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She didn't know what time it was or how long she was outside. She didn't even notice that it had started to rain. She enjoyed the feeling at the raindrops poured down. She was just dressed in a shirt and a mini skirt the temperature seemed to drop but she didn't feel cold at all. She saw people with colourful umbrella walking down the street, but she paid no interest in the small figures. Her wet hair stuck on her face and she gently brushed her hand over the uneven wall. She looked over Konoha next to the wall was an cherry tree. She loved the smell and the little blossoms and peacefully wished she would be one of those, unharmed with no emotion, admired by so many people, wilted and blown away by the wind. And finally fallen.
Her head felt heavy as she slowly closed her eyes. She laid herself on the wall feeling the rain as she listened to the sound of the cars far away ..
Sasuke POV:
He thought she could understand him he felt something for her he though he could never feel like that again. Not after that day..
Flashback:
They were driving back home from a birthday party. He was only nine. His brother wasn't with them because he spent the night at a friends' house. It had started to rain as they drove home. They were driving along curves and in through a forest. Sometime after, their car slipped. But his father was an good car driver and they were safe. They drove on, pasted some vehicles and waited in a traffic jam. Nothing really spectacular happened and they drove home. He did his usual bathroom- routine and laid in his bed after saying good night to his mother. In the middle of the night he woke up because he heard a strange sound. Something he never hear before – and he would never forget in his life. A shot. It was a plangent sound. But it wasn't as worse as the scream he heard 2 seconds later. His mother. He jumped up and ran towards his door. As he heard footsteps he stopped walking and waited until he reached for the door handle. He just wanted to know what's going on. His hand was 2 millimetres away and the wooden barrier burst open and hit him in the face. He was drowsy as he fell backwards in the corner behind the door. He felt this metallic liquid in his mouth, but he couldn't remember what it was. The person who ran inside his room turned around. It was his mother. Her pale, beautiful and always calm face was shocked. He wanted to go to her to help her but something inside him stopped him. It was a new emotion he didn't feel it often but it wasn't pleasant. It was fear, blank, pure fear. He tried to stand up again but he felt drowsy again as another bang was heard in his little room. He didn't dare to look up he just heard the window sliver as the bullet went right through his big window. As he slowly opened his eyes he felt relived. Nothing happened to his mom. She was standing right in front of the window. Hold on where did the window sliver? Maybe it was in another room? His answer was answered shortly after that. As his mother slowly dropped on her knees. Behind her was a whole in the window. And below the whole was a trail of a liquid. In the pale moonlight it looked like ink. As she laid on the wooden floor he could see the whole in her chest. He could hear sirens of the police cars as the person who shot his mother ran away. The little boy ran after him, he wasn't afraid anymore. He just wasn't but the man was much faster than him and he ran outside only to be caught by the police along with his mate. Sasuke ran inside in his kitchen he found his father – death. His world shattered. He didn't talk until Itachi came. Tears were in his eyes but he didn't let them fall. He just stood there and watched his parents dead bodies.
End flashback.
He never felt this lonely before. Currently he was sitting at home, it was 6.30 pm and he didn't even start packing for their little trip. Sakura was gone after she tried to apologize. He picked the note up again and read it again and again.
Sasuke
I didn't want to hurt you
I'm sorry,
Sorry for being a burdenSakura
He asked himself if she was okay. If she was warm and dry. Outside the rain poured down without mercy. He missed her already. Sakura was gone for 6 hours and he just couldn't stop blaming himself. Sasuke knew exactly that she didn't want it to end this way.
He, Sasuke, who promised her to protect her made her cry. He just couldn't bear it. But his pride was hurt so he didn't dare go outside and search for her.
"She'll come to dancing classes and then I gonna talk to her. I wonder if she's cold at the moment. Did she even have money? We didn't eat anything at school.", he thought.
It was 8 o'clock. He was standing in front of the dancing school and waited for her. 8.10 o'clock . She still wasn't there. Itachi had already started and he went in. Calemon was clinging on him like her life depends on it. He just couldn't concentrate. Sasuke could hear Lee cry as he kept asking where his little cherry blossom is.
It was dark outside as Itachi asked his brother as they made a short break: "Where's Sakura?"
That was it he ran outside. Camelon should search herself another partner for today because he had something better to do. He told the others to take the car to the hotel (the trip) he would come after them with the train.
"Jeez, where the heck are you Sakura? It's dark and cold outside!", he thought.
He searched over 2 hours and still no sign from her. He tried to call her but her cell phone was "currently not available". That pissed him off.
"Where could she be? Maybe she's near the dancing school, watching while we're going inside for classes, yeah that could be."
