Finished another chapter, my muse for this just won't leave and so I'm writing while it's good. I got a guest review that I deleted but I want you all to read ":god, why did you turn this fic to shit by pulling that "mask" crap. by making Naruto completely oc, you could just as well remove his name from the story tags" Well Excuse me for being the author and doing what I want for the story. I don't mind criticism but this is just pathetic I mean really at least sign in or register and do things in a adult manner. And if you don't like it don't read it.

Chapter 4: Team 8 and Naruto's Juken

Naruto, Hinata and Shino had just came back from lunch and were amusing themselves listening to Ino's comments about Team 10 while Chōji and Shikamaru pretended to sleep, at least in Chōji's case, Shikamaru probably was sleeping. Kiba and Sasuke had gotten into a fight and both sported wounds, Kiba had a split lip and Sasuke had a black eye. Before they can make a comment a black-haired woman with red eyes comes in and says "Team 8, With me" Hinata gets up first followed by Naruto and Shino and they follow their new sensei out the classroom.

Five minutes later they are sitting in a park facing their sensei. Kurenai is watching her new students when she thinks 'The only one I can read is Hinata, Naruto and Shino look like they aren't thinking anything at all' she shivers slightly but Naruto catches it and smiles gently. Kurenai then says "Okay first I want you all to introduce yourselves and say a little about yourselves. I'll start, My name is Kurenai Yuuhi, I like Genjutsu training, roses and my friends. Things I dislike are burnt food, senseless killing and those who think Kunoichis are weaker than Shinobis. My Dream is to prove that females can be just a powerful as males, Okay how about you next" Kurenai finishes pointing at Naruto.

Naruto leans back and says "My name is Naruto Hyūga, The things I like are Training, reading, ramen and Hinata (Hinata Blushes) Things I dislike are people who judge others without knowing them, stuck up bastards and the Caged Bird Seal. My dream is to master the Kitsune Byakugan, create a style of Juken to work with it and to become the Hokage" Kurenai is surprised and a little suspicious at this and vows to talk to the Hokage about Naruto. She then nods at Hinata.

Hinata is a bit panicked but says "My n-name is Hinata H-Hyūga, Things I like are Flower pressing, My sister and gardening" Hinata hesitates but then continues "The things I dislike are The caste system in my clan, The Caged Bird Seal and Those who look down on m-me. My dream is to make myself stronger and prove to everyone that I will be a strong Clan Leader" Kurenai smiles at Hinata and Naruto does as well. Kurenai then nods to Shino.

Shino straightens up and says "My name is Shino Aburame, I like insects and those without prejudice, I dislike those who look at my clan in disgust and who kill insects for no reason. My dream is to master my family Jutsus and have multiple colonies within myself of my families bugs" Kurenai smiles at such a interesting dream.

Kurenai smiles and says "Okay, now for the hard part, tomorrow at 8 AM meet me at Training Ground 8 for your final test to see if you are worth to become Genin." Kurenai then Shunshin's away.

Naruto smiles "A Final test, this should be interesting, oh and Shino I'm guessing you know the truth about me?"

Shino nods and replies "Yes, you cannot change your chakra after all, my bugs knew it was you Naruto immediately. I'm guessing that this is being kept secret for a reason and I will not tell anybody"

Naruto bows slightly and says "Thank you Shino I appreciate your logical approach to this"

Shino inclines his head slightly and walks away.

Naruto turns to Hinata and asks "Do you want to come with me to Training Ground Twelve while I work on my 'Juken' Hinata-chan"

Hinata blushes at the name but nods her head and says "I would like that, I need to train as well"

Training Ground Twelve 10 minute later

Naruto faces one of his Kage Bunshins as he prepares to attack, he then dashes forward and strikes the clone in the chest with a standard Juken strike. The back of the clone explodes and the clone is torn apart before it dispels into smoke. Naruto grimaces as the pain is relayed back to him he then stops and thinks 'It's useless for me to use the normal Juken, so maybe I should create two sub-styles, one for disarming and disabling an enemy and one for slaying. What should I name them? I know what I can do for the slaying one but the disarming and disabling one might be a bit tricky. If only I could- That's it, I'll elementally recompose my chakra into lightning to stun the enemy or shut down their chakra points. The hard part is going to be fusing this all together with a style, Juken is too ridged for it but I'll use it as a base. But what other style could I use... Hmm didn't I see Kurenai-sensei with Anko Mitarashi a few weeks back. I wonder if I could as her to help me learn the Hebi-Style (Snake Style) Taijutsu and mix that with the Juken for my sub-styles. This should be interesting, I Think I'll name the slaying style Akumaken (Demon Fist A/N I Think) which is Ironic when I think about it and the disabling style Raishō (Lightning Palm) which makes perfect sense. Oh Hinata's done with her training, she's gotten better I think she is almost ready for the Kaiten and 64-Palms technique.' Naruto looked over to where Hinata was laying on the ground exhausted and passed out after battling and destroying two hundred Kage Bunshin. Hiashi walks into the Training Ground from where he was watching Hinata and Naruto train.

