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Abhijeet's eyes widened.. recognizing the figure standing in the front of him.. he starts sweating.. fear starts lacing his heart.. on the other side his reflection.. or his inner soul.. his insight.. his replicate.. passing a victory smile to him.. which making him more tensed.. that man (behrupiya) creeps to abhijeet..

Stretching out his hand he touches faces.. especially that sweating part.. in fraction of second abhijeet jerks back... and starting to move back... till he hits the back of the hospital bed.. he looks at him.. with a scar of scare in his eyes..

The man smiled.. signaling at his tip.. which is wet by now with the sweat of abhijeet.. "arey abhijeet tumhe to pasine aa rahe hai hai.. tension tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na.. ? "

He again tries to touch the his forehead to confirm about his wellness.. or illness.. but abhijeet leaned backed to stay behind that unwanted touch..

When that man started.. with a smile.. "kya hua? tum darr kyu rahe ho..? Arey mai to tum hi hu na.. phir apne aap se kya darna..? kitna bhago gey mujhse haan.. bola tha na tumhe maine.. tum sirf ek hi tarike se mujh se chutkara pa sakte ho.. sirf wahi rasta hai tumhare pass.. nahi to bhul jayo.. aur adaat daal lo mujhe humesha apne aas pass dekhne ki.." saying so he starts laughing madly... to reach out of that mad laugh abhijeet covers his ears with his hands tightly as he could .. and started to shout

"band karo.. aur jao yaha se.. please chale jaao" he starts to sweat.. due to fear… his condition starts to worsen…

"karlo koshish.. nahi chip paaogey mujhse tum.."

Abhijeet: daya.. daya.. he calls for daya…

The behrupia leaves the room immediately..

"please jaao.. akela chod doh mujhe"

he shouts… daya enters inside the room.. he gets tensed.. seeing abhijeet..

He moves to him hurriedly touches him.. abhijeet jerks back.. "nahi pass maat aao mere.. jao.."

Daya: abhi.. abhi mai hun daya..

Abhijeet looks at him… with his moist eyes.. holds his hand tightly.. and sobbingly tells him..

" ..aya.. wo.. aaya tha.. yaar wo to toyaha bhi aa gaya.. pata hai usne.. mujhse.. baat.. .. baat bhi ki. aur mujhe chua bhi.. "

Daya gets confused.. how could it possible.. he was present outside and also that he merely took some second to enter inside the room.. no one was present here.. how its possible to vanish in just few seconds.. no it can't.. which means his buddy's mind starts playing with him.. or something else was there.. which is deep hidden from his eyes..

He looks back at his buddy.. to compose him he says..

Abhi.. abhi idhar dekho.. (trying his best to made his buddy look in his eyes.. which are searching that imposter of him..) koi nahi hai yaha..dekho.. koi hai.. (abhijeet nodded cutely) nahi na.. aur waise bhi tumhari awaas suntey hi mai andar aa gaya.. koi nahi tha yaha.. sacchi..

Abhijeet loses his buddy's hand from his face.. still trying to convince his buddy.. "nahi.. daya.. tum samajh nahi rahe ho yaar.. wo hai yahi hai mere aas pass.. abhi aayega.. wo hasse ga bhi mujh par.. dekhna tum.. wo abhi ayega.."

Daya: tek hai relax.. mai dekhta hun.. aane do usse.. tum relax ho jao.. made him to sit comfortable..

Daya checks the room.. and washroom.. everything at its place..

"abhi koi nahi hai yaha yaar.. phirse tumhara waheem tha.."

Abhijeet says "daya mujhe hospital mei nahi rehna please.. gher chalo.. please"

Daya: abhijeet lekin..

Abhijeet: daya please.. tum nahi leke gaye toh mai yaha se bhaag jaunga…

Daya: abhi.. tek hai.. kal subah hum chalengey.. hmm.. tum soh jao.. mai yahi hun kahi nahi jaa raha

Abhijeet lays down.. holding his hand… so that daya does not leave… daya caressed his hairs.. "kahi wo sach mei toh nahi tha yaha.. lekin aise aachanak kaise aaya wo aur gayab ho gaya.. aur issey kaise manau.. checkup ke liye.. itni aasani se nahi maane wala hai yeh"

Next day.. when a new morning comes on its way.. daya after filling all the formalities.. daya took abhijeet to home… the whole night.. daya did not left abhijeet alone for a single minute.. or we can say abhijeet did not let daya go anywhere.. daya made abhijeet slept.. his phone rings.. it is acp sir.. who tells him.. there is immediate meeting in delhi and he had to be present there..

