Rise 'n' Shine chapter 11

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Tobias pov

~3 DAYS LATER~

I miss Tris so much.

It's Thursday now, I just got back from the hospital.

Flashback

"Four, I'm sorry but I knows it's only been 5 days but Tris is in a critical condition. She was hit pretty hard with the object. We have the police on the case. But, if Tris doesn't wake up tonight she may not survive..."

End of Flashback

If Tris doesn't wake up tonight she may not live. She may not live. Not entirely "sorry Four, If your girlfriend here doesn't wake up tonight. She will magically die under our permission." This is all crap! Sure she's in a critical condition! I just want Tris back! I pick up my iphone and scroll down my contacts. When I see Zeke's name I smash my thumb onto the screen. I needed someone to help me calm down.

"Hey, bro! Herd about Trissy. I'm sorry." He's acting as if it were a joke...

"This is not a joke Zeke!" I scream.

"Wow, dude, I wasn't meaning it as a joke! Okay?"

"You just don't understand! You've only known her for a week!"

"And so have you! Four, you need to calm down..."

"I CAN'T CALM DOWN!" I screech. You could hear me a mile away. "THE BEST THING THAT EVER HAPPENED TO ME IS IN HOSPITAL! IF TRIS DOESN'T WAKE UP TONIGHT SHE WILL NOT LIVE! DO YOU NOT UNDERSTAND THE PHRASE 'WILL NOT SURVIVE'?" The line goes dead, my phone vibrates, signalling a text.

"I'm not talking to you until you calm down. You sound as if you want to murder someone. I'm not letting it be me. Talk when you are more happy and perky! – Z" I throw my phone at the wall and break down. My parents aren't home, luckily. I would be in so much trouble if they were. (Quick A/N, Marcus doesn't abuse Tobias in this, sorry for confusion :/ ) I slam my door open and stomp down the stairs, into the kitchen. A knife is sitting on the chopping board, I grab it, not remembering what life means, and cut 5 lines into my skin. One for Tris, who may not live. One for my friends who don't care the way I do. One for the stupidity of us at the party. One for the pain if she doesn't wake. And one for me, who I can't control. I fall to the ground, chucking the knife at the wall. The knife sticks for a second, before crashing to the floor. I hear the front door open and someone pile in. I sob quietly, hoping that is it's my parents, they don't find me. I hear the kitchen door open and someone gasp. Oh crap.

"Tobias!" Mum and Dad are home, great. Note the sarcasm please. I groan and she rolls me over. I look sternly into her eyes.

"Hello." I say sadly. Mum pulls me up onto her lap.

"Marcus! Get here now! I need your help!" No one answers. "MARCUS! YOUR SON IS HURT!"

"Okay! Okay! What?" When he sees me his jaw drops. I lean against Mum's chest, blood is going everywhere.

"Get the bandages!" Mum yells. Dad reaches into a cupboard and pulls out a small box. He grabs a tea towel and starts to sop up the blood ejecting my arm. He un-wraps a bandage. Why am I letting him do this? Just as he is about to place it on my arm I jerk back. Dad looks shocked and confused.

"No." I say sternly. I stand up out of Mum's arms. "No."

"Tobias, yes. Sit back down!" Mum says. I glare at her.

"No!"

"Tobias, is this about Tri-" I cut her off.

"Don't even say her name!" I scream. "YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW HARD THIS IS! I DID THIS FOR MY OWN SAKE! TRIS IS LIKELY NOT TO WAKE UP TONIGHT AND IF SHE DOESN'T SHE WILL DIE!" My parents looked shocked. My knees buckle and I lay on the ground with my head in my hands, crying like no tomorrow. They stroke my hair and try to sooth me, which they know I hate. "DON'T TOUCH ME!" At that I run out the door.

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