A Royal Friend

by frozen belle and olivia

Reason for being in Truly Unique – Proof of potential. And I like the idea.

I shall admit, I am putting this on also for slightly personal reasons.

I like this story, I like the idea, and those of you that follow some of my other works might some day see why. (Assuming I actually start publishing more then once in a blue moon.)

This story, unlike the others made this author, is original, cute, the transitioning works, and other then the fact that it is again all one paragraph; I can find no fault in it.

This is one of the reasons why I always look at other things authors have done, even if I don't like another work of theirs, and the one that this author asked me to put up that I reviewed previously, I hated.

But just as bad as that one was, this one is just as good.

I truly do wish this author the best, and hope they do well. But I, being the bad speller I am, will be the first one to tell you that editing and so forth has killed many a good story, and that unless you write something that grabs you the first line and doesn't let go, no one can escape the need to observe at least the most basic of grammar rules, namely, that when ever something changes (location, person speaking, time, etc.) you need a new paragraph.

Case in point. Authors like Twyla Mercedes, LizzeXX, Ravenclaw992, and DaesGatling are authors that have always worked hard to produce a good product, and it shows. Even when you hate something they've done, you can't help but keep reading.

Now, I'd read something they wrote on a napkin in crayon with they're bad hand upside down, because I know that if I can make out the illegible words, I will find a masterpiece.

Other authors, myself chief among them, do not have that luxury. We need to work hard, edit, proofread, and check the Oxford and Webster's dictionary to make sure we spelled every word right. Because even though I try to make a story half as good as one of theirs, it's not even ¼ as good, and one editing mistake or spelling error and I get a thousand bad reviews.

So, I showed you a bad story from this author that is not worth the effort of trying to figure out what is going on, here is one that I think is worth that effort, especially if she keeps going on it.