Here it is! Constructive criticism and reviews are appreciated:) This is more of a connecting chapter so not much happening , enjoy!
Ch6
I feel funny inside. No really. Qui Gon took me to the council today. They didn't like me very much I could tell. It was like they could see right through me and I felt like a piece of poodoo. But Kai and Qui Gon were their so it wasn't that scary. They asked me to tell them what the picture they were looking at was. It didn't really make sense how am I supposed to see a picture if their hiding it. But they said that I passed the test so I guess my guesses were correct or something. It was like I could see what they were looking at. It was wizard but weird at the same time.
Then Qui Gon said he would train me and the council didn't like that. Kai didn't say anything but I could tell he was angry at Qui Gon as well. I don't get why their all mad but Kai said that it's because I'm force sensitive and the council doesn't know what to do with me. I've been hanging out with him while Qui Gon was being "disciplined" by the council, that's what Kai told me. I thought it meant whipped or beaten or something but Kai said Jedi don't do that ever.
I don't like it here at all. All the children stare at me like they don't know it's rude too. They didn't so much when Kai was sitting next to me and telling be about the fastest star ship which was wizard! But he was called into the council for something I don't know what. N'I miss mom a lot. I miss the shop too but not Watto I wouldn't have minded if he died either but Qui Gon said Jedi don't think about things like that and killing innocents. But Watto wasn't innocent he was money grubber like a Hutt'N he made me and mom overwork and no person should have to be like that. I don't get why the Jedi havn't done anything about it yet I mean Jedi are supposed to blitz bad guys and save people all I see em doing here is meditating. How's that gonna save people?
I wanna become a Jedi so I could free all the slaves'n save everyone. I said that to Kai but he just looked at me all sad'n stuff except he didn't look sad cause Jedi aren't supposed to apparently give in to their personal feelings or some Poodoo like that but I felt it all around him'n it was weird. N'he told me Jedi can't save everyone'n I said I would be the first one'n and he gave me this strange look like he was impressed but scared of me at the same time for some reason'n then he said he had to go speak to the council'n I don't get what's got everyone so worked up I mean all Jedi are like me force sensitive'n stuff so why don't they like me? I wanna see Padme but Qui Gon said I have to wait. I don't wanna wait I'm free now right? Doesn't being free sorta mean you get to do whatever you want as long as you're not bothering anyone else? Everythings different now'n I just want my mom'n I'm not crying now it's just theirs something in my eye, is all.
The council was furious with me. I stood at the center of their onslaught. Their wrath rolled around in the force and I stood at the center in the eye of the hurricane.
"The boy is dangerous, he will not be trained" Master Windu declared on behalf of the entire order with a finality proving that they indeed had been arguing for the past hour and a half over the matter.
"Not any more dangerous then you" I mused. The council however was not predisposed to argue on the subject nor appreciated my humor. Mace shot me a look that would wither any initiate.
"If he is left untrained he could harm not only himself but those around him. You would place the innocent in danger my Masters?" This was a sabak game and one I often played with Kai.
"First time to argue on this with us it is not, knows the council now what danger training late is, prove this yourself you have." Yoda's eyes dangerously studied me the force gathering around him in a displeasure which targeted me in particular.
I sidestepped the blow evading it. "Xanatos had not been seen since my last fight with him on Bandomeer, he could have amended his ways." My plea fell on deaf ears. I pleaded silently with my apprentice who had only recently entered. He was adamant however in remaining the neutral party.
"This is no ordinary request," drawled master Dooku, "You have gone too far this time Qui Gon." "Your pity for pathetic life forms is one thing however this vergence in the force if addressed will not be trained by you."
"He is well acquainted with me, I don't see why not."
"Argue on this you will not young one, question the order you will not, trained the boy will not be, a repeat of Xanatos this order need not." The troll's ears wagged at me in reprimand. "Leave now you will, meditate on this, sending you to help taking back Naboo we are."
As a post note and to wrap up some loose ends for the next chapter: for anyone wondering where Bruck Chun is since in the cannon he and Kenobi were rivals in this one Kenobi was sent to the Agri corps so they stopped being rivals in a sense. Because Bruck didn't get a master his father disowned him in this one since it is a great honor for one to become a Jedi especially among the wealthy so it is a great dishonor when one is force sensitive but is does not become a Jedi so he is also sent to the Agri Corps. Xanatos would have apprenticed him but he was on the run from the council and was soon contacted by Lord Sideous and by the time things settled down Bruck was already dead. It will be explained in later chapters. Also, at this point the Jedi order hesitant to make a decision hence the long arguing. In the cannon Xanatos died but now Xanatose had 6 years of evading the council who knows how many apprentices or allies he now has and it's not that easy to escape a temple full of Jedi who can detect your every move in the force so they are worried because they can't sense him anymore. So they really don't want a repeat of Xanatos.
