BECOMING THE YELLOW FLASH
As the years went by, Naruto became more and more stronger. He mastered the Rokushiki and became proficient at using it. He trained under both Garp and former Admiral Zephyr, whom he referred as 'Old man Z'.
Naruto during these years went on to meet some of the biggest names in the Marine force. Garp always introduced Naruto to Sengoku and Aokiji. Naruto was never one for giving people of authority the kind of respect others tended to give them. The day, Garp introduced Naruto to Sengoku, he referred to the fleet admiral as 'Braided beard-san' which caused Garp to erupt in laughter. Aokiji reminded Naruto of both Kakashi and Shikamaru and hence called him 'Lazy taisho'. Aokiji had asked him his relationship to Saul and Sora as well.
It was while training under Zephyr, that he met Zephyr's fellow students Smoker and Hina. At first, they were nothing but rivals. Neither had eaten a devil fruit yet. In spars, all three of them stood ahead of the rest of the candidates. Naruto, with his mastery over Haki was undefeated in his spars against both Smoker and Hina. Naruto used to make fun of them saying they had a stick up their ass. It didn't help that both Smoker and Hina reminded him of his old team in his previous life. Smoker like Sasuke, seemed to have a stick up his ass and was very anti-social. Hina like Sakura, had pink hair and could hit quite hard. Fortunately Hina never had a crush on Smoker.
Naruto was shorter and younger than the duo as well. Smoker at 6'5 and Hina at 6'3 were way taller than his 5'6 but at 16, he was still growing. Smoker was better than Hina, but even when the two of them combined, they couldn't defeat Naruto.
Both Smoker and Hina were chain smokers and whenever Naruto was around them, he would smoke a pipe as well. The one thing they shared was their belief in 'Moral Justice' instead of 'Absolute Justice'. They were just as vary of their allies and hated the Shichibukai system as well. While being wary of their allies, they trusted each other.
Over the years, the trio took down several pirates while working under Garp and Admiral Aokiji. Soon enough the three rose up in the ranks. Naruto had become a captain while Smoker and Hina were Lieutenants. One day, they were all summoned to Marine Ford.
Fleet Admiral Sengoku greeted them as he said, "Welcome Captain Jaguar D Naruto, Lieutenant Smoker and Lieutenant Hina. has got some devil fruits and after a lot of consideration and deliberation, we've decided that the three of you should be the ones to have them provided you want to."
The three of them thought for a while and looked at one another before Naruto answered for all of them, "Can we know about the fruits and their powers before making our decision?"
Sengoku smiled proud of the fact that the Marines in front of him didn't just jump ahead asking for more power. It was a test of his own, to check if they were worthy of the power that comes with it.
"That's fine. As I call out your name please step forward and go to the room at the end of this corridor. First Jaguar D Naruto." Sengoku announced.
Naruto walked into the room at the end of the corridor. As he entered, he met a rather old man, whom he recognized as the World's greatest scientist, Dr. Vegapunk. He walked up to the Doctor and said, "I would like to know what Devil fruit you are giving me, before I decided whether or not I want to eat it."
"Excellent decision. Since Sengoku-san sent you first, so you have a choice. Here, I have three devil fruits. The first is the Smoke-Smoke fruit. It is a Logia class fruit that will turn your body into smoke. The second is the Bind-Bind fruit. It is a Paramecia class fruit that will allow you to create cages, prisons and hand-cuffs to capture criminals. The third is the Teleport-Teleport fruit. It is also a Paramecia class fruit that will allow you to teleport from one point to another. The limitation lies in the fact that you can only teleport to a point that you have touched with your hand."
The Teleport-Teleport fruit reminded Naruto of his father's Hiraishin which he had learnt later on in his life. This was a power he was familiar with. One thing he was sure about was that the only one who could use this power to its full potential was him. It was almost like this fruit was made for him. His choice was obvious. With a bright smile he said to Vegapunk, "I would like to have the Teleport-Teleport fruit please."
