Hey guys so sorry about the long update. School has finished so hopefully i can get another chapter up very soon.

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Tris POV

He seemed so real in this moment. He seemed happy, excited maybe. He looked at me again, wrapping his arms tighter around my waist. He looked confused, maybe conflicted to do something.

I looked at him, confused about what he was thinking. He looked at my lips, then back out my eyes. Is Four thinking about kissing me? I looked at his lips too. He had a full upper lip, making wish I could suck on it right now. He seemed to be leaning in, an then I blanked out.


I seemed to be rushing, rushing to go somewhere. I stopped suddenly, looking at the waterfall we where at now. I look around and see myself and Four, sitting together on a rock, listening to a story Edward was telling us. Four seemed to be enjoying himself. I try to look around, but my vision was fixed on this scene.

Something seemed to be moving in the water behind Edward. I try to look closer, but nothing seemed to work. All of the sudden, Edward is dragged under the water. We all look frantic, searching for him. After a while, something seems to be floating up from the depths of the water, and there rises, Edwards head.


I gasped a little and blink a couple of times. Four is fixed his sight on my eyes. He seems relieved to see me awake. "What the hell just happened?" I ask him, a little tired.

"I don't know, one minute your with me, talking, next your eyes turn white. You were out for like a minute then you came back".

"What does this mean?" I ask him. He seem to be thinking about it for a second, before looking back at me.

"Maybe you had a vision? My mother used to get them a lot, that was her power. Maybe you have another power. Did you see something?".

I stopped listening after he mentioned vision. What if it was a vision. My eyes go wide and I look around. Everyone was in the water, having fun. What if what ever had gotten Edward was already in here?

"Four we need to get everyone out of the water. Now" I tell him. He seems confused but I pull away from his grip and swim to the rocks. I stand on them and make my announcement.

"Everyone needs to get out of the water now!" I yell at them. They seem to not care, looking at me then going back to there activities. I look at Four he looks conflicted with my announcement.

What if he doesn't believe me? He looks at me before swimming towards me. "What did you see Tris?" he asks me.

"There is something in the water, I saw it okay? It took Edward and it ripped his head off!" everyone needs to get out of the water. Please Four help me" I beg him. He looks at me, sighs, then swims to the others. I look around the water for a bit, questioning my vision.

Maybe I just blanked out for a bit, and just dreamed something bad. I look around the water again and see something dark move around.

It seemed too big to be human, too small to be a shark or crocodile. I freak a little, covering my mouth to scream. I look at Four who has gotten everyone to follow him.

I point at the thing moving around to Four. He looks down and opens his mouth. He looks shocked, then looks at me.

"Everyone stop!" he yells at them. "Don't move a muscle, don't move a fucking muscle" he tells them. They all look down and share the same shocked look as Four. I try to figure out what to do, how to distract this thing before it eats all my friends. I look around and find a big rock.

I walk over to it and try to roll it in the water. It was really heavy, so heavy it made me tired, but I had to do something before something bad happened. I pushed with all my might before the rock moved effortlessly into the water.

I look at Four, who has his hand raised. He obviously moved it. The rock made a big splash in the water. The creature stopped circling them, and rushed over to the rock. Everyone started to swim as fast as they could, to the other direction as what the creature was.

I didn't seem to notice them until the last second. Edward was still in the water, attempting to get out. He helped Myra get out, before he started to climb the rock wall. The creature swam faster then any creature I have ever seen.

"Edward!" I screamed to him, but it was too late. He was dragged under the water. Myra screamed his name over and over. She was crying. I fell to my knees and bowed my head. I couldn't save my friend. I couldn't do anything. I felt defeated in this moment. I knew this was going to happen. And I still didn't save him.

I watched the water, seeing something float to the surface. "Turn Myra around!" I yell at Four, which he did immediately.

And what floated to the surface was Edwards head. That was when I started to cry. I held my head in my hands and cried. I felt someone pick me up, and held onto me tightly. I pulled back to see Four. He smiled weakly at me.

He sat down and pulled me into his lap."Im so sorry Tris" is all he tells me. I look over his shoulder at my friends, who are comforting Myra.

