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Duoangel95 ok I will try to write on something like that…
Jyoti Abhijeet ki atit ki raaz pey os ki baat ker rahi hey na aap? I will write a long os on it..kuch specific cahiye to bata dijiye.. and yea iss story ko technical way se dekhne jao to kaafi flaws honge I'm trying to mend it up a little in this chap although its not stsfctry
Honey acha to cls 10 mey ho to bachi?huh..Mujhse bas ek hi saal choti ho koi bachi nahi haan!and honey singh.. my god I want to stay kilometers away from his songs…off… kishore jee is fine but my fav is manna dey…aur rahi baat story mey irritation dikhane ki to wo to tab hoga jab unhe pata hoga ki unka memory loss hua hey..iss story mey to unhe pata hi nahi.. aur aapki story jar parna cahungi..jaldi likhiye…
Nitu di haan aapne sahi pakra I'm not much comfortable.. actually mere apne dimag mey hi bahut se swal hey yeahi readers bhi wo sawal ker rahe hey..why no electric shock is given/why Daya didn't get changes in appearances of Abhijeet sir and others… specially the coat! Even himself aab kaafi mote jo ho gaye..wo bhi nahi dekha.. baat actually yea hey ki yea sare points mere dimaag mey first chapter publish krne ki bad aya..so I'm helpless…
Gd dada, guest, BT actually although I myself is not satisfied with my own answer but wat I cn only say is story aur film mey kuch ajeeb sa hota hey na..soch lijiye yea jab tak hey jaan se inspire hey… aur ha rahi baat electric shock ki to I will try to give some explanation..and regarding palak didi's story yea to mere dimaag mey bhi nahi aya..
I know nor is my explanation satisfactory not my story…feel free to skip..yea sach mey thik se nahi ho para hey mujse..
Kitni mushkil hey yea
Two days passed...it's really getting difficult for Abhijeet...
He spoke to the doctor as "doctor kya koi electric shock yea kuch?"
"mr. Abhijeet hum chance le to sakte hey per isme risk hey..unki blood pressure aur heart conditions stable nahi hey kaafi tortuer kiya gaya tha unpey..saath mey drugs ki kaafi high dose bhi diya gaya tha jis bajase unki brain abhi tak thik se alert nahi hey..ager alert ho jata to yea dhoka chalana aur mushkil ho jata aapke liye..filal unki conscious mind sub conscious mind parallely work nahi ker pa rahe hey iss haalat mey shock wagera dena..it may turn risky..ha ager fir bhi aap.."
Abhijeet instantly cut the doctor as "nahi doctor..rehne dijiye..risk nahi le sakta mein iss mamle mey.."
here Daya is also feeling something odd..that day he noticed marks on the wall indicating that there were photo frames..but now no photos are there..
Abhijeet's attitude also troubled him..
He was thinking about all this sitting at lounge when Abhijeet came from behind and kept a hand over his shoulder..
He jerked and immediately stood up "sir aap..kuch kaam tha?"
"nahi kiu aesehi nahi asakta.."
"nahi wo baat nahi bas..sir aj bhi aap bureau nahi gaye?"
"ha..wo ha wo sarr mey dard tha to socha gher mey file work hi ker leta hu.."
Daya nodded..
Abhijeet thought for a while then decided to make Daya feel comfortable so started with "per aj na dil hi nahi ker raha hey wo boring files leke baithne ko.."
Daya looked up somewhat strangely.
"boss choro na yea files chalo na kuch kerte hey pls boss"
he continued "to soch raha hu aj koi plan banaya jay..waise bhi kuch hi din to company mili hey to.."
"jee sir..aap aise kiu keh rahe hey aap kahiye na"
Abhijeet smiled.. "to abhie brkfast bana leta hu fir film dekhne jate hey..agey ka agey dekhenge.."
Daya nodded "sir wo gher bhi bahut bikhra para hey thora samait lu?"
Abhijeet thought "mana ker du to sochega guest bana k rakh raha hu..waise bhi wo jaise easy feel kerta hey.."
so he said loud as "ha karo tum.."
he moved.