He ran back and an empty street up an hill. Nothing.
Sasuke panicked what if she's really gone? He just didn't want her to leave.
As he stood in front of the dancing school he looked back again. He saw an huge wall and next to the wall was a cherry tree. Why didn't he think about this before? He ran back and climbed up the tree. There she was. Soaking wet and asleep. He felt like he could struggle her for worrying him so much. He poked her until she stirred.
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"No bad tree! Stop poking me!", she said out loud.
"Sakura! It's me!"
"Since when are trees able to speak?"
"I'm not a tree."
"He talked again."
"Sakura wake up. I'm Sasuke not a tree."
She slowly opened her eyes, they were red and puffy. She did cry. Again. She already cried as he left her without accepting the apology.
Normal POV:
The guys were currently sitting in their car on the way to the hotel. Nobody said something. "He'll find her.", Tenten said cheerily.
They nodded and turned on the radio. Again nobody said something until Naruto .. "take me hooome to the place I belooooooong ...", started to sing.
( This. Song. Is. So. Bad. BAD Memories!!!)
Neji bonked him on the head as Naruto, who was accidentally honked.
"Okay okay.. another song .. outch … NEJI.", he complained as Hinata started to giggle soon the whole car started to laugh .. "NO.. Jeez .. don't I don't want to listen to THAT. Where is my CD? Ah there ", Naruto shouted.
On the CD: Japanese traditions: Beef Ramen and … end CD .. (by Neji)
" What the? Naruto since when do you have a ramen CD?", Ino asked. "Like forever .. I love it in the end there's a song called .. ramen.. it' s so coo!", Naruto shouted as he stared singing again.
"NARUTO WATCH OUT YOU ARE DRIVING!!!", Tenten shouted.
"Shikamaru wake up!!!", Ino screamed.
"hn. Idiot.", Neji said as he hit Naruto again.
"… zZZzZ", Shikamaru ..sleeped?
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"CONTRY HOOOOME.", Naruto started singing again.
Bonk.
"Naruto-kun.. co-u-ld yo-u plea-se use m-y CD.", she asked
"Sure? What is it?", Naruto asked as he put the CD in the CD-player.
"Beatsteaks? They are sooo cool!", Ino screamed.
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Sakura woke up slowly and Sasuke wrapped an arm around her waist as they slowly went down. "Sasuke.. I'm sorry for being a burden everytime.", she started. "It's okay Sakura."
She was shivering as they walked home through the rain. He gave her his jacket and lend her to the car. As they drove home she just watched the trees flew by.
"Take a shower and pack your bags for the trip we'll drive with the train because the others are already gone and we just want to use one car.", Sasuke said.
Sasuke packed his things really fast and was finished before Sakura. He used the time for cooking something because she hadn't eaten all day.
Sakuras bag:
Clothes, underwear, bikini ..
Tooth brush, make-up, …
Card games
More clothes
…(A/N guys it's 3.12 am .. I don't remember what you need for a trip .. gimme a break.)
She took a shower and ate something together with Sasuke. They were silent the whole time but it was somehow comforting.
The train was full and loud. They had to stand and Sakura was still tired. Her back was facing Sasuke as she tried to stand comfortable. Some guys winked at her and shouted if she wanted to sit on their lap and so on. She just turned around and hugged Sasuke. She was tired she just wanted to sleep and she wanted them to shut up. He smelled good and soon she could close her eyes - and rest her head on his chest - a bit only to be tossed backwards as the train started to move again after an station. But luckily Sasuke hugged her too and so she wasn't hurt.
Sasuke glared at guys who watched her slim figure. Some of them even tried to touch her but he hissed and they backed away.
Soon the train started to get empty and they could finally sit down. Sakura took the chance and leaned her head on the window and was soon in a light slumber. Outside the countryside started to get white (snow) and half an hour later they were there. Taking a taxi up to the hotel. It was amazing it was really big and far away from the town. A frozen lake was near by. After paying the taxi they went inside. On the reception they asked for their rooms. Sakura was in a room with the girls and he was in a room with the guys. The rooms were big, like a flat and furnished the same way: 4 beds, 1 flat screen TV, an huge bath with a tube, 2 desks, one PC and 4 closets.
She hugged the girls as they arrived. It was 3 am as they decided to stop talking and to sleep. The beds were really comfortable and they watched snow falling against their window.
This weekend would be so cool!
The next day they were eating breakfast in the huge dinner room. "What are we going to do?", Tenten asked. "How about ice skating?", Ino asked. "YEY" , Naruto screamed.