Vegapunk handed the fruit to Naruto, who ate it in one gulp. He had heard that Devil fruits tasted horrible. Having put one in his mouth, he couldn't help but think that that statement was an understatement. The Devil Fruit tasted so bad that he couldn't help but think, 'I think my shit would taste better than this. I need to flush this taste from my mouth with Ramen. Even Sakura-chan's mud-balls didn't taste so bad.'
Later after having had 30 bowls of Ramen, Naruto returned to Sengoku's office, where both Smoker and Hina were also present. Smoker had apparently eaten the Smoke-Smoke fruit and Hina had eaten the Bind-Bind fruit.
Sengoku then announced, "Now that you've obtained devil fruit powers, make sure you train hard and master their powers. I now promote Captain Jaguar D Naruto to Commodore rank. Congratulations."
Naruto simply nodded his head in appreciation with a smile on his face. Sengoku then announced, "I also promote Lieutenant Smoker and Lieutenant Hina to Captain rank. Congratulations."
Smoker just nodded while he continued smoking. Hina's face had a smile as she accepted the promotion.
Smoker was sent to his home town Logue Town and was asked to lead the Marine force there. Hina was posted at the Grand Line. Naruto requested a move to his home town, Shell Town, but the request was rejected as the higher ups had already posted a Captain there and according to them having a Commodore with as much potential as Naruto in the weakest of seas, would have been a waste. Naruto was posted in the Grand Line as well.
Zephyr upon hearing Naruto's promotion sent one of his students, a girl named Ain to assist Naruto. Ain was an Ensign. She had devil fruit powers of the Return-Return fruit, which could turn back the age of anything or anyone she touched. She was about the same age as Naruto but was slightly taller than him and had begun learning the Rokushiki and Haki, but was nowhere near proficient in either as yet.
Naruto began collecting several knives since kunai weren't available and began applying his tag on them by touching them. He then had them customized. He would order a coating of Sea-stone on the sharp side of the knives. He would then use them as markers to take out most pirates. Using his knives he took down several pirates. Naruto was most effective in taking down Rookie pirates and within another 2 years, he received yet another promotion to Rear Admiral rank.
After achieving the Rear Admiral rank, Naruto started receiving duties not just in the first half of the Grand Line but also in the New World. Ain too received her promotion from Ensign to Captain rank.
Naruto while travelling the seas also began writing a book. The book was based on his previous life and was named 'The Tale of Uzumaki Sora'. He used the named 'Sora' as an act of respect to the man who became his father in his new life.
Ain kept Naruto in line all the time. Whenever he'd disrespect a superior or play a prank on someone or when he was neglecting paper work, she'd twist his ear. Zephyr had sent her to Naruto for that very purpose. He knew that Ain was capable of keeping Naruto in line. Eventually Naruto began calling superior officers with a little amount of respect at certain times.
When Ain joined, she'd an 'Absolute Justice' policy, but Naruto helped her see the problems regarding the 'Absolute Justice' policy that most marines tended to follow. Soon she too began following Naruto's 'Moral Justice' policy.
Even after two years, Ain's Haki was too weak. Naruto helped her in her Rokushiki moves. He gave her some of his knives and helped her improve her accuracy. Ain had immense respect for Naruto's skills as a fighter and leader.
Naruto during his travels began putting seals on every island and every ship, be it Marine or Pirate. In the New World, if he had too much to handle, he'd somehow place a seal on the ship of the pirate and would flash towards one of the Admirals or Garp and flash them on to the ship to deal with the Pirate.
On one occasion, when he was ambushed by 4 ships under Big Mom, Naruto flashed Akainu to the location and witnessed brutal destruction and carnage by Akainu. The Admiral was impressed by Naruto's ability with his devil fruit powers and appreciated his brilliant thinking and thought process. But Naruto, on the other hand wanted to puke. After accepting the Admiral's compliments and promising to get stronger, Naruto flashed back to his ship and cried. He then flashed to Hina's ship and explained what had happened to Hina. Hina consoled him while telling him to get stronger and be prepared for things like that in the future. Naruto stayed at Hina's ship that entire night where one thing led to another and the two of them had sex. They both decided to not make a big deal out of it.
