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Chapter 18

Naruto's POV

I could feel the power inside myself. I thought that it would be amazing to have this kind of power, but it suddenly felt like my head was being smacked everytime. It felt like this, but I needed this battle to over. I secretly nodded to Tetsu. He showed that love and friendship on Madara. It was his weakness. I grabbed my katana at the back. My eyes were crimson red, not from the kyuubi, but from the Tetsugan. I put my chakra on the katana and it covered with golden chakra. It looked sharper and longer too.

I never use it before. Shisui gave me before telling me about the Tetsugan. It was glowing golden and shining. I surprised with the sudden. But I thought that this Katana was awesome good. I glared at Madara and ran to him with such of speed. I will hold back at first just to keep the energy. Suddenly I said something that I didn't even know it and the seal of the katana was opened. "You have unlocked the seal, Naruto."

I stabbed it through Madara's abdomen. But he turned into many fire balls. I knew that I stuck in a genjutsu because everything was in slow motion. I just shouted "Kai!" but nothing happen. Tetsu looked around and saw that I was still in reality, but how?

"Haha! Love my jutsu, Naruto?" He said with a kind of smirk. I confused. Then in a sudden, I could saw through Madara's body. His chakra was different. It was kinda like in the war. I knew that I fight this form before, but then that's mean he's in…..a jinchuriki form!

I saw him appeared with a white cloak. I saw that he was using the rinnegan too. I needed to calm myself first. I used flying thunder god to flashed behind him and put a seal on him. I was kinda surprised that he noticed me and grabbed me. He grabbed by the neck and threw me away. He then charged an enormous sign of chakra. The place shook and I kinda felt worried. We're still near the village. I did not know what will happen to Konoha. I had an idea. I put my both hands on the ground and shouted "Seal barrier level 2!"

The barrier covered Konoha with some of invisible spirits and I'm the only one who could saw them. I think that might cleared the problem for a while. I used my Tetsugan to look through the village. Everyone was hiding themselves from the attack. It was really horrible because Madara created his clones and that was even harder to defeat.

I used some hand signs. I remembered Shisui's jutsu, so maybe I can copy that jutsu. I grabbed my katana tight and shouted "Uchiha style: Halo dance!"

I teleported three times, then threw some of fire that came out of the katana. It was cool. I knew that Madara did not give it his best yet. He stood up again, cleaning his clothes. Madara then starting to blew the fire jutsu.

"Fire style: Dragon flame loud singing jutsu!" The fire that looked like dragons were approaching at me. I felt that my mind starting to remembering the jutsu. It might be useful in the future. The dragons were colossal. I almost can't even dodge but I had just enough time. But when I stepped back, Madara used one of his clones and grabbed my both arms. He locked me. I can't move anywhere.

Madara laughed at me, infront of me. He changed to eternal mangekyou sharingan. I tried to look away because knowing the uchihas, they would use a genjutsu. I knew that I weak at genjutsu, but all these years I focused on learning genjutsu. I forced to stared into the eyes. Then I felt my body started to feel weaker and weaker by minute. I slowly closed my eyes, but Tetsu who was beside me, trying to tell me something. I read and I think that Tetsu was like Shisui, trying to contact me.

It was no use. My vision started to get blur. I did not want the result to be like this. I can't forced myself to stay awake. Then all the world stopped and my fax was on the ground.

I knew that I'm in a dangerous and serious situation now. I used Tetsugan again, and my body started to feel like was on fire. Burning. I stood up, and knew a jutsu. I learned it from my dad's scroll. It was written special to me. I knew that this needed to used Kurama's chakra. I called out to Kurama and linked to him. My body started to glow and I'm in Kurama mode. I kept my katana and grabbed my dad's kunais instead. Shouting out.

"Celestial air slice type-zero!"

I flashed everywhere. I punched, kicked, and used the rasengan at the end. He bleed just a little bit. His arm opened a little wound. I created a mini tail beast bomb in my palm. I ran to him and hit him with it. The place was now changed. It wasn't the beautiful view that had a field. This place now all like pits and dirt.

"Wooden style: Wooden dragon jutsu!" I shouted out. I knew that Madara would used a fire jutsu, so that I could used the water jutsu style. Some of the jutsus I learned them when I was a kid. It helped a lot. I taught Sasuke-nii and also Itachi-nii about elements too. I taught Sasuke-nii the kenjutsu style. Itachi-nii taught me the sharingans in repaid.

How could I for get! The sharingan! I knew that the Tetsugan and the sharingan are similar and I might get to used the sharingans too. I knew the Mangekyou sharingan and the eternal mangekyou. I'm really tired from being caught in a genjutsu. I don't know how much I could hold longer. I waited for the right moment and will unlocked the sharingan.

I knew that Tetsu was Shisui so I will asked him in mental link of something. I asked Kurama to helped me for the chakra. He said that he would collected the chakra as much as possible. Now I just contacted to Shisui.

'Shisui-nii, the sharingan, if I unlock it what will happen? How would I fully unlock it, do you know?' I asked him.

'I did not know the whole thing, but I know that you need to go into your unnest part of your memory. I know that some are bad and some are good. You need to fight over the bad ones, because everything have their burdens. Every great person, and heroes had their problems to solve. You just need to get over with it.' He said.

'Okay. I need to go to some place to fight the memory. But who will hold Madara off, while I'm gone?' I said.

'Friends….His weakness. My chakra's gone now, I will collect some more. But I'm Tetsu remember.' He smiled and the link just disconnected.

