NOTE: UPDATED SUMMARY.
Here it is, Chapter 1. Also, thank you for all the OCs!
Also, if I like an OC alot, you can expect it to appear as a more major character. So, flesh them out as much as possible! I've decided to make at least one of the submitted OCs thus far a major character.
I know it's a bumpy start, but I promise the chapters will get better. ;)
Chapter 1: First "Ally"
Xalina, a world born from the ashes of another. This world has known peace for quite sometime now. The previous world was war riden, and it ended once the dark lord, Cha was defeated. Cha's opponent was Dio, the god of light. Ultimately, the light prevailed and the world was reset. A blank slate.
Dio recreated humans and set in motion a series of events. These events ended a couple decades ago. Now, the fine peace Dio went through much work to create is collapsing before his eyes. It will all end in one final disaster.
The heart of the collapse is Luataser. For many years, this country with many races has experienced high tensions. The ethereals have not been treated rightly. Just what are the ethereals? They are unplanned beings. Made of Cha's will to go on, they worship the dark lord. Now, with his power slowly returning to him, he has taken their free will away and manipulates them like puppets.
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He looked out to the great city of Luataser, Luat, and thought to himself. Was there any hope for peace for his kingdom? He was afraid there wasn't. With a sigh, Rass sat down still in deep thought. The ethereals, they were the problem. Ever since a year ago, they had become much more agressive for some unknown reason. Rass had attempted to negotiate but every diplomat he sent was killed. Not wanting to kill any more of his diplomats, Rass had stopped his negotiation attempts.
Honestly, the situation really stank, the ethereal legion had been a long time ally of the royals. What did he do to make them turn rotten like this? Rass couldn't help but feel that he had caused the problem. Perhaps, despite what they said, they didn't like their relocation. Suddenly, a knight and Rass's body double entered the room. Rass immediately understood. So, it had finally happened? The ethereals had invaded? Rass put on his cloak and got his sword and walked out of his room. Leaving the knight and the body double.
Rass hated to leave his kingdom, but he stood no chance against the ethereals. So, he began to flee to Carin. There, he would start to look for the strongest warriors the world had to offer. With them by his side, he would return to Luat to reclaim his country. It was going to be a long run. Which is why Rass also had a Hunter's horse. Sure, they didn't go as face as the knight horses, but Hunter Horses had legendary endurance. A well trained one could run for days with very few breaks.
Meanwhile, at Luat castle, things were going exactly as expected. The "king" attempted to surrender, but the ethereals weren't listening, They kept on their relentless assault, killing any knights in their way to "Rass". The wisp like creatures quickly made their way to the room where "Rass" was. Once all the knights were killed, the ethereal's leader entered "Rass's" room.
"Ah, my king, nice to see you," The ethereal said sarcastically. Rass's double knew what to do next. It was another part of the contingency plan. He may die, but at least the ethereal's leader would die with him. He reached into his pocket and grabbed a small device. This device was a detonator. The room was lined with explosives, he'd blow this part of the castle to bits, but he would kill the ethereal's leader. That was worth it. He pulled it out and pressed the button.
There was no pain.
-Back with Rass-
After about a day, Rass had exited the border of his country and had enter the vast unclaimed territory. Unless you count being claimed by brigands claimed. Before this decade began, the plains had been one of the best places to live. They were so peaceful and away from the violence in some cities. Many newlyweds had come out here to start their families. Then, something happened that sent the place into brutality. It was apparently cause by just one person to. One night, Rass decided to set up camp, but he should've picked a different spot.
As he slept, a group of brigands approached his camp. Most of them were just typical axe-wielders, but their leader seemed to be highly trained. he was mounted and also wielded a bow. "You," the leader called to one of his underlings. "Go see who is in the tent." The underling followed the order obediently. They were assuming that the person was asleep, but Rass was a light sleeper. He slept with his sword by his at all times, and was now ready to strike. When the brigand stepped into his tent, in one fluid motion he sent the blade through the brigand's chest, killing him instantly.
"Apparently someone who knows how to handle a sword," The brigand leader said. He loaded his bow, but instead of shooting called to Rass. "Stranger, please leave your tent. unless you attack me, I won't strike you." Rass was shocked by the brigand's offer. Most of the time, they wouldn't try to negotiate. However, if the bandit leader was willing to negotiate Rass would try to negotiate. Rass stepped out of his tent, still holding his sword.
"Alright, what do you need?" Rass asked.
"To need is something I must have. To want is something I don't have to have, but i want it anyway. I want the location of the Fire Emblem, do you know where it is?" Of course, Rass should've guessed, the thing that caused the brigands to pop up and the plains to become a deathtrap was a rumor that someone started. They told of an item called the Fire Emblem. It was supposedly an item crafted by the gods that could grant any wish one desires. As anyone could guess, this brought of the worst in many people. In a way, whoever started that rumor has been responsible for the deaths of millions. Honestly, it was kind of a sad thing.
"No, I do not know where it is, nor do i intend on hunting it. I just need some help on a mission I have. i need trustworthy heroes that can help me," Rass said. He was prepared for the leader to get frustrated and attack. Instead, the brigandput his weapon away.
"If it will allow me to get away from these godforsaken plains, I will help you." Rass was surprised by this brigand's offer. Who was the brigand before he got wrapped up into all of this if he could ditch it so easily. Rass, however, felt like he couldn't trust him this quick. It was to lucky to be true.
"How do i know I can trust you? Brigands are infamous backstabbers you know," Rass said. The leader nodded, what Rass was saying was indeed true. Different gangs would form alliances to find the fire emblem as a team then one would turn on the other once new information was found. It was another factor that made the plains a brutal place to live. There were constant gang wars and blood feuds. Those made that only the strongest of people could live out here without being a brigand themselves.
"I suppose you'd just have to take a chance. You'd need to never let your guard down. Just like the gangs. They form alliances but are prepared to fight each other at all times. You said you need allies, and I am offering to be an ally," The leader said. Rass realized this person was right. he was living in a world where he could put his full trust on no one right away if he wasn't paying them. heck, even if he was paying them, if his enemy could pay more, an ally could turn foe.
"Fine."
-End of chapter-
I still feel like this was kind of rocky. Then again, aren't all first chapters rocky? In actuality, there was a 5k version of the opening, but I didn't like it and scrapped it. Anyways, if you have any feedback please leave it in a review. if I get a few more OCs, I may close submissions for awhile. XD. I appreciate the support. i should be able to get a submitted OC in next chapter. Since the leader isn't one of the submitted ocs I got.
Anyways, Im really looking forward to the next chapter! Don't forget to review!
