Hey guys! Finally recovered from writer's block, but the idea contest is still open. I'll PM you if you win, or if you're a guest, give a response to your review. I just got ONE idea. Thank you, Hollyleaf1243 for telling me to skip lines to make it easier to read. Remember the regardless prizes if you give me an idea. Are you getting tired of the bold-faced words?
Too bad. So sad. (or not) Anyway, I've added one new apprentice out of the blue thanks to Hollyleaf1243. Introducing... MINTPAW! Starting with the allegiances, I hope this chapter is longer than any other that I've written. This time, I'm doing all four Clans in the allegiances. Enjoy! By the way, I've changed Heartpaw's name to Splashpaw.
ThunderClan
Jaystar: White tom with blue-gray patches and large yellow eyes.
Deputy: Aquaheart: blue-gray tom with aqua eyes
-Apprentice: Sagepaw
Medicine Cat: Ribbitwave: mud-colored tabby tom with dark green eyes
-Apprentice: Splashpaw
Warriors:
Mossclaw: White tom with unusual black tabby stripes and green eyes
Flufftooth: fiery tom with sharp teeth and yellow eyes
-Apprentice: Mintpaw
Firepool: ginger she-cat with blue eyes
Starlingpelt: black she-cat with tiny white splotches on her pelt and kind amber eyes
-Apprentice: Milkpaw
Redheart: sandy tom with orange chest and amber eyes
-Apprentice: Wasppaw
Swanpool: black-and-white she-cat with yellow eyes
-Apprentice: Nightpaw
Monarchcloud: she-cat with monarch-butterfly-like markings and aqua eyes
Milkyfur: white tom with black splotches and green eyes
Frogstep: muddy brown tom with light brown froglike eyes
Roselashes: beautiful pink-gray she-cat with deep blue eyes
Yellowthroat: White tom with golden neck and amber eyes
Beetlestep: Black glossy-coated she-cat with green eyes
APPRENTICES:
Sagepaw: White she-cat with brown striped patches and aqua eyes
Wasppaw: Brown tabby tom with yellow eyes
Mintpaw: Pale gray tom with feather-soft fur and pale green eyes, unknown parents
Milkpaw: white she-cat with a black tail tip and light brown eyes.
Nightpaw: black tom with dark blue eyes
QUEENS AND KITS:
Icebloom: very pale blue-gray tabby she-cat with amber eyes, mother to Emberkit and Leafkit, unknown mate
Emberkit: ginger she-kit with amber eyes
Leafkit: dark blue-gray tabby tom with amber eyes
ELDERS:
Poseypelt: simple old brown she-cat with green eyes
Yellowpool: golden-fiery tom with blue eyes who has accidents a lot
Rushfang: russet tom with brown tabby stripes and amber eyes
RIVERCLAN:
Leader: Violetstar: brown tabby she-cat with unusual violet eyes
Deputy: Troutsplash: silver tabby tom with blue-green watery eyes
Medicine cat: Smokecloud: gray blind tom with pupil-less blue eyes
WARRIORS:
Fishsplash: gray and brown tom with green eyes.
-Apprentice: Brightpaw
Blackheart: Black tom with amber eyes
Darkstream: Dark gray tabby tom with blue, almost black, eyes.
Amberheart: Ginger she-cat with light brown eyes.
-Apprentice: Stripedpaw
Tendrilfoot: Grayish brown tom with rare gray eyes.
-Apprentice: Turtlepaw
Spiralpelt: Tom with white pelt, black spiral shapes on it, and yellow eyes.
-Apprentice: Timberpaw
Bluestorm: Blue-gray tabby tom with aqua eyes.
Owlflight: Dark russet feathery-furred tom with amber eyes.
Whitepetal: white she-cat with light gray patches and yellow eyes.
Snowbreeze: white she-cat with wet looking tail and sky blue eyes.
-Apprentice: Stormpaw
Orangefall: ginger tabby tom with amber eyes.
Leopardpool: golden she-cat with small black spots on back and green eyes.
Greengaze: tortoiseshell she-cat with striking green eyes.
APPRENTICES:
Brightpaw: white she-cat with brown patches and amber eyes
Stripedpaw: gray tabby tom with blue eyes.
Turtlepaw: green-gray she-cat with dark gray splotches and green eyes
Timberpaw: brown tom with green eyes
Stormpaw: gray tom with green eyes
QUEENS AND KITS:
Brightfur: she-cat with bright golden pelt and yellow eyes
Mallowkit: white-and-gray spotted tom with blue eyes.
Swiftkit: duller golden tom with yellow eyes
Cinderkit: golden she-kit with yellow eyes
Ottertail: dark brown she-cat with amber eyes.
Cloudkit: dark brown she-kit with blue eyes
Moonkit: bright white she-kit with yellow eyes.
Ivykit: dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes.
Raintail: blue-gray she-cat with green eyes
Spiderkit: dark blue-gray tom with dark brown eyes
Winterkit: white she-kit with pale blue eyes
ELDERS:
Sharpvoice: mean gray tabby tom with green eyes
SHADOWCLAN:
Leader: Badgerstar: black and brown tabby she-cat with mystical spring green eyes
Deputy: Clovertail: dark-colored tom with odd blue and light brown eyes
Medicine Cat: Hollyheart: dark brown she-cat with black spots and blue eyes
-Apprentice: Brindlepaw
WARRIORS:
Cherryflower: reddish-ginger she-cat with bright green eyes
Bumblebuzz: golden tom with dark gray stripes and brown eyes
Spottedeyes: calico she-cat with misty green eyes
Sharpgaze: fluffy gray tom with blue eyes
Tuftface: brown short-haired tabby tom with a tuft on his forehead and yellow eyes
Darkcoat: black tom with light blue eyes.
