I am about to be hated. I am breaking this story into parts as it was written originally - thus NINH is the last chapter of the first part. Once my other story is completed I can devote more time to pounding this one out which is why I'm doing this. The second part will be posted as soon as life allows me to. Don't fret because I am not abandoning this.
I really wanted to be able to make this one pop since I later plan to have it published under it's original form. So with a massive re-write of the chapter to follow looming over my head I'm doing this so you will have an ending so to speak and while this is not the most optimal ending I could hope for- I do have to re-work the 'Earth' scenario (which I'm not using) and get the other G-boys into the story - ie. Quatre- and all the other little duckies in a row so that it all comes together.
This is what happens when you all ready have three version of the same story and can't figure where to go- so I'm going back to the original which was only about 500 pages long -short and sweet. However it didn't go into a lot of detail- hence the re-writes and completely ignored the middle part after he vanished.
So stand fast my friends and I'll have this one walking on it's own before you know it.