Over the years whenever he saw carnage, Naruto would have sex to get rid of those images. Ain after learning how Naruto used to recover began having sex with him whenever they had killed too many pirates. Neither of them was too serious about it and just considered each other as Friends with benefits.
By the time Naruto was 21, he had firmly established himself as the strongest among the Rear Admirals. He was even stronger than most Vice Admirals except few like Garp. To be a Vice Admiral, one must not only master Haki, but also capture a total bounty of 1,000,000,000 beli. Naruto in his short time as Rear Admiral had already caught some big names and was inching closer and closer to the mark.
He wore an orange shirt and black suit under the white marine 'Justice' coat. He stood at 6 feet and was taller than Ain and was very well built. He no longer had the whisker marks he had in his previous life. He was the dream boy of every female marine. Naruto himself had turned into a playboy and had charmed quite a few Marine girls into having sex with him. It helped that he could handle alcohol much better than any other marine.
His book on his previous life was going really well. He was releasing it as a book series and it had become the most popular story in the World. His publisher was located at Logue Town. So every now and then, he would flash over to Logue Town where he would spend time with Smoker.
This was also where he met Tashigi. He had visited Logue Town to submit his third book to the publisher. His first book featured his entire childhood till he defeated Mizuki and became a ninja. His second book featured the formation of his team, his first meeting with Kakashi and the Genin Test till the end of his first C rank mission at Nami no Kuni. He had just completed his third book featuring the entire Chunin exams incident including the death of the Third Hokage.
Tashigi had entered the room where Smoker and Naruto were talking. She had overheard from the other marines that Rear Admiral Naruto was at Logue Town and wanted to meet him as she was a major fan of his books. The moment Naruto saw Tashigi, he yelled, "Oh, Smokey has a girl now. How is that even possible?"
Tashigi who was flustered, saluted and yelled out, "I'm just working under him. I'm Master Chief Petty Officer Tashigi, Shousho-san."
Naruto simply sweat-dropped at her reaction as Smoker growled out, "Oi, wear your specs."
When Tashigi wore her specs, she noticed that she was saluting the wall. She turned around and saluted at Naruto.
Naruto laughed out loud at her obliviousness and said, "Don't get so formal with me. Just call me Naruto. All this Shousho-san is just too much. I've been this old-man's superior officer since forever, he has always called me by my name, Naruto."
"Oi, who are you calling Old-man?" Smoker yelled out.
"Who else in this room has white hair and smokes cigars like an old man and I know you that all day long, even when you're sleeping." Naruto replied back.
"The hair is silver and it's been that color since birth." Smoker replied back angrily.
"Keep lying to yourself. I'm known as the Yellow flash because of my Yellow hair. You are known as the White Chase because of your white hair. Let's ask Tashigi-chan here. What do you think is the color of Smokey's hair? It's white right?" Naruto asked.
Tashigi who was shocked at how the Rear Admiral and her captain were acting just stood shocked. She didn't even hear the question properly. She just heard the last word, 'Right?', and simply nodded along.
Naruto smiled at that and pointed at Smoker, "See, even Tashigi-chan thinks that your hair is white."
Seeing Naruto laugh madly and making every Marine in the room excluding Tashigi giggle as well, Smoker did the only thing he could do. He yelled out, "SHUT UP!"
Just then Tashigi, who had recovered from her shock ran towards Naruto with a book and said, "You are the Jaguar D Naruto-sama who wrote this book, right? Please sign this for me."
Naruto smiled as he said, "A fan, huh. For someone as cute as you, I'll sign it no problem."
Smoker seeing this interaction sent out a warning, "Beware, this man is known as the Marine playboy for a reason."
Naruto's face turned into a scowl as he said, "Do you have to say that to every girl I meet, Smokey?"
Naruto then found the perfect retort as his scowl morphed into a mischievous smile as he said, "You're just jealous. Aren't you Smoker? After all you are 50 year old virgin."
"I'm just 33." Smoker yelled out in defiance.
"Well you look 50 with your white hair." Naruto replied back
"For the last time it is silver." Smoker screamed.
"Yeah, keep lying to yourself." Naruto said again.
