I want to say thank you to: Four six Tobias tris and Stuff for reviewing. Also, lolita is
fandom crazy, I know it's sad but I'm planning on making it happier.:)Plus, I'm not done
yet, I'm planning on ending at 20 chapters...unless I decide against it. Whatever, here's
the story. P.S. I'm feeling like making this one fluffy! Beware!*evil laugh*
I wake up sore and in puddle of tears. I start to get up when I warm hand wraps around my
tiny waist. Tobias pulls me down and towards me.
"You are baeutiful, you know that right?" he whispers to my neck. I sigh and turn so I'm
facing him. I lean in for a kiss and start kissing him slowly. Its quick and sweet. I
cuddle up to him. He leans down and kissess my nose.
He put his hand up my shirt and starts rubbing my back slowly. I sigh, he is too
good for me. I scooch up and start kissing him again. They quicken up and his shirt of in
a jiff. I'm actually surprised. He starts to play with the hem of my shirt. He's asking
me. I shake my head a litte letting him know I'm not ready.
He stops kissing me and looks at me, "Tris, we should get ready for work." I nod.
I had talked to him on the ride back to Chicago my plan of taking over the tattoo parlor.
We get changed and leave for breakfast. I realize we're up early and am surprised to
still see Christina and Cara at the table.
Breakfast goes by quick and uneventful, luckilily. We all go off to work then.
**Warning-Page Break! May cause break in times!***
I walk into the apartment and collapse onto the bed. Today, everyone seemed to
want a new tattoo. I was able to get the hang of it quickly though. I start to doze off.
I awake to the door opening quietly. Tobias must be home from work. I roll pver
an drub my eyes.
"Did I wake you?" Tobias asks gently. God, he's such a gentleman.
" Oh no, I've been up for hours." (Frozen! Best movie ever!) I say pushing my hair down.
"Hey, I was wondering if you wanna go out to diner tonight?" he says sitting on the bed
next to me. I just nod and lay down.
He scoops me up bridal style."Oh no. You're not going to sleep. I aready talked to
Christina, she's coming over in half an hour to get you ready." I give him my "death
stare". Then I wonder, why on earth did he talk to Christina? I shrug it off.
He puts me down and I go into the bathroom to take a shower.
Half an hour later Christina barges in.
"Christina!" I yell.
"Time to get you ready for tonight!" Then, for the next hour, she tugs my hair, cakes my
face and tugs clothes on me. By the end of the hour of torture, I am wearing a black lace
dress that ends midthigh with a grey belt, my hair on a curly bun and my face looking
almost natural.
I have to admit, I look pretty decent. When I'm done, I notice Tobias is already
at the door. He grabs my arm.
"You look pretty." He whispers in my ear. I remember that night at the chasm when he was
drunk and told em that. I smile. We head out. When we get to a fancy restaurant, he opens
the door for me. I grin at him. He returns it.
We walk up to a table. We have dinner. It's pretty casual. Then, his smile is
replaced with a serious face. His sudden change in tone makes me look at him more
closley. He gets out of his chair and gets down on one knee. I gasp. He's proposing!
He pulls out a black box. He opens it. Inside is the most beautiful ring ever.
The band is a silver and the diamond is black. Surrounding the black diaone, are tiny
clear diamonds.
"Beatrice Prior, I have only known you for a few days, but it feels like years. WE have
fought against evil. You are the most intelligent person, most brave person, most
beautiful person ever to walk into my life. You understand me. You ae my other half. WE
belong together and I want to show my love for you the best I can. I love you Tris. Will
you marry me?" I feel tears over flow my face. I nod and jump into this arms.
"YES! YES!" I scream. He just laughs. I hear people laughing an dclapping in the
backround but I don't care. I only care about Tobias. My other half. He takes my hand. He
puts the money on the table and picks me up bridal style. He pick me up and brings me to
the apartment.
I know, I know. To perfect. I just had to though. The fluff was hard, review and tell
what you though of it!
I suck at this,
Why I do iy,
Cuz I have no life,
just kidding,
whatever,
I will save you,
and say goodnight,
and REVIEW!