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Chapter 4:With These Eyes

Silence… that's all there was now, nothing to hear but the slow beat of a weak heart. A single blue cloud drifted around in the sky, all alone in the vast blueness that matched his eyes. Nothing could be seen, nothing could be heard.

Pain… Drifted throughout his body, his head filled with not even a single thought. His eyes grew heavy as his head slowly started to move to the left. Nothing but a blur could be seen, a big red blur to that seemed to be holding up a small white line.

Hopelessness… His mind slowly trying to figure out what happened as he lays there on the ground, his mind moving ever so slowly in to an unknown void that pulls him closer and closer ever so slowly.

He fights the pull one last time, he fights the pain to open his eyes, only to see the red blob still holding the white line… a voice calls him, it tells him to let go, telling him everything will be fine. To trust him.

Darkness… He closed his eyes for what seemed to be for the last time, the silence, the pain… feeling so hopeless. Three things he thought he would never feel.

Finally giving in to the pull, he lets his mind drift off, being lead to an unknown location, with no word or hint of his current destination.

xxXX Unknown XXxx

Floating is what it feels like, opening his eyes to the darkness that he gave in too. His body tingles as his hair flaps in front of his face, slapping him but yet he felt nothing. He closes his eyes to accept the fate he was giving. The feeling of falling now over comes him, fear is what clouds his mind now, giving up isn't a word in his vocabulary.

He flips himself over to see an orange circle with the edges slowly getting covered in darkness. 7 creatures look up towards him as he falling; familiar fur catches him and cushions his fall. Getting his barring's back he is quickly placed in the center of the orange circle that is surround by floating lanterns, he looks around and notches six unfamiliar gaze at him. He searched the eyes for a clue on why he is here, but cold emotionless eyes is all he sees.

Unknown 8 'Is this the one you speak so highly of? Look at him, he is scared so easily'

Unknown 1 'Yes that is what is seems for right now, but he'll come around soon enough.'

Unknown 7 'This is the one, I can say that much… although the last time I saw him like this is when he was scared his infector would squish his Larva'

A snicker could be hear from all of the creators that surrounded the boy, he got to his feet and looked at the last set of eyes that seems familiar. He just decided to stay quiet and gather as much info as possible.

Unknown 2 'He doesn't look half bad, better than most of the flesh bags my hosts hangs around with… maybe after we're done with him you'll let me borrow him for a few test runs Chomei?'

Chomei 'Although I dislike thinking of what your host might do to him, I still do find it quite enjoyable at the thought of him adding a kitten in the mix'

Unknown 3 'While I do enjoy you seeing most of us together again, I'd like to get things started, as I recall Chomei, we have pulled him away from an even that is effecting your host as we speak'

Chomei 'You need not worry, we could be in here for what might seem like years and it'll only been about a second or two out in the mortal world'

Kurama 'Saiken, why isn't Son Goku here?'

Saiken 'My host is making small talk with his host, it's fine, he isn't as mentally unstable as most are… he is rather quite fond of trying to stay on good terms with Son'

Kurama 'Well next time we meet here we will all be here, right now both my and Chomei's host are engaging Kokuo's host, but my host was caught by surprise… apparently her host is more on edge then the rest ours it seems'

Chomei 'Yes so it does, but if you don't mine Kurama-kun I'd like to inform your host and return to mine so we can show Kokuo-chan who trains the better hosts.'

Unknown 8 'Well I might not have the most quietest of hosts, but before Kurama-kun and Chomei-chan made their bonds with their hosts, I was the best one here… probably still am, but one this boy gets his eyes, then of course it's going to Kurama-kun'

Unknown 1 'You guys noticed that Kurama-kun gets the most interesting hosts?'

Unknowns 2, 3, 6, 7, 8 all nod in agreement at the first unknowns claim.

Kurama 'Well it's not like I had a choice in the matter, but anyways Son should be here in a bit'

Just as Kurama finished his sentence another big creator lands nest to Unknown 3.

Son Goku 'Sorry I'm late, I got a little bit carried away on the conversation my host was having with Saiken-chan's host'

Kurama 'Alright Chomei-chan, it's time to pull in Kokuo-chan'

Chomei nodded in agreement. Her tail wraps around the creators tails, this causes a chain reaction between all 8 of them, as soon as the last tails made contact the lanterns start to spin around Naruto. His grows wide as the orange circle he is standing in started to turn white; his body also starts to turn white also. Just then the last empty space is filled and Naruto skins starts to go back normal, he looks around hoping someone would explain just what the hell is going on here, but all eyes are on the newest edition that just arrived.

Kokuo 'Ah, look at this, I haven't seen us all get together like this since we were all given instruction by the same to keep an eye out for his successor '

Kurama 'that is why were are all here Kokuo-chan, I believe I many have found the one that sage has told us about'

Chomei 'I agree with Kurama-kun on this, when I was given a glimpse of the boys pass and abilities he reminded me of the sage in more ways than one'

Kurama knees down and lets his face come into the light, as soon as Naruto realized that the creator that was moving towards him was Kurama he visible relaxed. Scratching the back of his head sheepishly with his foxy grin making its way on to his face he said "Oh thank Kami it you, for a second there I was scared I died, but do you mind telling me what I'm doing here and who exactly who are the others?"

