Guys I'm setting a review challenge. I got to 123 reviews and it really amused me... simple minds and all that sooo...after I hit 124 I got thinking, I really want 234 now to follow the pattern and I would love you guys to help me. I'm not asking for epically long reviews, although I do like those, if you don't have a lot to say: you don't have a lot to say, we've all been there. But please, please review. Let me know what you think and help me make my dream =D
Oh and while I can remember just so you all know there will be lemons in this story I just don't know when... just saying... on with the show =D
It was morning by the time Haruhi started waking up, usually she was awake by this time at least. However this morning was different, she didn't want to move. She was simply too warm and comfortable to even think about moving. She opened her bleary eyes, blinking the sleep out of them as she tried to stretch her arms out behind her... only to find them immovable. Her eyes shot down to see the cause of the problem and what a problem it was. One sleeping Kyoya Ootori had managed to get so wrapped up around her in the night that she now couldn't move her arms at all. Here was the dilemma, from her position she could see the blurry outline of her phone, flashing on the coffee table. She had two choices, she could wake Kyoya up and grab her phone; however she had heard the other boy's stories about what this guy was like first thing in a morning and she wasn't quite sure she was ready to see that... her second and by far more appealing choice was learn magic and summon the phone to her.
'I wonder how long it would take to learn magic, maybe I should just wake him up. I've never woke someone up before, dad's usually good at getting himself up. How do you wake someone up? I can't believe I'm fine with all my subjects at school but having to wake someone up and I'm stumped.' She sighed, better just bite the bullet and... shake him?
"Kyoya sen- Kyoya, wake up." She barely whispered it, she wasn't afraid to admit that she was scared as hell. She reached with one of her hands, that were jammed under his arms, to his back and she rubbed gently. She remembered when she had been to visit her 'aunty' and she looked after the baby. It was vital to ease the baby awake so she rubbed its back and stroked its face... maybe that would work with him.
Flashback
"You're doing such a good job Haruhi-Chan. We need to wake her up or she won't sleep tonight, do you think you can do that?" The six year old Haruhi nodded, she was staying with her aunty whilst Daddy was at work. She really wanted to be helpful so she did whatever she could for the baby.
"Thank you aunty. Oh aunty she's crying!" The 'woman' smiled and ruffled her hand in the little girl's silky locks. "It's ok Haruhi, just be a little more gentle." The tiny brunette's eyes filled with tears. "I didn't mean to hurt her aunty. I'm sorry." Haruhi was swooped up into her auntie's arms and was rocked back and forth gently till she stopped crying. "Oh silly-Billy, you didn't hurt her. All I meant was when you wake her be a little gentler, soothing... Um refreshing. So when she wakes up she will be happy and not a little grumpy pants." "Yes aunty Misuzu."
Present time
And so Haruhi slowly rubbed his back and his face, murmuring to him all the while. "Kyoya, come on Kyoya. Wake up sweetie. Come on, time to get up." 'He's going to kill me with his bare hands... I just called him sweetie! Forget the hands he's gonna use his claws. Stupid bear.' She was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't notice the tell-tale change in his breathing or the fact he was lifting his head.
Kyoya slowly came to his senses, whoever woke him up had better get ready to be fired. He was vaguely aware of the warmth underneath him and the way his bed moved under him... and held him? Slowly the events of the previous day returned to him. He wasn't in his room he was in Haruhi's. His girlfriend's room. He had asked her out and then told her she would go out with him! That hurt his pride a little but a win is a win.
He decided to see how long he could keep up the pretence of being asleep before she figured it out. In that time he realised that Haruhi was a very...handsy person. She seemed to have touched him more in the past few days than anyone had for... well for ever. He found he didn't mind being touched so much when it was her. He didn't even mind that she had woken him up at a no doubt ungodly hour of the morning. This was the best wakeup call he had had since... since the previous morning before it had been ruined by the obvious. Clearly Haruhi was good for his health and well being. "Kyoya, come on Kyoya. Wake up sweetie. Come on, time to get up." 'Sweetie? That was... huh. Do I mind that? I don't think so, there are better names and there are worse. I better put her out of her misery.' And with that he slowly began sitting up.
