A/N Sorry if you got excited, but there are a few things i would like to ask of my readers.

Okay, so I started writing this story just for fun, but then it got a lot longer than I expected, so I got the idea to use this story as a way to hone my writing skills. I am going to be writing scholarship essays REALLLY soon here, and I want to make sure that my writing is as good as it can possibly be, that way I don't have to pay for college :

So if you could go through the chapters, and see if there are some areas that need clarity (With the exception of Chapter One, I totally messed that one up, and it should be fixed soon!!) Or if you see gramatical mistakes, or maybe you think that a certain sentance should be worded differently, just PLEASE let me know in your review. Seriously, even if you think the whole chapter sucked, and needs a rewrite, TELL ME! I am going to use these reveiws to make sure that I can be the BEST writer I can possibly be. so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEE help me out here!

If I get 2 reviews, I will give you the next chapter :

THANK YOU!!

Tashaaaa