Lightningsight: black tom with white-golden tail and yellow eyes
Berrybush: mud-colored she-cat with amber, almost scarlet, eyes
Patchtail: brown tom with dark brown patches and fluffy tail and emerald-green eyes
Twilighttail: dark gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Toadheart: dark blue-gray spotted she-cat with swamp green eyes.
Adderfang: mud-colored tom with amber eyes.
APPRENTICES:
Pouncepaw: golden she-cat with leopard-like markings and brown eyes
Yellowpaw: golden tom with light brown eyes
Forestpaw: mud-colored tom with forest green eyes
Pinepaw: furry dark brown tom with dazzling green eyes
QUEENS AND KITS:
Frozenwing: dark blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes (expecting)
ELDERS:
Redleaf: dark ginger tom with green eyes
Colorflight: dark golden tabby she-cat with blue eyes and a short temper
WINDCLAN:
LEADER: Nutstar: light brown tabby tom with green eyes
Deputy: Horsebreeze: Brown she-cat with brown eyes.
Medicine Cat: Flywing: black and gray tabby tom with amber eyes
-Apprentice: Primrosepaw
WARRIORS:
Breezebird: fast white she-cat with light brown eyes
Silverwing: silver she-cat with green eyes and excellent jumping skills
Jayclaw: Blue-gray tom with long claws and amber eyes
-Apprentice: Swiftpaw
Flamefur: fluffy and fiery tom with golden paws and amber eyes
-Apprentice: Greenpaw
Goosewing: white and gray tom with black face and green eyes
Whitestripe: white she-cat with light gray stripes and green eyes.
(Yeah... WindClan is sort of suffering...)
APPRENTICES:
Swiftpaw: black she-cat with blue eyes
Greenpaw: white tom with amber eyes
NO QUEENS
NO ELDERS
Finally continuing! The allegiances are more than 1,000 words long, because I put in all four Clans. Hope you enjoy the real chapter part! ;3
Sagepaw woke up in the medicine cat's den. She was not sick. She was not hurt. Yet she was inside. The herbs emitted an odor, sweet and not sweet, drifted into her nose. The dew on the roof of the den cast a rainbow into the light. The ivy draped over the entrance swayed slightly in the misty breeze.
Splashpaw, almost a full medicine cat, was trying to get a thorn out of the pad of a squirming Leafkit. She was careful not to wiggle the thorn or it would cause more damage. Finally, she tossed the thorn into the garbage pile, and Splashpaw put some cobwebs on Leafkit's pad. The web of mysteries inside tangled-up mysteries.
Ribbitwave stood in the corner, talking with Aquaheart, Sagepaw's mentor, sorting herbs as he spoke.
Somehow, Sagepaw took all this in at the same time. The sights. The smells. The sounds.
Sagepaw tried to make out what the conversation between Ribbitwave and Aquaheart was. She could figure out who they were talking about, that cat was her, but what were they saying? She managed to eavesdrop on them without being noticed, though, so that was amazing.
"How did Sagepaw fall out of the tallest tree in Clan territory without getting hurt?" Aquaheart asked. "I mean, she didn't just float down, right?"
The medicine cat was just as clueless as the deputy. "I'll have to consult StarClan about it." he meowed.
"You know, some things, StarClan want to keep a secret. Also, they don't know everything," Sagepaw said matter-of-factly.
"SAGEPAW! Did you listen in on our conversation? You better not do that again!" Ribbitwave yowled.
Sagepaw smacked her paw on her mouth. "Oh, I have ears, and we're in the same den." she said in a mocking tone.
"STOP THAT SASS THIS INSTANT! OR YOU'LL HAVE DOUBLE PUNISHMENT!" Aquaheart screamed in her ear.
Double punishment? I didn't know I'd be getting punishment at all! Sagepaw wondered. She walked out of the medicine den in great pity of herself.
As she approached the rest of the camp, she felt a cat poke her. "You- you FLEW off of the Sky Oak!" Emberkit cried. "You must have superpowers! Turn me green! Turn me green!" she mewed.
"Well, I can't turn any cat green yet, but I can turn you brown," Sagepaw laughed, pushing Emberkit into a mud puddle.
Emberkit took it seriously. "Hmph! You are NOT magical! I'm telling the leader!"
STOP THAT SASS THIS INSTANT! OR YOU'LL GET DOUBLE PUNISHMENT! It still rang in her ear. Thank you, Aquaheart, she thought nastily.
Jaystar stepped into the clearing. "Sagepaw, I need to talk with you. You climbed the Sky Oak, and if Wishpaw and Swiftwind hadn't been watching you, you would've gotten a broken bone, gotten crippled like Cinderpelt, or died."
"How do you know about our secret? And... who's Cinderpelt?" she awkwardly whispered.
"Well, I'll tell you about Cinderpelt later, but I can tell you how I know the secret," Jaystar meowed casually. "You know I'm the leader, and leaders communicate with StarClan more often than the other cat. Normally, leaders speak with StarClan a little less than medicine cats, but still enough to be noteworthy. You, you are different. You have a sort of special connection with Wishpaw and Swiftwind."
"O... K..." Sagepaw mumbled.
Suddenly, Sagepaw noticed Mintpaw just sitting top the left.
Sagepaw ignored him.
Jaystar spoke again. "Anyway, you are to do the apprentice duties alone. I think this is hard enough punishment because you are a new apprentice."
So Sagepaw trudged to the moss collecting place, and changed the bedding in the elder's den, checking their pelts for ticks as she went. Then she stopped by the nursery to change the moss there, too. By the time she was done, she passed out in the middle of camp.
