Okay so I'm so happy/excited. I just posted a new chapter yesterday and I got like 10 email alerts from saying people were following and commenting on my stories!

So I would like to say a big thanks to:

Rifa(guest)

Karjens44

Y'all made me super excited and your comments made me feel really good, and I wasn't planning on writing another chapter yet but because y'all were so awesome I thought I'd do it. So here it is.

Summary: what if Red never Killed Peter? What if something else happened? What if he lost something? A Hand, I suppose? What if he replaced that hand with a hook?

Disclaimer: I Do NOT own the story; I wish I did though

"Let me see" Cora said pulling the map out of his hands "I don't see it"

"That's because I'm the only one who can see It if she's wearing it"

"Oh isn't that sweet"

"She is in this place called, um…storybrooke"

"Oh well I know exactly where that is."

Storybrook after the curse…

"This is an odd looking place." Hook said looking around

"Of course it is" Cora stared "it's a place where there are no happily ever after's"

"Does a place like that actually exist?"

"Well you're here right now, in a place that has no happily ever after's"

"Anyway it looks like she's down this road"

"How do you know she still looks the same?"

"I followed her around and she never changed"

"But didn't you go out to sea, so you couldn't have seen her since"

"I ran into her one time, she didn't know it was me because I looked so different, and I had a hook on my hand"

"Well why didn't you tell her"

Flashback to Enchanted forest before the curse

I hadn't seen her in five years, and I thought having someone else in her place would help me forget. Milah, was her name, I loved her, but not as much as I loved Red. I was heartbroken when she was killed but, I knew Red still loved me.

"Hook" Smee called "we need some more supplies"

"Then go get some"

"But they won't let us get that much without the captain"

"Fine if I must"

I hated going into town so many people, they looked at me scared with my hook hand, but that was mostly children, I got a lot of flirtatious looks from girls, probably because of my killer good looks.

Anyway that day what threw me off course was when I heard a girl dressed in blue yelled "Hey Red, Slowdown"

Red? I only heard that name once before. But it couldn't be… I mean, no, it's just a coincidence then I heard the voice

"No hurry up, you slow poke!"

The voice ha a playful sound, it was happy, it had a soothing flow to it. I turned around and saw the back of a red cape and long black hair

"Hey were not all from the dog family" the girl running after her teased

Then she stopped and turned around, her hair flipping to one side as she put her finger up to her lips and said "Shhhh not everyone needs to know" she smiled and laughed and the two girls walked away talking and laughing.

She was even more beautiful then I remembered, she had grown up even more, and I didn't realize it now but she dropped something and when she bended down to pick it up I saw the locket around her neck. She still loved me.

Back in Storybrook…..

Ding!

"Ruby can you get that?" granny yelled

"I'm on my lunch break" I yelled back looking back at my magazine

"You're not even eating!"

"So?"

"So unless you want to live on the streets, I suggest you tend to that customer"

"Ugggggg, fine" I said slipping of the table in the break room and putting my magazine back on the table. Grabbing my red apron and tying it around my slim waste and picking up my note pad and pen and walking into the restraint to table number three.

"Hi," then I paused "oh I've never seen you before, anyway I'm Ruby, can I get you something to eat or drink"

He then looked up and smiled, he was pretty cute, although it looked like he was wearing, eyeliner? "I'll take rum and I'm Killian Jones or as most people call me Captain Hook" he said raising up his hook in the place where his left hand should be.

So I think by all far y'all are the best set of followers, for this story, so I need your help, I'm not sure what should happen next so could y'all help me out and give me some ideas in the reviews. please! it would help a lot, and thanks again y'all. so REVIEW! please...

-Mel