Smoker who had lost his entire cool began using his devil fruit powers as he said, "That's it. You want to fight?"
Naruto smiled and cracked his wrists as he said, "Okay, bring it on."
What followed was a total trashing for Smoker as Naruto sat on his back after defeating him and said, "Now what is the score between us? I believe it is now 92-0 in my favor."
Tashigi was shocked by Smoker's sound defeat. With his Logia devil fruit abilities, Smoker seemed nearly invincible and yet he had endured a sound trashing by a Rear Admiral about a year older than her.
Tashigi asked the obvious question on her mind, "Sir, how did you punch Smoker-Taisa when he was using his devil fruit powers?"
Naruto smiled as he said, "I just used Haki. I'm not surprised that you haven't heard of it yet. It's a little advanced for you. Even Smokey here hasn't completed his Haki training. He is totally reliant on his jute and his devil fruit powers. All Vice Admirals and above can use Haki. I may be a Rear Admiral but I also know how to use Haki. Smokey would actually be a lot stronger if he could use Haki along with his devil fruit abilities, but it requires a good amount of proper and efficient training to master ones Haki."
Naruto helped Smoker up and had some lunch after which he was bombarded by Tashigi and her questions again, "Sir, Where did you get the idea for Momichi Zabuza's Kubikiribochou? Which sword is going to appear next? What are the swords used by the seven swordsmen of the mist?"
Naruto tuned to smoker and silently mouthed, "Katana otaku?"
Smoker nodded in reply.
Naruto smiled and chose not to answer any of her questions by saying, "It's all a secret. You'll have to wait till the next part. Do you like Uzumaki Saul more or Uchiha Sasuke?"
Tashigi thought for a while before saying, "Uchiha Sasuke is definitely cooler and what happened to his family is tragic, but Saul's the better character."
Naruto smiled at her answer as he imagined a chibi version of himself standing on top of a chibi version of Sasuke yelling you may be cooler but she likes me more.
Naruto patted her back and yelled, "I like you. How about I give you a signed copy of the first edition book of the next book in the series?"
Tashigi squealed in joy before hugging her favorite author as for a moment she forgot all about her rank and his rank in the marines. The moment she realized what she had done, she began sputtering out apologies. Naruto simply laughed as he said, "Don't worry. I enjoyed it. I don't mind getting more of those and more."
This left Tashigi blushing up a storm before Smoker said, "This is why he is known as the Playboy among marines."
Later that day, Naruto called Tashigi aside and gave her one of his knives before saying, "I'm a teleporter and I've eaten the Teleport-Teleport fruit. That's why I'm known as the Yellow flash. I can jump to any place I've marked. I've marked Smoker's body several times before in our spars, but those marks won't tell me if he is in trouble or not. Which is why I you to keep this knife with you. Don't let Smoker know that you have it. When either you or Smoker is in trouble, just throw this knife and I'll appear in a flash. Smoker's pride won't let him keep any of my knives."
Tashigi smiled and accepted the knife. Seeing this Naruto smiled and muttered, "Now only if I can get Hina or one of her subordinates to do the same. The woman has too much pride as well."
On one occasion in the New World, he had received a message saying that a pirate was causing ruckus in an Island known as Tea Cup Island, which was a territory of White Beard. Naruto decided to head on to the Island since the complaint was sent to the Navy HQ. Apparently White Beard had sent one of the captains allied to him and they had been defeated. What Naruto and the marines didn't know was that White Beard had heard about his 'son's' defeat and sent another one of his 'sons', the Commander of his second division, Portgaz D Ace, more commonly known as Fire-Fist Ace.
When Naruto arrived at the Tea Cup Island, he saw Ace landing a final blow on the Rookie troublemaker worth 125,000,000 beli. It was a no contest.
Naruto however saw this as an opportunity to finally face Ace. Naruto jumped towards the shore and yelled out to Ace just as Ace was walking towards his one-man boat, "Hiken no Ace, I can't just let you leave like that."
Ace turns around and upon seeing Naruto, he replies, "Oh, Aren't you that Marine Rear Admiral who was making news recently. This is White Beard's territory. You have no business here."