Daya says "sir.. lekin abhijeet"

Acp: daya.. 2 din ki hi baat hai.. phir tum wapas aa jaogey..

Daya signs.. he cannot neglect the duty.. "tek hai sir"

And cuts the call..

Abhijeet opens his eyes.. "kya hua" he asked..

Daya "tum soye nahi"

Abhijeet: nahi wo tumhari awaaz sunke aakh khul gayi.. kya kaha sir ne..

Daya looked tensed

"abhi.. wo jaurari kaam se delhi jaana hai"

Abhijeet got up.. fear starts building inside him .. which he is trying not to let it overpower him..

" jaana hai.. kab tak aaoge.."

Daya: wo.. doh din..

Abhijeet: 2 din.. his eyes popped out.. some random question were now starts pacing to and fro in his mind and making him week..

Two days.. how will he live here alone for two nights.. what if he came again.. how will he faces him.. ALONE.. but just because of his sake he don't let daya to pull himself from his duty.. so jest said..

"Try karna jaldi aa jana..."

Daya: haan abhi mai jaldi aane ki koshish karunga.. agar kuch problem ho toh mujhe turant phone karna aur gher se bhagna maat kahi.. please..

Abhijeet nodes.. embarrassingly said "nahi bagunga.. "

That smile really sooth his buddy.. who is longing for this smile..

Soon daya leaves.. abhijeet is left alone in the house.. he is not the person to be scare of been left alone.. but the situations had made him so.. somehow.. the 2 days passed.. but he was not feeling good in daya's house.. so he decided to get back to his house.. but now as night is getting closer he is feeling uncomfortable.. It's really raining dangerously outside.. typical mumbai rain... abhijeet is trying hard to concentrate on the book.. which is grabbed from the book shelf.. but every moment he look down he feels a shadow sitting across.. not a shadow.. he himself..

Suddenly all the lights turned off.. not only his house but whole colony..

Abhijeet got up "barish suru hui to light gayi.. aab candle kaha rakha tha.. uff"

He heard a low voice as "candle mila"

He turned with a jerk focusing his mobile light in the direction.. Yes he himself is standing.. yet he didn't lose his Senior Inspecter Skills.. his eyes scanned that very man in few mini micro seconds.. in result he dug more dipper in his fear.. his eyes widened.. he is not wet.. means he is really him... He feels all his hairs get straight he take back steps.. his throat dried in the raining reason.. his voice stuck badly completely denied from coming up. The person shadow humshaqal whatever he was.. starts coming forward

"nahi mile? acha bedroom dekh lo ek bar.. sayed"

Abhijeet got hold of a vase he throws it in the direction.. the thing vanishes... Abhijeet was not in his senses he rushed to main door he forced open it and rushes out in rain.

He is not in his sense.. what all he remember is to run away that much so that his shadow never reach him.. anywhere just far from all this.. by now he was tired so just started to walk.. rain droplets were falling over him.. a car coming from opposite direction.. the headlight is blinding him.. he covers his eyes and stood still.

The car came at halt near to him the driver came out

"abhijeet..."

The driver called holding his arms..

He looked at the driver.. he is scanning him properly.. this is not the shadow or the humshaqal na..

The person shaked him "kya hua tum yeaha itni barish mey aise.. bolo bhi kuch"

Abhijeet found back his voice

"ddaa..ya... wo.."

Daya looked at him.. now noticed his scared expression.. which is enough to making him aware that what happened to him and why he is here.. in such a drenched position.

"Ayo gari mey baitho.. ayo.."

He made him sit in the passenger sit.. Then without asking further drove to abhijeet's house which is nearer.. after reaching daya asked abhijeet to came out and both entered the house..

"Candle kaha hai abhijeet"

Abhijeet said "mujhe nahi pata.. wo bhi puch raha tha"

Daya asked "kaun? wo.. yaha aaya tha?"