I came back to reality and said something to Madara first. "I will fight you with my power. You have to wait." I reached out my hand and used Rinne tensei. He was blown away and I flashed infront of him and said some of language. "Shin-ne-tou-shi-to-shi-nu death seal: Terror chakra memory seal!" Then he fell off. He would suffered for hours. Now I just needed a place to fight off. Then I went off.

Friends…..


'Sasuke POV'

I'm facing Kabuto. I'm worried about Naruto really. I knew that he became stronger, but still that was Uchiha Madara, one of the strongest legend in the whole world. If I want to join Naruto, I need to clear Kabuto out of the way first. This guy used Naruto as a tool and that made me so pissed off. I wanted to rip his head right away.

"Sasuke-kun, don't you want to be one of my experiment? I'm sure you love it." He said but after he finished the sentence, I ran to him with sharingans. I knew a jutsu that Naruto had taught when he was a kid. I love how innocence he was. He was my dream. I wanted to be like him because of the talented. But I got named prodigy child. I hate that name. I charged a chidori in my left hand. Kabuto backed away and called out.

"Revive: Jiraiya!" A white guys came out. I gasped.

Wait did he said Jiraiya? That was the perverted guy who taught Naruto. He also one of the legendary sannin. Interesting. I loved how this was, challenging. I know now how hard Naruto made everyone accept him. A dream to be hokage. It was achieved, he just did not be in that place yet.

"What…Why am I here?" Jiraiya asked, confusion eating him away. Kabuto pointed at me with a replied "Uchiha Sasuke."

Jiraiya smirked and started to be in sage mode. I sighed and started susano'o. My susano'o had changed since the war had ended. It didn't be purple darkness anymore. It's white peace of light. I threw magata yamasaka. He then blew fire style jutsu at me. After the jutsu disappeared, he had gone. I looked around but he was nowhere to be found.

"Giant rasengan!" The blue chakra ball swirl behind me. It hit me and I screamed out loud. I flew into the forest. I almost out of consciousness. I watched the sky and remembered that Naruto needed my help. I used a chidori in my hand and raised my hand up in the sky. It created a thunder storm. Then my ultimate jutsu "Kirin!" started.

The sky roared in anger. As Kabuto started to backed up with Jiraiya. I never thought that he would use Jiraiya as a tool. If Naruto know, he will be a dead meat for sure. I was panting. I looked at Konoha, my village. I noticed that it was covered over with some sort of seal. My heart felt something bad. The thunder wanted to kill somebody. Kill the person that hurt me, Naruto, and the village.

I wanted to wipe everything off. I thought that I heard the sound of Naruto. He was calling me. I think that he wanted my help. I needed to finish this fast. There was only one thought came up in my mind.

'Naruto, please be okay.'


'At Naruto's place (Naruto POV)

I made a hand sign. I saw Tetsu sat on my shoulder. He will be my assistant and helper. I smiled then said it quietly "Mind flowing" then I fell asleep. I needed to find my memory. When I opened my eyes, I found myself in a dark room. No one there with me. Tetsu fly and shining bright. "Teleportation jutsu!" I teleported to a place. I saw myself 15 years old.

That time I was practicing with Jiraiya. I remembered that someone said something bad about my life and I am so angry. I wasn't able to control the kyuubi chakra. It turned that I attacked everyone. Jiraiya got attacked by me. I watched myself and it's really hurt me inside. Jiraiya still have scratches from the attack, unfortunately he died when fighting Pein.

I can't watch anymore. I blew a wind style jutsu at younger self. "Wind-style: Wind slicing leaves!" The wind blade cutting the picture half. The place was breaking apart, Just like jigsaws.

I really can't stay up for another one. Only one event hurt me so much. I sat there holding my knees, against the chest. I sobbed. Tetsu rested on my head. My eyes turned back to blue color. I just hoped that I could get out off my mind just to see everyone and finish the battle.

'My memories….Why is it so hurt? Somebody help me…..'

Then another memory flowed again. This time it was when Sakura lied to me. I covered my ears and used the rasengan to destroyed it. Everything broke. I wanted somebody to help me. Anyone.

The light came and then I looked up. I walked toward it. I just hoped that I still have a chance to do this.

"I try again..."


'Sakura POV'

I slowly awake from being unconsciousness. I saw that Tsunade and Kaka-sensei were staring at me. I knew why. After I was being grabbed by the neck, I lacked oxygen. I sat up and looked around, but Naruto was none to be found. Kaka-sensei started to stand up and wanted to escape, but I grabbed his wrist. He won't looked at me. I bit my lower lip as it could bleed. I stood up and punched him. He was blew and fell on the ground hard. The sound of 'Thud' were heard. The injured ninjas stared at me like I'm a crazy person.

"Tell me where is him RIGHT NOW!" I shouted at him. He sat there, not saying anything. I was about to punch him, when Tsunade grabbed my shoulder. I let go of him and somehow sobbing. Then I saw a hand, pointing a way. It was Kaka-sensei. "You can go, Naruto is waiting for you. He probably want you the most right now." He said with a nod.

I understood, but knowing that I was needed in the village. I looked into Tsunade's eyes. She sighed. "We will clear in the village by ourselves, Sakura. We still have power you know. The will of fire." After the word came out from her mouth, I bowed and ran into the forest.

Tsunade patted Kakashi's back. "You did a great job, Kakashi. Now let's help other ninjas and the villagers. I'm sure your father would be proud of you." Everyone then finding some of people in needed. Kakashi thought that it might be true.

'Maybe...The legacy of them would grow much more. He he, that's why it's call the will of fire eh?'


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