Naruto nods to Hiashi and says "I'm not certain but I think she is almost ready for the Kaiten and 64-Palms training"

Hiashi nods in response and replies "I agree with that assessment, how is your training in Juken going Naruto?"

Naruto sighs and answers "Nowhere, I have too much chakra for Juken, so I'm trying something else. I'm going to make two Sub-styles, Akumaken which is nearly identical to Juken except that it is a one strike kill style that blows an enemies organs apart and Raishō which will use Lightning Elemental Composition to create lightning chakra strikes that wreak havoc on an opponent's nervous system and chakra network and if I'm lucky Anko Mitarashi's Hebi-style for movement. Right now all I have is theory and ideas but I should be able to work something out in a few months"

Hiashi was impressed by Naruto's thinking and ideas, he smiles and says "It appears that you are working around all the problems that could hinder you, well done. Let us get Hinata home so she can have dinner and sleep in a proper bed"

Naruto smiles and responds with "Of course Hiashi-sama" Naruto then picks Hinata up Bridal style and carries her back to the Hyūga Compound while discussing teaching his sub-styles to other Hyūga with Hiashi who is interested in their applications once they are completed.

The Next Day, Training Ground 8 - 8 AM

Naruto nods good morning to Shino as he walks up to Training ground 8 with Hinata by his side. Hinata while still somewhat tired has mostly recovered from the training she went through yesterday with Naruto's clones. On a side note Hinata has gotten better at dealing with Naruto's presence due to what he said to her.

Flashback, The Day before Team Selections

Hinata had finally gathered up to courage to ask Naruto what he had meant by his comment on his thoughts of her feelings. When she finally asked him his reply made her day Naruto said "I'm waiting for you to be brave enough to come out and tell me, once you do I'll give you my answer Hinata. I'm going to accept them, but only if you come out and tell me yourself. So once you are strong enough and brave enough to tell me I will answer" Naruto smiled at her and walked away to the library where he had been heading before she stopped him. Hanabi listening in from where she was hiding in the rafters smiled at what he said. Hinata then vowed to herself to become strong enough to tell Naruto of her feelings, but she wanted to make sure she was strong, so she would tell him after mastering the 64-palms and Kaiten. Hinata was sure she would be strong enough then.

Flashback End

Hinata vowed to become stronger and knew that passing the test to become Genin was part of this. Kurenai walks up to see all three of her students waiting for her and she says "Okay, it's time for your test. Your test is simple, I have two ribbons attached to my belt you have to get them, whoever doesn't get a ribbon goes back to the academy, simple as that. You have until noon, begin" With that Kurenai disappears in a Shunshin and the three are left standing there.

Before they can move Naruto says "Clever Kurenai-sensei very clever"

Shino and Hinata look at Naruto and ask "What do you mean Naruto?"

Naruto smiles "The point of this test isn't to see if we can get the ribbons, think about it Kurenai-sensei is a Jounin and we are Genin, there is no way for us to beat her individually or even as a team. But if we work together there is a greater chance for us to pass, hence the two ribbons. The point of only having two ribbons is to force us to fight amongst each other and weaken ourselves by individually going after the tester instead of as a team. Remember the only way for there to be a team of only two Genins is if the Third is injured or dead, in which case a replacement is usually placed in the team anyways. I'm going to put my place as a Genin on the line, let's work together to get the ribbons and I'll give them to you two. I know I can pass the Graduation test again easily" Shino and Hinata nod.

Naruto smiles and says "So this is what we are going to do..."

