Redemption

by TakeEveryRiskDropEveryFear

"YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND, SO STOP TRYING TO!" She yelled. They don't get it, they don't know how it feels to see someone die right before your eyes. Family of Two, Dad isn't around, Senseless Gang violence targeting and killing innocent people. she saw the murderers' faces, and they haunt her wherever she goes. That once sweet girl became bitter, and spoke to no one. Her life changes

7. ending

I finally wrote that song. It feels great, finally finishing it.

I stood on the dock looking at the water..

I went outside for some air. I was alone outside by myself. CRACK!

"All I wanted was forgiveness, and you wouldn't even give me that, that's all I wanted was redemption."

"You don't deserve it, how could you just take a life, just like that...why are you here?"

"I'm here for you, since You won'Y give it ti me, then I won't get it, and you won't see tomorrow."

My breathing became sharp, I felt something sharp, at the small of my back.

"Have a nice night, Ally."

I felt the knife go in, I could feel the blood begin to pour out. So this is how my mother died, slowly, and painfully.

I don't want to leave, I actually like it here. I felt tears roll down my cheeks, I let out a little whimper.

I stood up on my feet and removed the knife. I dropped it on the dock, I fell to my knees, then my hands. All I remember is hearing frantic screams, a splash, then nothing. Everything went dark.

I woke up groggily, surrounded y literally everyone.

"what happened?"

"You were stabbed, and Dallas tripped over your body, and fell into the lake and drowned." That escalated quickly.

"what did he want?"

"redemption, I didn't give it to him, he didn't deserve it"

Everything is practically over, my mom's dead, Dallas is dead, my dad doesn't give a crap enough to call, and I feel good, my mom's at peace, and I'm happy for that. I'm happy for everything I have now...

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I just needed to end this story. :/