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Tris POV
as hard as I tried to make it look like nothing had happened in the last 24 hours, everyone seemed to know what had happened. I walked past staring eyes, trying to find someone in partially. I looked down, to depressed to act normal. This wasn't right, all this was getting to my head and I hated it. Why did the vision tell a lie? This wasn't right. I needed answers.

I hugged myself tightly, trying to get past those who thought I was crazy. Maybe I was going crazy. I wasn't being myself. I hadn't been myself these last couple of days. Going home helped maybe, but Edward… that broke me.

He was my best-friend. We always hung out, and then we met Myra. She had moved to neighbourhood, and they instantly clicked. Love at first sight I guess.

They were always around each other, being all cute and lovey-dovey. We found that spot, and always hung out there. But now just thinking about it made me feel sick to my stomach.

I walked to the bar and found Christina. I know. Maybe not the best choice, but right now, she was the only trying to help. Everyone else seemed to be like Four. Confused, annoyed, upset.

I walked towards her and sat down. she turned to me and smiled.

"How you feeling, I could feel everything you went through. We followed you guys, to see what you were doing. It was weird. You had a vision, and I saw it. I believe you Tris. Maybe not everyone else, but I do. I also felt the pain you went through. That was painful".

I tired to smile, but it didn't seem worth it. She dragged me away from the bar and took me to what I believed was going to be her room. She opened the door to reveal a smaller apartment then Four's. it was filled with pretty things. Unlike Four who designed his room as if no one would stay there for long. I wonder why?

We walked to a very comfy couch and sat down. she seemed to like staring at me, or maybe she was in my mind again.

"Stop thinking so hard. Just relax". She told me. I scolded at her, which made her laugh. Christina wasn't all bad. she seemed too excited some times, but other times she was very nice to you.

"You want something to drink? I have water, soft drink, alcohol?" she said as she walked to the fridge. I smiled and shock my head. She stared a little longer before getting two cups of water. I frowned and realised that I was thirsty, but she just happened to notice.

"Thank you" I said as she sat down, handing me my cup. I smiled and took a sip of the cold water. I felt it go all the way down my throat. It made me feel better for some reason.

"You should go talk to Four. I know he thinks what everyone won't say but you guys have something special. The way he talks about you, and how you guys look at each other. You guys were made to be".

I was shocked with what she told me. I thought back to the times when Four wasn't mad at me. Yeah, I guess we were good together, but as a couple? I don't know.

"Just think about it Tris. I have to go to work, but I'll see you later okay? Leave when ever you want".

and then she left me. I thought about what she said and smiled. I guess me and Four would be good together. We id nearly kiss, I think. I mean he did lean in, and I'm pretty sure he wanted to kiss me.

I walked out of Christina's apartment sure of myself. I walked to Four's apartment, unsure if he wanted to even see me. I stopped at the door and waited.

I don't know what I was waiting for though. Up until now Four and I were great. We actually enjoyed each others company. But now he thinks I was joking, and he was very mad at me.

I waited forever until I decided to knock on the door. I regretted at that moment knocking, knowing he probably doesn't want to see me. I heard shuffling behind the door, and wanted to run away from the situation, but as soon as I started to turn around, he opened the door.

I didn't know what to say to him. He looked tired. He was probably sleeping. I would too, we haven't been sleeping well lately. I smiled and tried to say something, but nothing seemed to work.

"You wanna come in Tris?" he asked sleepily. I nodded and walked past him into his apartment. I liked it in here. The words on the wall were comforting in a way. He always had it tidy In here.

He sat down on his couch, looking at me while I looked around the room. I walked over to a table full of old photos and found one of a young boy and his mother.

"Was this you?" I asked him, showing the photo to him. He nodded and sighed.

"That was my tenth birthday. Before my mom died" he told me. I looked at him and saw him watching me, curious about what I was doing.

"How did your dad kill her?" I blurted out. I knew he was conflicted to answer me, but I wanted an answer. How could someone be so cruel into killing his own wife?

"He shot her. right in front of me. I watched her die Tris. I watched he bleed to death and I couldn't do anything about it".

He seemed to be hurt. I sat next to him and held his hand. I rested my head on his shoulder and sighed.

"Something isn't right around here Four. And I know you can feel it too".

"Yeah, something isn't right. Ever since we came here, your mom has been acting weird. I see how you look at her when she talks to you. It's like you don't even know who she is".

I sat up and looked at him. He looked straight at me and seemed to catch on.

