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Tris pov

"Wow" says Tobias "Zeke must be playing the drums really really REALLY loud."

I laugh "I thought that was like a bomb or something! (Bet you all did-admit it:p)"

We get dressed and leave our apartment hand in hand.

"I hope this isn't one of those typical truth or dare or bed dead or we'd parties. I'm ready for a change aren't you?"

"Yes definitely," I agree "but knowing Zeke who isn't the least bit creative I'm assuming it'll be truth or dare."

Tobias laughs and we continue to walk, laugh and joke. We get to the pit which is awfully scilent.

"Wow Zeke must've invited EVERYONE to this party.. Like there is no one- Ligit no one- here!"

Anonomys persons pov

They just left. I'm dressed in all black, which honestly doesn't make much of a difference here in dauntless but hey is a criminal supposed to walk around in neon yellow? I quickly scribble the words "you can't fool me" On a paper and slip it under the door.
Letter number 3 check- my job is almost complete. This'll get them. I look to my right then to my left, make sure no one is there and disappear out of sight.

Tris pov

We walk up to Zeke's apartment. Tobias turns the doorknob and the whole door comes off- Tobias has either been working out way too much or Zeke broke his door and put it back up wantin someone else to break it and then pay for it- both assumptions of mine seem so classic.

We walk inside and walk around. I run over to Christina.

"Hey c! How are you?"

"Great" she says with a twinkle I. Her eye.

"What?" I say "what's so funny?"

"Oh it's not you silly," Christina replies. "It's her." She says pointing a tall girl. The girl turns around and my eyes nearly pop out of my head. She is the prettiest girl I have ever seen in my ENTIRE life. No joke! Her long blonde hair flows in waves down her back. She is tall and has an amazing figure. She is wearing no make up yet her face looks so natural and beautiful. "Snap out of it we all agree with you," says Christina waving her hand in front of my face.

"Wow I'm..." Is all I can murmur out.

"Ya Ik right?" Says Christina. "and to top all that off," she says gesturing towards the girl "I never met somebody with such an amazing and caring personality!"

I walk over to Tobias who is twitching his thumbs nervously. The girls sees us and her face lights up and she runs over to me with her arms out. She must know who I am (I think) and I spread out my arms to return the hug but she runs right past me into Tobias's arms.

"Ahhhh Tobias" she shrieks.

The room becomes silent and I here murmurs of "that's his real name?!" and "I thought tris was his gf!"

I turn back to see the girl crash her lips against Tobias's... What?!

I expect Tobias to pull back but he remains the way he is. "I thought you were dead" he says to her.

"Me too" she says and smiles.

I am too confused.
"And you are?" I say referring to the girl.

"Oh me?" She giggles "I'm Lizzie Tobias's fiancé. Who might you be?"

My eyes begin to fill up with tears and I answer
"Certainly not his boyfriend" and run out of the apartment.

DUN DUN DUNNNN ...:)