Hey fans! Sorry for the short chapter last time, this is my first real story that I've thought about for a long time, and I'm thinking about sending this as a game pitch to Nintendo! So I hope you like it so far!
And p.s, the character Nik has no relation to my profile name. Nik (nIke [like the shoe but without the ee sound]) just sounds like a hylian name.
Key: italicized words are the thoughts of the character
Nik: it's also your gamer tag on-
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Enjoy!
Pov: lik
Nik! Come on it's been 2 hours since I told you to get up! It's going to be a busy day today! We have to go to the castle town market to buy supplies! Ugh! He never listens.
Nik: I'm up! I'm up! Good goddess you're loud.
C'mon man! Before mom died, she told us to take care of each other, which means getting up and ready to go to the market.
Nik: you just wanna see Zelda!
(Lik blushes blood red) What! No I don't!
Nik: ya you do. You wouldn't be freaking out right now if you didn't.
Just shut up and get ready!
Pov switch: Nik
Ah castle town! So beautiful here! Lik's probably thinking about something else beautiful besides castle town.
Lik: ah Zelda, what a pleasure to see you here!
Heh, a pleasure for Lik!
(Lik hits his brother in the stomach with his elbow)
Oof. Hey!
Lik: So how are you princess?
Zelda: I could be better. I had a fight with my father. He's acting a little off this morning, but I don't know why… … hey lik.
Lik: huh?
Zelda: you're staring at me.
(Lik blushes)
Lik: uhhhh, heh heh.
Anyways, why did you come to castle town?
Zelda: because I knew today is your market day, and I needed to talk to you guys about something in the courtyard.
Both: okay.
End of chapter two.
So how did you like it? Post reviews! And if you don't have a profile, well, make one!
I will try to update on Saturday 10/19/13
See ya
All: bye!