Cancelled (Sort of)

For anyone who has been reading my story for a long time, this is no surprise. I've been waiting too long and the story sort of fell off the edge towards to end so I am ending it for the time being.

The future?

In the current state that the story is in, it will not continue BUT.. The story isn't dead. I will be getting all of the documents back (As my laptop broke and had to get a new one, losing everything), structure them in terms of plot then rewrite them so there is less mistakes and, hopefully, to a higher quality.

Changes to the story?

There is going to be a lot of change, including the removal of some characters. Here is the list of main character that are going to stay

Ash (Of Course)

Delia (Referenced less)

James

Dawn (Of Course)

Father (If you've read the story you know why)

Brock

Barry

Garry

Coeden

Dio

Rufus

Members of gangs

Ethan and Jimmy are sort of up in the air, they may or may not be in

(There might be other characters that I have forgotten and will either stay in or be dropped)

The biggest change comes from the Pokemon (Ones that are staying)

Ash's Pokemon

Pikachu (Pi)

Charizard

Umbreon

(Full team only referenced in battles)

Coeden's Team

Luca

And his children (Leon(with Veigus), Rio, Ryusui

And ex-wife (Whatever she was called I forgot)

Zoroark (Zoro)

His children (Yin and Yang)

Raichu

Father Of Pi

Gengar

Father of... No one (*Plays "All By My Self"*)

Darkrai

Has a major role in the story line

Barry's Pokemon

Referenced only in battle

Garry's Pokemon

Referenced only in battle aside from Radicate

Ethan and Jimmy's Pokemon

I don't think they have any battles during the early to mid story (Hint Hint)

Any Other Character's Pokemon

Won't be referenced. Possibly at the end, but that's only a possibility

Meaning that Characters like:

Ley

Mari

Twitch

Lot's of Coeden's Pokemon

Etc

Won't be included until the prequel or they'll be incorporated into a story which is basically the back story for this story but is within another universe.

Reasons For The Changes And General Causes For Issues Within The Story

Issue 1: Amount Of Characters

I think I may have bitten off more than I could chew with this story. I had way too many characters (I think there was at least 80 (Including Pokemon and some side characters that weren't referenced yet like Twitch)) Meaning that trying to incorporate them all into the story proved to be difficult and made it so characters didn't get the attention they deserved/ needed.

Issue 2: Time Frame

I was writing too much and without a lot of thought. Trying to turn out chapters weekly is hard to do and because of the speed of which I was writing, it lowered the quality greatly.

Issue 3: Interest

Towards the end, I was writing less for me and more for you. I got upset if I didn't upload a chapter a week and I would write even when I didn't want to, which became apparent to some of you.

Issue 4: My Age

I stared to write this when I was in year 10 of secondary school, which was nearly two years ago (Fuck I'm late doing this xD) and during this time, I was failing in English with an average grade of an E. If I'm being 100% honest, I started writing this story half because I wanted to and half as training to be able to write. Now that I'm coming up to 17, I think now I'm more able to tackle this story properly. (PS, I got my shit together in English and got a B in both the coursework and mocks but ended up with a C overall in the actual exam)

Now, since I've gotten course work to do in 6th form as well as normal work, I won't have enough time to be able to write as fast as I used to, which I suppose is a good thing. I'm not going to set myself a date in which I will get each chapter out on or even when I'll start as I want to take my time. I know I've said that before but this time I'm older and wiser and I want to both be more proud in my writing and make anyone who reads it happy.

I've not said this in nearly two years but, I'm back now.

Until Next Time