kits be happy in MeanClan.
The leadre noded. "Meanclan has gon 2o far dis time. We have 2 destroy them ounce and 4 all."
What, so kidnapping the other kit who's name I forgot wasn't too far, but kidnapping Firekit and Tigerkit is?
The depudy luked at the perfectClan cats. "Firstorm, Wildfame, Ashfone, Sunmuffin, Blueberry, AND Hopevegetable- lets GO!"
The names are so weird!
I know...I just...their horrible.
The patrol of kats ran and run and ran until dey got 2 Meanclan's camp.
Whitkit stromed into teh camp fist. "u stole my brothers1!" she cried as she lunched herself at Hopstar.
Who in their right mind thought it would be smart to bring a kit into a battle?! Oh StarCan these people are idiots!
"Oh no!" the Meanclan leader cryed. "How'd u get hear so fast? We were completely unprepareed!1111!"
It's a mary sue, they're fast as lightning
Empressglitter glared at him. "ur warrior stole tree of me sons. kNow we will destroy u!"
A little extreme? Thunderclan didn't destroy Shadowclan when they stole two kits.
Dumbissmart, Niceisactuallyevil, and Tansyheart stud in front of teh nursery. "u will never take these kit alife!" Dumbissmart ANNOUNCED.
You go, Dumbissmart! Defend the kits!
"Dey r mine and I want them bak!1" Empresskit growled. "They need 2 comee home and ruule perfectClan wit MEEEEE!"
They can't rule Perfectclan, they are not clan leaders they are just kits. This is a clan, not a monarchy.
"They will half a better live here!" her brodder argued. "They can half a nomral life wit Tansyheart and Niceisactuallyevil and me."
Normalcy is good.
"THEY R MY KITES AND U WILL die!" Empressstar yowled and leeped at her brother. She scratched his throte and he dieded.
Wait, what?! Dumbissmart is dead?!
What?! I'm so confused!
Den a yowl cam from teh center of camp. Whitekite had killed Hopestar!
How can a KIT kill a LEADER?!
This is wrong, on so many levels.
Empressstar then leapd at Niceisactuallyevil and hit her bellly. The white evil he-cat died.
A hit to the belly kills a cat? Wow, she didn't even use her claws, she must be pretty strong.
Empresspaw had won! Perfectclan had defeeted meanClan!
NOPE! I REFUSE TO ACCEPT THIS LOAD OF FOXDUNG! MEANCLAN SHALL WIN!
"Cats from both Clans" the pink she-cat said. "We are now one Clan, and I am the leader. We are now EMPIRECLAN!"
Horrible clan name named after an equally horrible shecat. Sounds legit.
Sound's stupid. I hate Perfectclan, I hate Empireclan. Meanclan for the win.
