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Matt: Nobody wants their favorite characters to die you asshole.
Malum: I know that. But, I am evil so live with it and please don't swear on my stories. Swear in some other people's stories.
Sorry guys. This comment really stood out to me and then he went on about only psychos will like this crap.
Malum: Well, Matt we all know you are a psycho since you are reading my stories.
Percy's POV
"Why did you this sh*t?" Cord asked still grabbing on to my arm (Malum: Sorry for the swearing). Seriously, a guy starts hating a beauty when she is literally stuck to him 24/7. Cord was very mad at me for beheading an "innocent" girl. Quote on innocent because in my opinion Annabeth ruined my life. If I haven't met her I could have been less in love and have less hope. Things could have been so much easier. "I DID THIS SH*T FOR REVENGE!," I raged. My eyes literally flickered. "DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH PAIN SHE CAUSED ME?!" Crap, I just screamed at my beloved queen. Cord was very emotional and she would make me hella guilty when she was mad. "Raider?," Cord was literally sobbing right now. "Raider?" This was killing me. I am a gentlemen and I can't not go around leaving crying girls on the floor. "Raider. Lord Raider." A voice said. Thinking it was Cord "WHAT? JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!" I hissed. But when I turned around, there stood Nathan, the son of Hades. "Uh Lord Raider?," he whispered looking a bit scared. Breathe in and breathe out I thought. "Yes. Nathan what is it." I said calmly looking at my toes. My heart might be metal but at least I have one. "Lord Erebus, Lord Tartarus, and Lady Nyx are planning an attack on Camp at dawn." Cord finally let go of my arm and started begging on the floor. "PLEASE DONT GO!," she whined. I couldn't stand her anymore. "PLEASE DONT-" Cord's blonde head fell off and on to the cold ground. Her beautiful blue eyes stared blankly with a gallon of blood dripping slowly like the sound of the clock. Tick tock tick tock. B*tch I thought. Nobody wanted you around anyways. This was the second time I murdered someone and the hundredth time I felt like killing Cord, guess my dream came true. "LORD RAIDER WHAT THE F*CK DID YOU DO!?" Cried Erebus running into the room. He stared at the mess Cord made on the ground. "I killed her, uncle. I couldn't take it anymore." I spoke my mind. "Who cares?," Tartarus said coming into the room. "Nobody wanted her around anyways." I sighed. I literally thought Tartarus would bring Cord back to life or something. "Raider," Nyx sighed. "You need a new wife." God what the f*ck was it about me having wives. I would probably end up life King Henry at this point. I thought. "Fine," Erebus declared "We will attack camp tomorrow. Raider kidnap a girl. We'll change her."
At Camp
No One's POV
"GUYS!," the Stroll brothers yelled waving their hands. "ITS A RUMOR! LORD RAIDER IS GOING TO DESTROY CAMP AT DAWN!" Everyone shook their heads hoping that the rumor was fake. "Sadly, it's so true. Listen. You guys fight. I am busy making my wife a salad." Zeus yelped zipping off to Olympus. "He's a f*cking scaredy cat." Athena sobbed still not over the fact that her favorite daughter died. "Per-Lord Raider will come soon," Chiron said looking at the clock "Girls hide. Boys fight." Clarisse raised her hand. "I don't get why the boys get to kill and the girls have to hide!?" She yelled. "Listen. Lord Raider will kidnap one of the girls as his new wife," Chiron explained. The Aphrodite girls squealed. They finally got the chance to marry Jackson. "We don't want any harassment." Clarisse raised her hand again. "I still don't get why-" "GIRL JUST F*CKING HIDE!" Abby, an Aphrodite girl screamed. Her sisters screamed along with her. That clearly shut Clarisse up. "Use the techniques I taught-" Ares started but was interrupted by a yell. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!'" The campers looked up to find Lord Raider flying in the sky, standing on top of a cloud. "B*TCHESSSSSSSSS!" Lord Raider dodged all the arrows, swords, knifes, aka Everything. "HIDE. JUST HIDE!" Ares screamed fighting.
Percy's POV
"B*TCHESSSSSSSSSS!" My battle cry was very weird but also very intimidating. "HIDE. JUST HIDE!" I heard Ares screamed. A bunch of girls ran for their lives into the Forest, the big house, and to their cabins. I was looking for a specific girl, possibly with gray eyes and blonde hair. "10 TROOPS!," I yelled pointing my staff "GO FIND A GIRL WITH GRAY EYES AND BLONDE HAIR NOW!" 10 troops, ran out of the battle field and searched the Camp. I saw my old friends fighting their hearts out. Grover, Thalia (she doesn't have to hide because she is Zeus's daughter), Katie, Travis, Conner, everyone was doing their best. "HEY LORD RAIDER!," someone called. I looked down and saw a young 5 year old girl who looked just like Annabeth. "SCARED? GET DOWN HERE AND BATTLE ME!" She was perfect. She was just what I was looking for. I swooped down on my cloud, and snatched the girl. "GETMEHDOWN!" the girl screamed. "RETREAT I GOT HER!" I swung my staff and flew off into Tartarus.
No One's POV
"Is everybody here?" Chiron asked calling attendance. The first battle was over and no one died. Some people had injuries so the Apollo kids were taking care of them. "We are missing someone from our cabin." Cried the Athena cabin leader, Colmes. "Who?" Chiron asked desperately. The campers turned to stare at Colmes with huge pleading eyes. "Annabeth's daughter, Amanda."
How was it? SPOILER ALERT: AMANDA IS ALSO PERCY Lord Raider's DAUGHTER!
Clarification: Years passed and Lord Raider is 25 now. So it is possible for him to have a daughter
IMPORTANT QUESTION: What do you think my next story should be about? Answer in comments
1) Percabeth kidnapping
2) Percabeth life
3) Anything else( if this choice. Write what you what in comments)