"How are we going to explain what that was?" I ask Four, he looks at me, then at the water. He opens his mouth multiple times, opening and closing it. "We say we think it was a crocodile" he tells me.

"You know that wasn't anything like a animal" I tell him. He glares at me before looking away. "I know, but I don't want to explain to your friends and the police about a strange mystical creature ate your friend. Would you like too?".

I look back at him and sigh. He was right. This wasn't the place or time to explain the supernatural to them. I slowly stood up and walked back to my friends.


The police came and questioned us about the event that unfolded. I hate this, I didn't like being interrogated. The police officer, named Bill was asking so many questions to me. He wanted to know how I found out about the 'crocodile'.

Four squeezed my hand and talked for me. He didn't let me go into room without him. He demanded that we stayed together, making it clear to everyone there.

"Are you sure that was what you saw?" Bill questioned me again. I nodded my head for the forth time, and Four let out a frustrated sigh. "You have asked that so many times, you know that right?" Four seemed to threaten that statement.

He squeezed my hand harder, making me squirm a little. He looked over at me and whispered a sorry.

"Okay kids. Were sorry about your friend. We will let you go home to sleep, and then maybe we will come to visit, with some help to get over this".

"We don't need help" Four gritted through his teeth. "What he meant was that we probably don't want anyone to see is for a couple of days".

Four glared at me. He wasn't happy. Bill nodded his head and let us go. Four held onto my hand the whole ride home. He leaned his head on my shoulder and fell asleep. As he slept, I cried. I couldn't face the fact that I saw my friend die before me.

We got out of the police car and thanked Bill for driving us home. I walked into my room, moving like a robot. I got changed and climbed under the sheets. Four walked into my room and crawled under too.

He pulled me close and hugged me tight. I cried and cried into his shirt the whole time. He held me and stroked my hair. He whispered sweet nothings into my ear, and finally I feel asleep in his arms.

I woke up to movement. Four was sitting up on the edge of the bed, looking out the window. I sat up a little as well. He turned slightly then focused back outside. I crawled behind him and wrapped myself around his back. I rested my head on his shoulder and looked outside as well. The moon was bright and full.

Four grabbed my hands and rubbed circles in them. "We weren't close. Hell I wasn't even his friend. But we talked you know? We talked and we had fun. And then his head… it was hard I couldn't… I didn't know what to do. I've never, and I mean never seen a death like that". Four explained to me.

I squeezed his hands and sighed. "I know you guys where close", Four told me "But it sucks you know. We could have done something, anything and we didn't".

I pulled back a little and stared at him. He turned to face me, concern listed on his face.

"I did do something. If I hadn't gotten that vision we would all be dead now. I tried Four. I tried but obviously its not enough right?" I started to cry. I can't believe he said that. I did everything!

"I know, I'm sorry Tris. I just wish we could have done something else, you know?" I look away from him and sigh. He grabbed my hand and held it. I looked at our hands, connected.

I looked back at Four, who seemed a little broken. I reach over to him, but stop when my vision takes me to another world.


I look around the room, which seems to be dauntless. It looks like a cell room. I look around and see my mother, locked up in chains. She seems to be struggling, hard. I try to reach for her, but nothing seems to work.

I watch the door open and I see Marcus Eaton walk in. I stare shocked as he reaches down to my mother and slaps her. I scream but no one seems to hear me. He laughs before walking around her.

"Oh Natalie, what where you thinking? Did you really think sending your daughter away was safe for her. Sure my son is with her, but apparently she went swimming today in her favourite spot! How exciting! But unfortunately that is the exact spot I placed my sea monster in. Whoops! I guess she won't be coming back then, oh well. After I capture dauntless, I will become leader and rule the world!".

She starts to cry, very hard. She struggles and struggles against the restraints, but nothing seems to budge. Marcus laughs again before slapping her hard.

She falls to the ground, unconscious. Marcus leaves the room, and slams the door shut. I fall to my knees and cry. In just a day, Marcus had captured my mother, and is now planning to capture Dauntless.

My vision starts to move faster forward, into a white wall. I brace myself for the pain but wake up.


I blink a couple of times before whispering the one name that will determine my future; "Marcus".


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