"What if it isn't my mom?" I ask him. He seemed to think it over, questioning my opinion.

"I don't know Tris. She might have changed since your dad died. But if it isn't, where's your mom?".

I tried to think back to the vision, trying to find other clues. I thought hard, trying to get back into it, and then I saw white.


My mother, tied up. The vision. I look around, seeming to be able to move now. My visions where letting have control now. Maybe not as much as I would like, but it was helping.

I walked past Marcus, and went outside the door. I gasped and realised what I missed.

This wasn't dauntless. I was somewhere else. This wasn't where I thought she would be. Marcus was smart. He knew I wouldn't know any other places. I tried to walk a little further, but I couldn't. I couldn't tell where I was.

I looked around the cell room, and realised all the other rooms where glass, not cement like my mothers. Marcus tricked me.

I started to feel something, someone pulling me back to reality.


"Hey, its weird looking at you while your in it. Your eyes turn white, and you just sit there, its fascinating" he questioned me.

"I know where she is Four".

He seemed to look a little sad at me. "Tris, she's fine, she's not here".

"I know she isn't here, she is at a place with glass. I don't know where that is but the other cells where made of glass Four. He tricked me. He made me think she was here, and made me look like an idiot".

He thought it over and realisation crossed his face.

"She's at Erudite. There the smart ones of our kind, research us, find out stuff about our kind. Jeanine Mathews looks after Erudite, she isn't the kindest person, but she has to do whatever you want".

"Tris, I believe you okay? I did the whole time. I don't know why I questioned it. It confused me. I thought that maybe the vision was telling you it would happen, but it wasn't like that. I don't know what I'm trying to say, but I'm sorry I made you feel like that".

I smiled at him and without even thinking about it, I kissed his cheek. I blushed when I pulled back and smiled at him. He smiled at me as well, before pulling me into a hug.

"We'll find her, but we need someone to come with us" he pulled back, but keeping the distance between us.

I could feel his breathe on my skin, my face. He was so close that if I just leaned forward, I could kiss him. I was conflicted wether or not too, but all too soon he pulled back and went into his room.

I sighed and got changed as well, as my clothes where in here.

Once we were changed we went to find Lynn, Zeke and Shauna. They all agreed to come with us, and help me save my mother. I smiled at them and thanked them all for helping.

"Of course we will help, were friends" Lynn told me. She seemed to not care in the past about me, but things changed I guess.

We were about to zip away when my mother found me. Well, in this case, I don't know who this person was.

"Where are you going Beatrice?" she asked me. Four was reluctant to leave my side. He held my hand, tightly hoping that squeezing my hand might do something in this situation.

"We were going out for dinner" I said, hoping this person would trust me enough. She looked confused then looked at the group.

"I don't think that's a good idea, remember what happened last time". I looked down and tried not to remember what happened last time I left to go out in public. Did she really need to bring it up? Whoever this was didn't like to see me happy.

"I assure you Natalie that Tris will be fine. She's with me" Four told her. he seemed to be cross at her. it wasn't helpful in this moment at all.

"it seems lately Four that you haven't been a good guardian to my daughter. I'd rather one of my security look after her".

did she really just say that. I looked at Four who was fuming. "Mom, he has been amazing to me, we are going out for dinner, that's it, then we will come straight here. I promise you". I was mad at her. she just insulted Four.

"Fine, but one of my men will be going with you"

"Fine" I said back. She looked cross at me before motioning to one of her men to come with us.

I had never seen him before around here, so obviously this was the persons own people. The bad people.

I looked at Four who was already looking at me. We had no hope now.

We formed at group before Lynn zipped us out of Dauntless, and into a small Café. We all looked at each other before I looked at the guy. He was tall, very tall. He had black clothing on. His blond hair was slicked back and it made him look younger.

"You can sit somewhere else" I told him before dragging Four away to a booth. Everyone else followed us. I was put in the middle while the others trapped me in.

"We need a plan, we cant wait much longer right?" I told them, whispering. Afraid that he could hear us.

"Yeah, I don't know what to do. We need to figure out how to get him out of here".

I thought about what Shauna said and realised what to do. Distract him.

"Shauna, you go over to him, make him go outside for some reason and then we will go". Everyone seemed okay with this and we went into game mode.

Shauna left us while the rest of us waited for her. she looked very upset and made the guy go outside. She must be a good actress because I would never been able to do that. Once he was outside, Shauna sprinted back to us and then we were gone.

We landed somewhere in a glass building, and I realised where we were. Erudite.