Stealth was not Kyoya's strong point in the mornings and yet he was very stealthy this morning as he managed to twist himself enough so he could carefully, mindful of her lip, place a kiss on the corner of her mouth.
She stiffened underneath him with a gasp, 'When did he wake up? At least he's not cross I guess... does he want me to do something back? I never used to over think everything I did so much. I want to kiss him... so I will... in a minute. I defiantly will... oh God I suck.' Her cheeks burnt under the heat of his lips, which were slowly making their way around her face. This was completely different from what the boys told her Kyoya was like in a morning.
Kyoya took advantage of her shock. Placing his thin lips on her full ones, his hand reached up to stroke the sides of her face gently. His skilled mouth encouraged her to part her lips slightly to let his tongue slip in and gingerly swipe over her own. This seemed to spark Haruhi's competitive side; he had been in-charge for everything else they did so why shouldn't she get this. She put everything she had into that kiss, grasping his shirt at the back, clinging to him so fully. As the passion began to rule supreme technique went out the window. Noses bumped, teeth clanked, everything became secondary to the heat they felt with the release of tension into each other.
Kyoya was surprised by the enthusiasm she showed. He thought she would have backed down but... she seemed to be in her element and it felt so good to have her commoners passion directed solely at him. He groaned when she nipped his lip lightly before moving down to his neck where she peppered the sensitive skin with tiny kisses and playful bites.
It wasn't like she had lost control it was more she didn't give a fuck.
But reality has to come back and spoil everything because it always does. Reality took the form of a frightened maid that day... the poor woman walked straight in to see the guests head buried in the crook of her young master's neck with the man himself staring straight at her. Staring... glaring, same difference.
"I-I-I... I'm so sorry." And with that she ran from the room without delivering the message she had intended to give in the first place.
Haruhi sat up with a frightened squeak. She hadn't heard the door open let alone someone come in. Her face burned with the red blush of shame, Kyoya on the other hand was fuming. He was going through all the ways he could make that woman's life hell, how had she not understood that he wanted her to leave silently. He needed some sort of psychic ability clearly. He watched, blurrily, with disappointment as Haruhi pulled away from him. She passed him his glasses as she reached for her phone, the phone which started all that. "I'm sorry senpai, I shouldn't have... that shouldn't have happened." "It's Kyoya, and why shouldn't it?" "B-because, it just shouldn't. I'm not like that." He gripped her waist from behind as he laughed. "Haruhi, I know that you're not that sort of girl. You are my girlfriend though, we can do that sort of thing whenever we like now."
He wasn't being subtle as he leant towards her again as she messed with her phone. She shifted away from him though and turned to look at him seriously. "No, we've been going out for less than a day. I was raised better than that and so were you. I'm not like those other girls who put out the second they get a boyfriend." Kyoya knew this; of course he knew that after all the research he'd done on her he'd be a fool not to know that. But still, no matter how he was raised he was still a teenage boy and... 'Don't pressure her. That sort of thing comes secondary, I'm happy just being with her. It's her fault for being so appealing. I'll make her comfortable with me and let the chips fall where they may. It's not that important anyway, I lo-like her enough not to care... it would just be an added bonus. There are other things we can do on earth is she doing?'
The girl who was caused him such confusion was now furiously pacing with her phone clutched to her face like it was a safety blanket. He shot her a questioning glance as she pressed more buttons rapidly.
"Hey Hikaru. I guess I just missed you. I'm fine, don't worry, I'm staying with..." she looked at Kyoya out of the corner of her eyes before continuing "A friend. I'm fine, I'll be in school tomorrow and I'll explain everything. Please don't worry. Bye.'
"What was that about?" she ignored him as she paced. "Kaoru, I guess you're busy too. Can you tell Hikaru I'm fine, I left him a message but in case he doesn't get it you know too. Sorry, bye."