Naruto just casually yelled out, "Oh, don't be like that. Don't tell me that a Rookie pirate with a bounty of 125,000,000 beli is enough to tire you out. After all we've both received some insane training by a certain insane monster. Yup, the man told me about his grand-children. Since then I've been dying to face both you and your brother in battle. Though I guess he hasn't debuted yet. From what I've heard, he wants to be the Pirate King. When he gets here, I'll fight him. Come on, how about a fight. Just me and you. My men aren't going to get involved."
Ain walked up to Naruto and asked, "Is that wise Naruto-san? He is the 2nd division Commander of the Shirohige Kaizoukudan."
Naruto continued smiling as he said, "That's exactly why only I must face him. He is way beyond any of your leagues. If any of you get involved, you'll be a burden in this fight."
Ace smiled broadly as he said, "I definitely need a workout. This one wasn't enough. Besides we better make it fast. If Oyaji doesn't get my message soon, he'll definitely come here. Since I fell asleep in the restaurant before beating up this Rookie loser, I bet he is already on his way here."
Naruto looked confused before asking, "I thought your father died 21 years ago."
Ace's smile turned to a scowl as he yelled out, "That man is not my father. My father is White Beard. And how do you know about that?"
Naruto removed his suit and his coat before throwing them to Ain and told everyone to move aside and then began cracking his fists as warm up before saying, "The old man talks too much every now and then. I'm the only one he is actually blurted this to. In fact, immediately after saying that he ordered me to forget it since he made a mistake. How can anyone forget such news? Anyway, I don't care who your father, mother or anyone else is. Let's fight."
Ace immediately yelled out "Hiken" as he sent a punch of fire at Naruto. Naruto though had thrown one of his knives in Ace's direction. As Ace's Hiken arrived, Naruto teleported to the Kunai he had thrown and tried to lay a Haki covered kick on Ace's chest.
Ace noticing the coating of Haki, crossed his arms to block the kick that sent him a considerable distance away before saying, "Oh, so you can use Haki. I thought only Vice Admirals and above can do that. That makes this fight really interesting."
Ace then moved his hands towards his waist and had them shaped like two guns as he yelled, "Higun" and began firing fire from his fingers. Naruto using his Kenbonshoku no Haki and his teleporting ability managed to dodge them all. Ace seeing this said, "So that's your devil fruit ability. You can teleport."
Naruto nodded his head as he said, "Yup, I've eaten the Teleport-Teleport fruit. Because of my blond hair, each time I teleport, there is a small yellow flash. That's why I'm called the Yellow Flash of the marines. Now it's my turn."
Naruto threw his knife at Ace with perfect accuracy. It managed to cut Ace on his cheek. Ace immediately realized that there was a coating of Sea-Stone on the knife, because the cut made him feel a little weaker. Just then he felt Naruto's presence behind him. Naruto kicked him hard on his back. Ace flew back a considerable amount of distance and hit a rock as he vomited a little bit of his blood.
Ace then stood up and said, "I see. So that's your power. You can't just teleport anywhere. You can only teleport to your knives which have Kairouseki (Sea stone) at their sharp end."
Naruto smiled as he said, "Not bad. Very few have ever managed to figure that part out. And by the time they did, they were too late."
Naruto then threw another knife at Ace. Ace being prepared for another teleportation watched the knife closely. Suddenly he heard Naruto mutter, "Soru!". When Ace looked down, he noticed that Naruto had already reached him, before Naruto pointed a Haki covered finger at his stomach and muttered, "Shigan!"
Ace vomited a lot more blood as he flew backwards even further crashing into another rock. Ace once again stood up and smiled at his opponent, "You're smart and quite the capable fighter."
Ace then ran towards Naruto and shouted "Hotarubi!" as greenish-yellow balls were released from his hand s and floated around Naruto. He then jumped over Naruto and yelled, "Hidaruma!" as they all suddenly exploded. Naruto managed to teleport away to the knife he had thrown at Ace as a distraction when he used Soru and Shigan, but he had been hit by the explosion. His shirt and tie were completely burned leaving him bare chested and he had burns on his chest. Ain yelled out in fear as Naruto went down to one knee. Naruto however told her to stay where she was as he stood up and looked at Ace with a crazed smile on his face similar to one that Ace had been sporting.
