It took Hinata almost an hour to convice Temari to not make her wear the revealing top. Hinata was modest. She never showed any skin and always wore a one piece bathing suit. She sometimes didn't even wear makeup. I mean you've seen her jacket that covers every part of herself. If you look in the dictionary the word modest, there is a picture of Hinata. "Fine whatever." Temari sighed. "I was just trying to help...Look i'll stop complaining if you at least wear it once on your trip."

"Fine okay whatever," Hinata agreed. Yeah right...She's never gonna get me to wear that thing. Never in a million years.

"Okay so we better get going." Temari said softly. "And make it look like I've been teasing you-"

"which you have"

"Uh? Oh yeah right sure."

Hinata and Temari left their tent and saw Kankuro and Gaara waiting. "Come on!!" kankuro whined. "let's go..."

And the four started on their journey again...


After traveling for almost two days, nonstop (well they stopped mid-day and always at 9:30 pm sharp), Hinata felt like she was going to crash onto the ground. I feel like my feet are just involuntarily moving... "When will we get to Suna?" she asked. She didn't care what they thought of her. She didn't care that she would be made fun of for her whiny complaining attitude. She wanted to sleep. She wanted to stop running. She also wanted to talk to Gaara.

"we're here..." Gaara announced. He looked back at Hinata and wanted to smile. Why can't Temari and Kankuro go on ahead? Leave us some time to talk...Gosh, I wanna talk to Hinata so bad, but they will make fun of me. And I can't live with that...

Hinata sighed out of relief to find out that she was finally at suna. A whole week in Suna...Suna... Hinata looked out to the village. It was odd. She noticed she was standing on grass. But only a foot away was sand. It was as if the grass stopped growing right away. Sand was everywhere. She looked a little ahead and noticed a village about half a mile away. The buildings looked like the ones in Konoha except for the fact that there was just sand everywher. I've never seen so much sand.. Her eyes glanced over to the right of the village and found a giant river, seeming to go straight in the middle of the village. However, after noticing everything in the village, she looked high in the sky. There was a tower. It was like the Tower of Babel, almost reaching the sky. It was merely feet under the sun. From where Hinata was standing, it looked like the tower was about 2-3 miles high. Wow...The tower...I wonder how it would be like at the top.

"Come on, let's go," Gaara said in a dark tone.

"FINALLY!!!" Kankuro whined. " I can't wait to be home."

Hinata drew a smile to her face. Suna...the week shouldn't be that bad. Even if Gaara doesn't talk to me at all, at least there will be this very relaxing village...But... Gaara, why can't you just forget what your siblings care about? Come on! Just talk to me!

The four finally walked to the gate of Suna. It was high. Suna had a culture that was modern yet it had an ancient chime to it. The carvings on the gate told the history of Suna. Hinata just stood amazed. And she hadn't even gotten past the gate. She walked through the gate. She saw many people trying to sell things. This must be the marketplace. As they were walking past, Hinata noticed many shops. Let's see...There's a bar, vegetable store, meat house, bookstore, and a sushi bar. Hey, no ramen. Well that's a relief.

After walking for about 15 minutes, Gaara walked into a building. Hinata noticed and looked up. The tower! This must be the Kazekage's tower. Wow, I get to stay here! Maybe...just maybe.. this vacation will be fun.

As they walked into the tower, Hinata noticed that how huge the palace was. She saw many guards and servants running around. Preparing things for the Kazekage. Hinata wanted to know about everything, but seeing as how Gaara was acting she would wait until later. The four of them brushed past everyone and went into a back hallway. There was four doors, two on each side of the hallway. Gaara opened one. "This is your room." That's all he said. Hinata walked into the room. "Thank you, Lord Kazekage..."

He just stood there for a moment. He waited for Kankuro and Temari to walk away. Then, Gaara just stared and gave her a small smile. And with that, he walked off.

He's still in there. The real Gaara. My Gaara is in there.


SneakPeek at Chapter Six: Bittersweet Tours

"I know its hard, Gaara," Hinata cried. "But you can't let your siblings control your life.."

"I know!" Gaara unexpectadly shouted. "But if they don't then it will release..."

"What? What will release? Your demon?" Hinata questioned. What is he talking about?

"Uh..no. Not that. You have just gotta trust me Hinata," Gaara explained. "I might seem to be nice to you, but trust me, you don't wanna get with a guy like me. I seem nice at first, but then it all goes haywire..."


Update: Thank to you all who have been giving reviews and that have made A week alone with you and your siblings one of their favorite stories! Thank you to everybody! Jut wanted to tell you that it might be awhile before Chapter six is posted. Sorry chapter five was so short, however, chapter six is hopefully gonna be long. So it's worth the wait. So, I will post Chapter Six as soon as I can. and Happy thanksgiving everybody! 3 BlackPolish 3 Thanks again!