UPDATE

Hi guys I know I haven't been updating lately but I have good reasons:

1: I'm back at school so I am looking at less free time until I finish in 4 weeks

2: I am re-writing the entire story in order to help make it more plausible and take into account some of the reviews and advice I have read

3: I have just been slightly busy.

But on the bright side I will hopefully have it all done before long if I have the free time, and also I am thinking of doing a triple cross over between Mass effect-Hellsing-Department 19. For those of you don't know what Hellsing is shame on you, for those who don't know what department 19 is have a look at the books they are written by Will Hill.

But apart from that I will continue to work on this story and I won't be starting the next one until I have at least finished the first arc of this story

EDIT: The re-write is beginning to be posted it will be called "Rise of the commonwealth re-write", just to keep it simple