Daya was arranging things when Abhijeet came out.
Daya was arranging the CD and just below the CD he is holding is the CD of the team celebration at the last award function.
Daya himself had marked label on the CD what if he saw that..Abhijeet was at the loss of how to stop him when the landline rang..
Abhijeet felt a great relief and immediately said "Daya jara dekhna kiska call hey?"
Daya was immediately at service, to Abhijeet's luck its ACP sir..
Abhijeet immediately picked up the CD and moved to his room
"tu aise order na mana ker yaar bahut piche chor aya hu mein tere iss Abhijeet sir ko aab to serf tera abhi hi hey yaar pls laut aya.."
Abhijeet heard a knock at the door he immediately wiped his tears and turned Daya was staring at Abhijeet..he can still see the wet eyelashes.. "sir aap.."
Abhijeet mentally slapped himself "kya Abhijeet Daya kab nahi samjhta tha tumhe..jab se yaad hey isne kab nahi samjha..be normal.."
"arey Daya wo meine socha kmre ko thora thik ker lu..to pata nahi aankh mey kuch" Daya was not convinced at all but he didn't drag the topic but ended with "sir nasta ban gaya mein serve ker deta hu aap.."
"ha mein ata hu tum jao.."
Daya moved out.. Abhijeet followed him after making himself normal.
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They had already completed their lunch and now are in mall..Abhijeet was trying his best to make Daya comfortable but he is only nodding his head to all that Abhijeet is saying.
"Daya yea t-shirt thik hey?"
"jee sir"
even "yea shirt uhun yea bahut hi loud colour ki hey.."
"jee sir.."
at last Abhijeet dropped the idea of this mall and decided to move back to home..
So they were driving back..on the way Daya initiated in a low voice "sorry sir"
Abhijeet who was driving glanced at Daya then again concentrated on road with "kiu? Sorry kiu?"
"wo sir mere bajase aap mall se chale aye..film bhi thik se enjoy nahi ker paye..wo sir mein.."
"tum?"
"sir wo meine kabhie wo kabhie kisi ke saath kiya nahi na to bas.."
Abhijeet remembered the conversation they actually have in that era
"sir aap..itna sa to chot hey isme mein khud hi chala jaunga dctr ke pass aap kiu bekar mey.."
"kiu tumhe problem hey mere jane se?chalo chup chap"
"nahi sir mujhe kya problem mein to bas..wo mein akele hi jata hu na humesha to.."
"kiu tumhare gherwale?"
"gherwale...?"
Abhijeet still remembered that tone
"ha ma baap bhai.."
"ma?baap?wo sir wo..yeaha nahi hey.."
the silence he remembered..then he didn't know the fact but now he knows..he sighs
Daya ask "sir?"
"haan..kuch nahi chalo koi baat nahi..aab mere saath dosti kerna hey to adaat daal lo.."
"dosti?"
"ha kiu mein kabil nahi hu dosti ki?"
"nahi sir wo nahi bas..wo.."
"kiu senior hu isliye?"
Daya just looked down..Abhijeet smiled "off kitna sharmata hey..pagal kahika aise to dimaag kha leta hey yea wo..aur aab dekho.."
he dropped the topic and said "beach chale?" Abhijeet the very next moment realized "oh no aj to beach pey koi rally meeting wagera hone wala hey..ministers wagera ayenge kaahi Daya ko kuch...meine to film ka ticket bhi isliye ise kahridne nahi diya taaki date wagera na dekh paye..aab..uhun beach nahi.."
Daya nods.. "aapko beach pasand hey?"
"ha thora bahut hey..waise aj rehne dete hey..kal ki liye bhi kuch rakhte hey..aj to thak chuka hu..kal tumhe dctr ke pass bhi jana hey.."
"ha sir mein chala jaunga..yaad hey mujhe"
"tum nahi..mein bhi jaunga.."
"Per sir..."
"aab behes nahi.."
"jee sir.."
and they both moved back to their home
A/n : Chalo aaplog review de do…