Abhijeet: Ha.. (panicly) daya.. wo na mai hi hu sach mey.. mein hi hu.. pata hai wo na wo beega hi nahi.. (daya's heart soothed knowing that the man hadn't won.. abhijeet still had his charm.. his shine .. still that fear didnt took his sharp mind away.. while abhijeet continued) mai dekha usse.. wo bilkul bhi bjeega na tha daya..(in low tone) matlab wo sahi tha.. wo mai hi hu na.. looking at daya.. for his reply..

"abhijeet wo tum ho hi nahi sakte.. aur tum tension mat lo wo jo koi bhi hai usse to mai iss nakab se bahar nikal kar hi rahunga.."

sighed turned on his mobile torch.. abhijeet was about to say something.. but sound a glance over him.. as daya found those broken pieces of vase turned to abhijeet who looked down with

"use bagane ki liye.. pata nahi wo mein hu yea.. wehem yea.. kaahi mai sach mey pagal.."

Daya was searching for candles got two of them lit them up and then turned to abhijeet with

"baitho.."

Then moved in and came out with a towel and handed it to abhijeet with

"lo aur aab batao wo kab aaya tha."

Abhijeet started like a kid who is giving explanation to his mom regarding his whole happening in school..

"wo.. mujhe.. tumhare gher mei tek nahi lag raha tha wo mai yaha aaya.. aur mai.. book.. phir light.. gayi aur.. phir candle.. dudhne.. wo samne.. tha.. phir jab maine wo.. vase.. maara.. toh gayab ho gaya.. lekin uss din hospital mei usne mujhe chua.. tha… kaise.. kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai.. looking at daya.. says in low tone.. daya kahi Sir ki baat sach to.. kahi mein sach mey pagal.."

Daya pressed his arms.."abhi pls.."

Abhijeet says "Daya fir wo mujhe hi kyu dikhta hai kisi aur ko kyu nahi.. uska koi sabut kyu nahi hota.."

He hold his head with both hands "mein yea to pagal hu.. yea ho jaunga.. mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata.."

Daya holds his hands "abhi mujhe mila hai uska sabut.. aur mein dhund ke rahunga use.. tum bas khud pey yakin rakho.."

Abhijeet: sach mei.. uska saboot hai

Daya: haan.. hai uska saboot.. aur dekhna jaldi uska pata bhi chal jaayega.. chalo aab yaha se.. mere gher..

And they move to daya's house… daya straight took him to the guest room… make him sit on bed.. and went to take his medicine.. he noticed.. the packet is as it is as he left..

"dawai bhi nahi li.. aise kaise kaam chalega… hmm"

he brought.. the medicine and glass of water.. to him… abhijeet took the medicine..

"aab soh jaao.. todha"

Abhijeet lays down.. and.. sleeps…

Daya pov: ab mujhe hi kuch karna padega.. aise nahi dekh sakta abhijeet ko.. mai.. chahe joh ho jaaye sach mai pata lagakar hi rahunga…

He thought what should he do.. as the proof which he has is not enough and it does not prove anything… "haan.. yahi karna hoga mujhe"

Abhijeet wakes up again with the same dream.. laughing of the person.. he could.. feel he is around somewhere.. but when daya sees.. no one is here..

Daya pov: abhi ko physoclogical doctor ko dikhana hi hoga.. mujhe.. lekin.. kaise.. yeh manega.. nahi..

Its late night already.. daya after dinner said "abhijeet mein aaj tumhare gher jaunga.. sayed raat ko wahi ruku.. iss behrupiya ka to..

He got up and was about to move to his room when he heard a shaky voice as

"daya.."

Daya turned abhijeet was looking pale he said "mein tumhare saath chalu?"

"Nahi tum.."

Abhijeet: Please daya mujhe yeaha nahi rehna...

Daya: Per kyu?

Abhijeet said looking down "Ager wo aajaye to.."

Daya: Abhi tum..

Abhijeet: Mujhe darr lagta hai daya.. expelled out closing his eyes..

Daya for a moment looked at abhijeet with shock.. who continued

"haan daya ab mujhe akele rehne se bahut darr lag raha hai.. mein jaunga.. looking at daya.. mujhe yeaha please.."