Kyoya was nothing if not bright; he quickly caught onto what was going on and reached for his phone which was off in his back pocket. He turned it on and was unsurprised to find 3 missed calls, two from Kaoru and 1 from Tamaki.
With a sense of dread he listened to the first message. 'Hey Kyoya senpai. It's Kaoru but you should know that, um... we're at Haruhi's flat and it is trashed. It looks like a bomb's hit it. Did you know? Is Haruhi ok? Do you know where she is? I'm really... we're all... Call me back.'
The next message was left five minutes later. 'Senpai where are you? This is such a bad time not to have your phone. Is Haruhi with you? No sorry, that's stupid why would she be with you haha. Tamaki's not doing so well senpai, you really need to help him. There's loads of her stuff gone, clothes and photos but there's still some stuff here. Why would she leave stuff? The whole front of the flat is crushed, it looks... Senpai seriously where the hell are you?' Hikaru had grabbed the phone at the end before it cut off. Kyoya winced when his voice burst through the speaker into his defenceless ears.
Apprehension filled him as he turned to the last message. If the twins were this bad he could only imagine how Tamaki was. So he was a little disconcerted to hear Tamaki's calm voice flood through.
'Kyoya,call me.' That was it. That was worse than him going off on one and it completely threw all of Kyoya's careful planning about howhe was going to tell the blonde man and now... there would be no good time to tell him that she was living in the same house as him let alone in a relationship with him.
He pressed the number for Tamaki but the call was rejected almost as soon as it went out. Kyoya placed his phone on the table with one hand whilst gripping the bridge of his nose with the other. This was a mess, why hadn't they called him to arrange a visit like they usually did? This was a mess at best a disaster realistically. 'Get a grip, don't assume the worst. Tamaki might be so glad that Haruhi is safe and happy that he doesn't care who she is with... yeah right.'
Haruhi put her phone in her pocket after unsuccessfully trying to call Honey and Mori. She would just have to explain on Monday and hope the other boys wouldn't act... like themselves. She wandered back over to Kyoya, who was sat as far back in the couch as he could looking like he was going to burst a blood vessel. She slipped under his arm and put her head on his chest. He automatically held her to him but it was clear that he wasn't quite there. "What are we going to do?" he looked at her briefly before kissing the top of her head, he kept his lips there so he could smell the sweet, fruity scent of her hair. "We will talk to them on Monday."
"Awww, that is so cute Kyo-Chan."
"Honey senpai?"
"Yep and Usa-Chan. So what will you be telling us, but I think I can guess."
So I hope you liked that chapter guys, I found it quite hard to write because it seemed quite childish but there you go. You'll have to let me know and thereby aiding in my dream of 234 and beyond =D.
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Shit Happens-333 - I hope this chapter was worth the wait, you'll have let me know what you think =D
Eophan- I'm so glad you like it and I'm so glad you think they're in character... though i think this chapter may screw that up haha. I'm sorry you found the alternating hard to read because i put it in to avoid confusion haha sorry about that. If i need to do that again i'll put something up at the top explainging conflicting thoughts or something. So yes I'm sorry about that and I hope you like this chapter, let me know what you think. =D
lavagirl100 - I am so gald you like my story, i get really paranoid because I know i have a really imature style of writting.. or i think i do anyway. It's nice to meet a fellow fanfic junkie and i will keep writting and i wont crossover i promise. =D please let me know what you think =)
simpleplan9913 - I've read ones before where its been wince worthy because its normal then random sex scene, out of character dialougue, and then back to normal and i know that i dont write the most in character stuff in the world but i'd like the basics to still be there. Of course im going to say you're not bossy or bratty because your not. And yeah i think it's hard if your english or american using japanese words because they are different... if you get me, its not just the order its the honourificks and stuff. I dont know about having both Hikaru and Tamaki realise their feelings because i'm worried if i do i will pity them to much to have a proper Kyoya/Haruhi thing going on... i get like that when i read them i'm so pathetic. haha i wont ignore their feelings... i will just probably ignore one of them haha. anyway, i love chatting with you =) and i hope this chapter isnt too bad, let me know =)
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