However when he looked at Ace, Ace was holding a miniature Sun. Naruto tried pulling one of his knives, but they were missing. Looking towards Ace, he noticed Ace holding his remaining three knives as he said, "Looking for these. Try getting them."
Ace then threw all the three knives into the sea. All his remaining knives were behind him and no matter which one he teleported to, it would leave him in the path of Ace's sun that was going to come his way. He hadn't mastered teleporting attacks away. So that would be too risky as well.
Ace yelled out, "Dai Enkai:Entei!" before throwing the miniature sun in Naruto's direction. After throwing the sun, Ace didn't see any sign of Naruto teleporting which made him believe that he had defeated Naruto finally. But just then, he felt a stab on his stomach. Naruto was suddenly in front of him and had pushed him down. The Kairouseki in Naruto's knife had weakened him further as Ace fell to the ground unable to move with Naruto straddling him.
"How?" Ace managed to blurt out.
"My knives aren't the only things where I can teleport to. I can teleport to anything that I touch with my hands. When I used my Shigan on you, I had already touched you and hence marked you. When you threw your attack, I teleported to the farthest knife behind me and then teleported again to your stomach which I had already marked." Naruto explained.
The Navy soldiers who were watching from a distance immediately began celebrating their leader's victory over one of the top pirates in the World aside from the Yonkou. Just then a blue bird appeared above Naruto and yelled, "How dare you do this to someone from our crew?"
The blue bird turned into Marco as the First Division Commander tried to kick Naruto away. Naruto managed to use his Kenbonshoku no Haki and managed to dodge the kick in time before landing a Haki coated punch on Marco's jaw that sent him flying back.
Immediately a man with a claw like weapon attacked Naruto. Since his Haki was active Naruto managed to dodge it in time before landing a kick to the man's face that sent him back. Naruto suddenly felt something above him and as he looked up, he noticed a diamond coated arm about to land on him. Seeing no way out, Naruto teleported to the knife he had given Ain. He recognized the man as Diamond Jozu, the third division commander of Shirohige Kaizokudan, who turned to the man with the claw like weapon and said, "This guy is quite good, Teach."
Marco then came back flying as he, Jozu and Teach covered Ace, all of them scowling at Naruto. Soon they were joined by the remaining commanders- Thatch, Vista, Blamenco, Rakuyo, Namur, Blenheim, Curiel, Kingdew, Haruta, Atmos, Speed Jiru, Fossa and Izo. Naruto knew that he couldn't take all of them at once. Suddenly there was an earthquake as White Beard jumped on to the Island. He noticed Ace's condition and yelled, "Who dared to do this to my son?"
Naruto stepped forward as he said, "I did."
Ain tried to stop Naruto, but Naruto pushed her hand away as he walked fearlessly.
"A Marine? What the hell are you doing here? This is my territory." White Beard roared.
"We got a call at the HQ regarding a pirate causing trouble here. Apparently he managed to defeat a pirate you had sent to deal with the situation. So someone from the island contacted the Navy HQ. Ofcourse at that moment, we didn't know you had sent Ace to deal with the mess." Naruto replied.
White Beard tuned towards the charred body of the Rookie, whom Ace had defeated before turning to Naruto, "Ace clearly dealt with him. Then why did you attack Ace?"
Naruto smirked before saying, "Sure, Ace dealt with him. But I wanted to fight Ace. Afterall we both are two people from East Blue who took two different paths and ended up here in the New World. We both even suffered under the same monster. It's only natural that we'd want to fight one another."
Just then Ace stood up and removed the knife from his stomach as he said, "He's right, Oyaji!"
Ace then threw the knife to Naruto who caught it before yelling, "This time, you won. Next time, it won't be the same."
Naruto smirked as he said, "We'll see about that."