Daya came near him pulled a chair and in front of him

"abhi tum itna pareshan kyu.. dekho yeaha koi nahi ayega.. per mujhe uski khilaaf koi sabut to chahiye na.. warna sabke samne mey kaise.."

Abhijeet: Daya mujhe kisike agey kuch sabit nahi karna.. per mujhe sach mey bahut darr lagta hai.. apni parchaiyi se bhi..

He grabbed daya's palms

"daya please..tum.."

For few seconds daya just stared abhijeet.. yes it true that the very person that mastermind fails to empower the mind of The Second Hand Command of Cid.. but that's also true that.. he got success to some extent.. yes he.. the proof is in front of him.. the Fearless cop of Mumnai Cid.. started to Scare.. and that to with his reflection..

His eyes turned moist.. soon he jumped in present scenario as for now it's his priority to pacify his buddy and help him so that atleast now he won't loose from himself..

Daya pressed his palms then got up and patted his cheeks "acha thik hey kahi nahi jata mein.. thik hai na?"

Abhijeet nodded

"to chalo aab sone chalo.. aur yea dawai lo.."

Abhijeet asked "Yea.."

"Khalo.. warna raat bar pareshan hote rahoge.. chalo lelo."

Abhijeet smiled and took the medicine.. Then moved to the guestroom..

Daya was sitting there only in the hall. He was thinking about his strong friend who is so scared now..

after about 30minutes he moved to room where abhijeet is sleeping..

He looks at the sleeping face.. then covered him properly and turned off the lights whispered "sorry boss jhut bola tumse.. per tumhe mein aise nahi dekh sakta aur iss darr ko nikalne ke liye uss behrupiya ka pata to lagana hi hai.. aur mujhe jana bhi hoga.. yeaha koi nahi ayega tum aaram se sote raho.. aajaunga mein.."

He patted his forehead softly then moved out totally of the house…

daya spends.. whole night in abhi's house.. but all went in vain.. nothing happened… next morning he enters his own house found abhi awaken waiting for him angry..

Daya asked "abhi.. kya hua.. itna gussa kyu ho"

Abhijeet: tum.. puri raat kaha they daya..

Daya says "mai.. wo.. waha"

Abhijeet cuts him: maine tumse mana kiya tha na phir bhi tum gaaye.. haan kyu?

Daya: toh kya karu.. aise baithe rahu.. tumhe aur beemar hota dekhta rahu.. chahe joh ho jaaye mai ussey pakar ke hi rahunga…

Abhijeet: maine kaha na tumse.. tum nahi jaoge.. usne mujhe koi nuqsan nahi pahuchaya to mujhe bhi ussey koi lena dena nahi hai..

"yea tum bol rahe ho?" Daya asked shockingly

Abhijeet: haan mein hi bol raha hu

Daya: per kyu.. itna sab hone ke baad bhi…

Abhijeet: usne koi gunah todhi kiya hai… saboot todhi hai koi..

Daya says "Tum dar rahe ho?"

Abhjeet looks straight in daya's eyes..

"Haan darr raha hu"

Daya says "uss behrupia se? usne tumhe pagal banane ka koi qasar nahi chori aur tum ussey lena dena nahi hai"

Abhi confronts "haan mein pagal hu man liya meine per tum uske peeche nahi jaaogey"

Daya "kyu abhi.. kyu?"

Abhijeet shouts "kyuki mein firse woh sab nahi jhel sakta.. wahi operation theatre ke bahar saans bandh karke... nahi dekh sakta firse waise hi akhri saans ginte hue tumhe... aur isliye tum uss behrupia ke peeche nahi jaaogey.. bas"

he moves into his room with "umid hai meri baat ki ijjat rakhogey" closing the door with a bang.. whereas daya standing there… shockingly..


A/n: uff.. ho gaya.. long chapter.. waiting for your reviews.. lekin yeh kya reviews phirse kum ho gaye.. missing some one my reviewers badly.. come back guys.. and.. silent readers please do review.. it will just take couple of seconds.. agar aap iss story ko long chahtey ho toh.. review karo.. warna mai jaldi khatam kar dungi.. next update.. 270 hone ke baad.. hoga with some more suspense.. and shocks.. guys please pray for me.. kal mera driving test hai.. hope ki pass ho jaau.. finger crossed…