Hey people!
First off, thank you so much for reading one of my little fanfictions! I just wanted to inform you all of some changes I've made to the story.
I've finally fixed the beginning of chapter one! The italics were all scrunched up together because I didn't double space. So if you had trouble reading that part, I'm super sorry and hope you will understand what's going on now!
I changed Hinata's pearly blue eyes to pearly lavender ones. I also changed Rock Lee's words from, "YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME: I AM ROCK LEE OF THE LEAF VILLAGE!" to "YOU WILL NEVER DEFEAT ME! I AM ROCK LEE: THE LEAF VILLAGE'S GREEN BEAST!" I uploaded like 5 different versions of chapter one in 10 minutes. XD I just kept spotting things I wanted to change.
In chapter 6, I changed the Doctor's ridiculous name from, "Dr. Ocuchiadaldhnaekugff" (…I don't even remember! XD ) to, "Dr. Eeyeshi" which is Japanese for healing. I'm just spelling everything phonetically!
And lastly, I changed the, "Arigato…" to, "Thank you Doctor…"
Darn! I even had to change the Author's note! Sorry, I also changed the mean kids Chant to, "No ninjutsu, no genjutsu!" from, "No ninjutsu, no niejutsu…?" (Nope can't remember it.)
I've also changed shiriken to shuriken, which I can't believe I missed that! _ Thank you GRAMMAR NAZI for letting me know!
Also, I'm not quite sure when the time period is, I wanted it to be in the Shippuden period (Because they're so much cooler XD) But during the Shippuden series Neji and Lee respect each other and I placed them in a hateful period much like the ones in the original series. But during a training session between Lee and Hinata, I gave her long hair suggesting that it's during Shippuden. So I'm gonna say that the first and second chapter is during the time of the original series, and the third chapter has time-skipped to the shippuden period where in my series Hinata has lost her stutter around Lee. I should make the time more clear, so thank you Woodshrew! I hope that cleared it up a bit!
Again, thank you for reading this extensive author's note! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU so much for being patient and lenient with my writer's block season of not updating. I think it's almost over!
-YMM