TROLLFIC! Rubykit's quest

by coolgirl526

warning:if you like trollfics then this story is for you! Rubykit's life is perfect. The toms love her,she'll become leader when she's a warrior and she has powers! But one problem her sister rosekit is in the way. she goes agents what rubykit wants. But the two sisters are going to soon battle each other and one will win.

2. the mary-sueness begins

hey guys mia here and first chapter of this trollfic and our prolge

prolge

Stars glimered in the moonlight. Two stary cats sat around a pool of water. "A prothecy has risen!" said one of the cats. "what is it crystlestar?" the other one asked. "two will be born of light and dark and the rose and ruby will meet in battle!" crystlestar declared. "who will deliver it to bunny whisker?" the cat asked. "You will grassystar!" crystlestar said. Grassystar took off to tell bunnywhisker the prophicy

chapter 1

Rubykit woke up and bonced out of the nursery with her sister folowing behind. "All cats old enough to catch their now prey hear my words!" their leader hopestar called butterfly clan for a meeting. Their mother licked their fur. "Rosekit and rubykit you two are now six moons old," hopestar called "Rosekit you are now rosepaw and your mentor is Snowblaze! Rubykit you are now rubypaw and I will be your mentor!" The clan gasped. My mentor is the leader! she thought as hopestar put her muzzle on her head. Best. Day. EVER! she thought. "What are we going to do first?" rubypaw asked. "I thought of taking you to show the land," hopestar said. walking to the next part rubypaw smelled a fox. "hopestar!" rubypaw yelled as the fox attacked. Rubypaw jumped on the fox and clawed it. Rubypaw bit the fox's neck and killed it. "I killed the fox!" she said happly "I killed a fox on my day as a apperentice!" Hopestar looked at her appterentice "with more training you can be leader!"

well looks like the mary-sue has everything so far and you guys guess who the hero is!