Twenty minutes have passed and not one of her three students has come after her. Kurenai is quite suspicious of that fact, especially after finding the truth out about Naruto from the Hokage. Before she can continue musing several shuriken bury themselves into the tree next to where she is standing, Kurenai looks up to see Naruto standing there smirking before he launches more shuriken at her. Kurenai dodges to her right away from the tree that she was standing next to, she is about to go on the offensive when she is swarmed by Shino's bugs. Kurenai quickly jumps back only to hear "You are within range of my Divination, Hakke Sanjūni Shō" "Two Palms" "Four Palms" "Eight Palms" "Sixteen Palms" "Thirty-two Palms" Kurenai staggers forwards barely able to move with her chakra completely sealed by Hinata's attack. Before she can do anything Naruto dashes forward and takes the two ribbons from her.

Kurenai winces and says "So who are you going to give the other ribbon to?"

Naruto smirks and hands the ribbons to Shino and Hinata before he says "I'm giving them to the two teammates who helped me get them of course, I came up with the plan to get them but they are the ones who executed it. If anyone is going back it will be me"

Hinata steps forward and says "If Naruto goes back so do I"

Shino nods "I will as well"

Kurenai smiles before she starts laughing and says "Well done, you three pass. How long did it take you to figure it out?"

Naruto smiles and answers "I figured it out right at the start and then spent the last twenty minutes setting up the plan and getting into position." Shino and Hinata nod at what Naruto said.

Kurenai gets up slowly after Hinata unblocks her Tenketsu and says "I'll meet you three here tomorrow at 8 AM, the rest of the day is yours"

Before she can Shunshin away Naruto asks "Sensei, would you be able to introduce me to Anko Mitarashi, I wish to learn the Hebi-style Taijutsu from her"

Kurenai's eyes widen at the request but she says "Sure thing, Naruto I'll ask her later" Kurenai then Shunshins off.

Naruto turns to Shino and Hinata and says "Now since we have some free time how about we train with each other to help us learn each other's abilities and increase our teamwork?"

Shino and Hinata agree to the request.

Hokage's office

Hiruzen is sitting listening to the team sensei's return and what they say about their teams.

"Team 1 Passed"

"Team 2 Failed"

"Team 3 Failed, they didn't even find the Training Ground"

"Team 4 Failed"

"Team 5 Passed"

"Team 6 Passed"

Kurenai steps up and says "Team 8 Passed in less than Half an Hour"

Asuma steps up and says "Team 10 Passed"

Kakashi Shunshins in looking pissed "Team 7 Failed, they nearly killed each other. I recommend that Sasuke Uchiha is both banned from attempting to become Shinobi and his chakra is sealed, the little bastard purposely injure Sakura Haruno in order to get to me, Kiba attempted to protect Sakura and was badly burned"

Hiruzen nods and says "I agree with your recommendation Kakashi, Sasuke Uchiha will have his chakra sealed. Asuma would you, Kurenai and Kakashi go see to it"

The three named nod and Shunshin away.

Uchiha Estate Ten Minute Later

"You can't do this I'm a elite an Uchiha damn it" Sasuke shouts as the seal is burned onto his chest.

Kurenai smiles and says "Yes we can you little shit, I liked Sakura. She came to me for extra instruction in Genjutsu, you aren't worth anything compared to her" Kurenai then gags him.

Kakashi finishes the seal while Asuma holds Sasuke's legs and says "Dengen Fuuin" (Power seal A/N I think, if someone has a better name I'm open to suggestions)

I think I'm going a little overboard on Sasuke, but I'm sorry his being an asshole will be a major part of this story and Ino's true feelings on the situation will be revealed but I'll say this, She never loved Sasuke and was just being a fan girl in order to push Sakura forwards. After this event the two will become friends and I'm tempted to have Sakura and Kiba join Team 8 and have a six-man team just to see how it goes. Also I'm still deciding whether or not to give Naruto a Twin sister who was adopted from the orphanage and has lived a somewhat normal life and is a Kunoichi in one of the teams that came from another classroom of the academy. What do you think?

Also I have a great story idea, almost a challenge, what if Naruto turned down being a Ninja that night when Mizuki revealed the truth and instead ended up in another profession examples Blacksmith, mercenary, bodyguard or personal servant. I want to do it that Naruto becomes Hinata's personal servant/butler and learns Shinobi arts to help protect her. here are the requirements. 1 Naruto must turn down being a Ninja for at least until just before or after the Chunin Exams. 2 Naruto must grow more intelligent now that people are no longer sabotaging him. 3 Naruto's pairing must be related to his new profession. and finally He cannot join another village but he can leave Konoha. If anyone takes the challenge PM me please.

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