Note from the Author: Hey there guys! So here it is! This chapter is a little bit more dramatic and the start of the adventure. Review review review and enjoy :) Much love! xoxo~

Disclaimer: Me gusta own nada. (I clearly don't speak spanish)


Chapter V

Rapunzel looked up at her tower. Her mother wasn't home yet. She was not looking forward to when her mother would be home. She left for school after her mother left. She sighed and removed the rocks that hid the entrance. It took her awhile to climb the tall tower, but when she got to the top, everything seemed fine. She gave a small smile and started to make dinner.

"Rapunzel", she heard her mother cry out from the ground," Let down your hair!"

Rapunzel ran over to the window and latched her hair onto a hook and lowered it to her mother. Her mother stepped across the threshold," Oh, Rapunzel, I don't know how you do that everyday. It must be exhausting!"

"Oh it's nothing", Rapunzel assured her, trying to catch her breath.

"So, what did you do today?" her mother asked, walking over to the counter.

"Uh, ya know, the usual", Rapunzel's heart started to pick up beat.

"So you were here today?" her mother asked, a hint of question in her voice.

"Yeah, mother", Rapunzel laughed it off.

"So you didn't go to school?" her mother turned around and looked her in the eye.

Rapunzel took a gulp of air," N- no. You told me not to."

"What a good girl for listening", her mother smiled at her and put her hand to the side of Rapunzel's hair," It's a good thing you don't go to school. That way we can just spend that much more time together."

"Well you have your errands to run everyday", Rapunzel reminded her mother. She needs her mother to run her usual errands so she can go to school.

"I think I'm going to start taking you with me", her mother told her, turning back to the dinner.

"I can't go with you", Rapunzel told her mother," You say the world is so dark and people will want me."

"Well then maybe I'll hire someone to come and watch you when I'm gone so I know you're safe", her mother told her bitterly.

"Why? You have leaved me alone since I was 10", Rapunzel asked," What's with all protection now?"

"Because", her mother hissed, turning around to face her," You are never to go to that school ever again."

Rapunzel's stomach knotted," What are you saying about? I- I told you I didn't go."

"Do you really think you can outsmart me child?" her mother sneered," I will always be to steps ahead of you." (Remember the story description? See what I did there :) - this isn't the same part though. The description one is coming later.)

"Mum, it's not what you think", Rapunzel pleaded with her mother," It was so enlightening. I made so many friends!"

"You disobeyed me!" her mother screeched at her.

"Mum, please! I'm 17 years old! You can't keep me in here forever!" Rapunzel shouted back at her mother.

"Watch me try..."

Jack flew out of the school to head back home. It's nighttime, but he forgot to pass in some of his extra credit homework. He was flying over the lands surrounding his school. It was gorgeous here. This was always one of his favorite places to fly and cause the first fallen snow.

He was flying higher into the mountains where he hasn't really become familiar with the lands. He flew past the mountains surrounding the valley where the school lays and he came to a clearing that had a large tower right in the center.

"What is that?" he wondered. He's never noticed it there before. He flew closer flew around the base of it and landed on the ground below it.

"What is up there?" he asked quietly.

"Mother knows best!" he heard a woman yell from above the tower.

"No! Please, let me go back!" he heard a familiar voice cry out.

"Now, I'll be right back Rapunzel. You made a mess of our dinner with all of your thrashing", he heard the woman tell Rapunzel. Rapunzel! She's in trouble.

"Here, give me your hair", he heard the woman say again. He saw a waterfall of blonde hair fall to the ground and he peered around the tower. A woman with bushy black hair wearing a velvet cape came flowing down.

"Don't get into trouble", she yelled and she turned to walk away. He waited until she was gone beyond the trees before he quietly floated to the top and floated in through the window. What he saw when he entered the tower was just a mess of what the house used to be. Pots and pans were thrown everywhere and all the furniture was knocked over.

"Rapunzel?" he called to her quietly.

"MMMMM! MMMMM!" he heard her yelling up the stair case. He ran up them and burst through the curtains leading into her room. She was tied to her bed post with a rag tied around her mouth.

"Rapunzel!" he yelled and dove to her, untying her and pulling the rag out of her mouth.

"She will be back soon", she panted as he untied her," Hurry. Pull my hair in."

They pulled her long locks in as quickly as they could.

"How do we bunch this all?" Jack asked, with her hair piled in his arms.

"It doesn't need to be perfect. Just twist it", she told him, twisting her hair so it coiled.

"Almost done", Jack told her. It was still twice her height but it would have to do.

"What do we do now?" Rapunzel asked, tears in her eyes," She will be back any minute!"

"We fly!" Jack told her and they ran out of the room together, hand in hand. They bounded down the stairs and reached the window.

"Let me check", Jack told her and peered out the window. He didn't see any sign of her mother.

"Alright, grab onto me", he told her.

"But what if you can't carry me?" she cried.

"You trust me, right?!" he yelled at her.

She nodded and latched her arm around him. He jumped from the windowsill and they flew off into the sky. Rapunzel looked down and saw her prison becoming smaller and smaller in the distance. She thought she saw a woman with jet black hair watching them fly away, but she looked back at Jack and relished in the thought of never having to see her mother again.

From below the ground, Gothel saw the girl she calls daughter and a boy with white hair fly away.

"Oh, don't think you won't be seeing me again my dear flower", she laughed wickedly.


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