Ice skating:
Naruto wasn't ice skating, well he was but he was laying on the ice and tried hard to stand up. As Hinata tried to help him he just pulled her down with him. "Dobe..", Sasuke teased, just to fall down himself. Sakura, Ino and Tenten were busy ice skating as they, all hand in hand glided over the lake without any mistakes. After 1 round Hinata jointed them and the guys tried hard to stand on the slippery frozen water below them. Sakura linked arm with Sasuke and supported him. He hissed as he slipped and fell down. Tenten "accidentally" tackled Neji, Hinata was laying on the ice because she tried to help Naruto up again. And Shikamaru and Ino? Shikamaru and Ino were gliding over the ice together. He never did that before but he was not for nothing a genius. Plus a lazy genius because Ino had to pull him with her. At Shikamarus rate they would just laying on the ice and watching snow flakes.
In the end the boys got how to ice skate and they really skated 2 or 4 rounds round the lake.
In the evening they all took a long shower and changed for dinner. Sakura was wearing a green mini skirt with a white tank top and high heels . Tenten a brown tank top with also with a mini skirt but hers was white with brown high heels. Ino was wearing an light blue tank top with an white skirt with white high heels and Hinata the same except her tank top was dark blue. The boys had shirts and some matching pants. It wasn't full in the dinner room, probable they all ate before them and so they took their time. Until it was really late.
"I'll take the lift.", Tenten shouted as she pulled Neji along with her in one of the 2 lifts. "I'll take the other!", Ino screamed, as she pulled Shikamaru inside. "I'll bet we're there before you guys."
"Troublesome."
Sakura and Sasuke were running up the stairs on the left side while Naruto and Hinata ran up on the right side. Too bad their room was in the 10th floor. And suddenly there was a total blackout. Just darkness surrounded Sasuke and Sakura as they stopped in the middle of the stair.
Hinata/ Naruto POV:
"ahh", Hinata screamed as she fell backwards in the darkness. Naruto tried to grab her and he really did it. He pulled her up, still holding her .. "Ano .. Naruto-kun .. co-uld y-ou st-op –tou-ch-ing my..my butt?", she finally chocked out. Naruto turned red but luckily she couldn't see and released her. "Sorry Hinata-chan!!", he said. Hinatas head was practically shining red by there but … nobody saw something .. and that was the problem .. "We'll wait here until the lights are on again all right?", Naruto asked, as he tried to calm her down. They were sitting on the stairs as Hinata shyly took his hand. "I'm afraid …"
"Don't worry Hinata-chan I'll protect you, believe it!"
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Sakura/ Sasuke POV:
"Okay what now?", Sakura asked as she tried to find her shoe. She lost it as the lights went out. "We'll search it.", Sasuke said calmly. He fumbled along the stairs as he tried to find her shoe. Suddenly he felt Sakuras warm hand below his' he stopped moving for a moment before he quickly released it.
"Sorry."
"No problem."
They kept on searching until Sakura found it. "We'll continue walking upwards.", Sasuke told her. He took her hand as he slowly walked to the 10th floor. "I don't want you to stumble with that kind of shoe.", he said after a while as he squeezed her hand lightly. She couldn't help but smile.
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Neji/Tenten:
The lift hat stopped in the middle of their way and the light were out. No light and the button of that frigging lift didn't work. Tenten tried hard to stay calm and slowly sat down on one side of the lift. "What a drag.. now I'm locked up with you .. why did you pull me with you anyway?", Neji complained. "Just shut up.", Tenten said. Her usual cheery strong and loud voice was now soft and somehow filled with fear. He bent down beside her and touched her arms. She had goose bumps all over her arms. He slowly sat down and wrapped an arm around her. "Are you cold?", he asked as she shivered lightly. She only nodded as he pressed her against his chest. After a while he said with all his courage." I really like you Tenten-chan." His only answer was deep heavy breaths. Tenten was asleep.
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Shikamaru/ Ino:
He said again "troublesome". She only begged him to shut up. He raised an eyebrow in the dark. "What's wrong with you?", he asked. "Well I'm kind of claustrophobic." , she told him after a while pacing for and back in the lift. "Stop Ino.. you make me insane and yourself too.", he said 5 minutes later. "I can't ", she shouted. "Troublesome. "2 minutes later he heard her sob. "Ino?", he asked. "…" "Where are you Ino?", he asked. "Here she answered from one corner of the lift. He went to her and laid his arm over her shoulder. She rested her head on his chest as she lightly sobbed while he was holding her other hand.
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I'm sorry for this short chapter. Hope you like it
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I apologize for mistakes (grammar …)
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