Naruto was about to leave with his crew when one of them shouted, "Shousho-san, this is our chance. Shirohige is here. You've already defeated Ace. You in fact took on even the Pheonix Marco, Diamond Jozu and that Teach guy and came out unscathed. This time even we'll fight. We can defeat Shirohige Kaizokudan. Ace's bounty is rightfully yours. If you can capture him, they'll promote you to Vice Admiral atleast if not Admiral. This is our chance, Sir."
Few other soldiers nodded with the one who shouted before Naruto shut them up by saying, "Listen up, you morons. You see that old man there, Shirohige. All of us combined wouldn't be able to even put a proper scratch on him. He is a Legend for a reason. The only one here capable of taking on any of the commanders is me. Even that Teach guy is stronger than you guys. Even you, Ain. We are heavily outmatched here."
The earlier soldier then said, "Then you can teleport and bring Akainu-san or Kizaru-san or Aokiji-san or even Sengoku-san or Garp-san here. Let them fight Shirohige while we'll deal with the rest."
Naruto scowled as he yelled, "What do you think will happen if Akainu-san fights Shirohige here? This is still an Island with a lot of people. This maybe Shirohige's territory but we have a duty towards all civilians. Can you prevent Akainu's lava or Shirohige's attacks from hurting any civilian. Think before you act. Now take this Rookie to the brig. His bounty will do for today."
White Beard had managed to listen in on Naruto's conversation with his soldiers was impressed. Suddenly few of the White Beard pirates after seeing Ace's condition yelled out, "We can't let him get away after what he did to Ace. Oyaji is here. Our top Commanders are all here. We can destroy those Marine bastards."
Before White Beard or any of the commanders could stop them, they all began charging towards Naruto. Seeing this, Naruto's crew began to move forward and attack them back, but Naruto drew his hand in their way stopping his men in their tracks before taking a step forward.
The next thing they all knew, all the White Beard pirates who had intended to attack Naruto had fallen down unconscious. Jozu muttered, "Damn, that was a really powerful Haoshoku no Haki."
Marco and the other commanders looked on in shock at Naruto, who simply said, "I'm suffering quite a few burns, Ace is bleeding heavily and this Rookie has been charred. I think the Medics have enough on their plate. Don't you?"
Naruto then turned around and began walking before White Beard interrupted him, "What's your name, Gaki?"
Naruto turned his head and replied, "Jaguar D Naruto-Rear Admiral of the Marines."
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
I MUST ADMIT THAT I'M REALLY HAPPY WITH THE RESPONSE SO FAR. SO MANY PEOPLE WANTED SO MANY DIFFERENT THINGS. SOME WANTED A HAREM. SOME WANTED NARUTO TO EAT KIZARU'S PIKA-PIKA NO MI. SOME WANTED A DEVIL FRUIT AS POWERFUL AS YAMI-YAMI NO MI. SORRY GUYS BUT I HAD AN IDEA IN PLACE ALREADY WHEN I BEGAN MY STORY. FOR THOSE WHO ARE WONDERING WHO AIN IS, SHE IS THE GIRL IN THE ONE PIECE FILM:Z. NOT EXACTLY A CANON CHARACTER, BUT AT THE SAME TIME, NOT AN OC. I HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THE SMOKER-NARUTO RIVALRY. I PARTICULARLY ENJOYED WRITING THE NARUTO-ACE FIGHT AND THE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN NARUTO AND TASHIGI.
I MENTIONED NARUTO HAVING SEX, BUT DIDN'T PUT LEMONS BECAUSE IT FELT REALLY WEIRD PUTTING LEMONS IN JUST MY SECOND CHAPTER.
FROM NEXT CHAPTER ONWARDS I'LL BE ENTERING CANON.
I'D ALSO LIKE TO THANK raijinfairy FOR POINTING OUT MY MISTAKE, WHICH I CORRECTED IMMEDIATELY. HOPING TO GET MORE REVIEWS THIS TIME.
ALSO ON SOME PLACES, I USED THE JAPANESE TERMS BECAUSE THEY FELT MORE APPROPRIATE THAN THE ENGLISH TRANSALATIONS. SHOUSHO MEANS VICE ADMIRAL. TAISA MEANS CAPTAIN.
