Just wanted to say something.

I wanted to thank a reader that commented on my story.

Unlike a lot of people, she or he -I don't know it just says guest - told me all of my mistakes, and their opinion.

I know some people don't like being told what they are doing wrong because it's their story, and they can make it whatever they want.

But I accept criticism. It helps me fix mistakes and make my writing even better. I love to write, but I also like to learn.

So I just wanted to thank that person, and I hope as my story continues, my writing gets better.

Not everyone is perfect, and I really do appreciate criticism and reviews. I'm open minded and won't bash on you if you disagree with what I'm writing, or have anything to say.

Sorry, if this isn't what you expected. Trust me, the next chapter will make it up. I'm still gathering my thoughts and structuring the chapter. And there's only two more to go. XD

That's it for now, I guess.

~D