Kurama 'The others here are my siblings, as the Kyuubi, I have the most tail out of all the bijuu. As for their names, I'll let them introduce themselves then we will get on to why we brought you here' Naruto just needed in agreement at stood at attention to the creator on his right.

Unknown 1 'You should already know who I am, but just in case you forgot my name is Shukaku, I am the Ichibi and my current host is Gaara'

Unknown 2 'Greeting Kurama-kun's kit, my name is Matatabi, I am the Nibi and my current host is Yugito of Kumogakure'

Unknown 3 'My name is Isobu, I am the Sanbi and my most recent host was Yagura of Kirigakure '

Unknown 4 'My name is Son Goku but most people just call me Son, I am the Yonbi, and my current host is Roshi missing-nin from Iwagakure'

Unknown 5 'My name is Kokuo, you and your mate are currently fighting my host at this moment, but current matters that are not currently in the Bijuu plain do not matter, I am the Gobi, my host is Han… another missing-nin from Iwagakure'

Unknown 6 'My name is Saiken, I am the Rokubi, and my host is Utakata a missing-non from Kirigakure, well not technically a missing-nin but that is a story for another time'

Chomei 'You should know me by now, you infect my host with your larva, but just in case you've forgotten I am Chomei, the Nanabi, and my host is your mate Fu-san'

Unknown 8 'I am Gyuki, I am the Hachib, my host is B… but as he likes to call himself… Killer B… he is from Kumogakure'

Kurama 'I am the most powerful of them all, the Kyuubi!'

After Kurama described himself with high praise, his action didn't go unnoticed by everyone else in the dimension. Naruto just rolled his eyes before coughing to get Kurama's attention as it seemed even after they bonded. He still kept his massive ego that as he would say 'put the other bijuu to shame'.

Naruto looked around at the other bijuu that circled him before stopped in front of Kurama "Alright Kurama, where am I? and why are all the other bijuu here?"

Before Kurama could speak, Chomei quickly answered for him 'Well Naruto-san, Kurama-kun has informed us of the blood that flows through you, it is the 3 bloodlines that were split from the Sage of six paths body himself so with all pure bloodlines finally being held in one vessel. We have come to inform you and the other Bijuu of your current statues as the next sage'

Getting amusement from Narutos' confused expression Kurama stated 'Yes that is mostly true, while you and your mate have been traveling from place to place the last week and a half after leaving Takigakure. I have been contacting my fellow bijuu and informing them about you, I also shared with them your memories as well…' with those words leaving his mouth Naruto gave him a sour look at promised him not link to his life for a few weeks, as Kurama noticed the face he was being given he continued 'not all of them, just the ones that help support my case of you being the next Sage, I have faith in you and with the our help we wish to help you achieve your goal of peace'

Naruto gave Kurama's word some thought before saying "So you're telling me that there is more to my life then I thought?…" with a nod in agreement "Ok so how do you expect to help me when all of you are sealed away inside of your current Jinchuuriki?"

Kurama 'So you're not even going to ask who the sage is, question our decision, or ask about how you got all 3 of the bloodlines from the Sage!?'

Naruto looked up a Kurama with a serious face that showed how his response left no room for argument, even the other bijuu felt compelled to listen and not argue "Asking questions like that will only have you explain something I probably won't care about or even remotely understand completely, but I know the legends of the Sage, I heard stories about the Rinnigan for Ero-sannin about some of the eyes abilities, and you said you will all help me achieve peace… so if you all promise to keep your word I won't ask why, but k now this. After all is done you will be unsealed from your current Jinchuuriki, I don't want you guys being used as weapons anymore, being with Kurama for so long as made me realized how you guys have been treated, as well as the Jinchuurikis' that hold you. I am tired of pain in someone's eyes for holding a bijuu, I know that pain all too well, I've seen it in Gaara's eyes and as well as Fu-chan's eyes, I can't even begin to imagine why someone of your hosts gave become missing-nin. Even with being closely related to the Kage of each village, the people of this world will never understand, nor can we begin to understand what it's like for you all. You are all buildup of hatred, Kurama being the one with the most. But I stand here beside Kurama, a long time ago I promised to find a way to get rid of his hatred and I did… mostly, and I will make the same promise to you all. If you choose to stand by me to achieves the goal of peace you will be free, and I promise you that you will not be sealed again, or I will personally extract you from that person as I watch the life fade from their eyes"

The bijuu looked at Naruto with disbelief and shock in their eyes, they couldn't believe what they just heard. No matter how much they doubted him, his eyes started firm and showed that he has no doubt he will achieve his goals and keep the promise he just made. One by one they slowly extended their paws, and wing above him.

Naruto looked above him and watched as all of the bijuu slowly put their trust in him, he saw that each one hand a part of their body extended out just above him. He didn't know what to do at this moment before looking up at Kurama hoping for an explanation.

Kurama looked at Naruto and saw that he didn't understand what to do 'Naruto, he are all giving you a piece of our charka, we consist of both Yin and Yang pieces, we are in the plain in which we were all created, he have a strong bond to this place and even sealed away, we can still share a piece of us with you.'

Naruto looked at the rest of them as they each gave him a nod. With a foxy grin he made his hand into a fist and slowly raised it, as soon as his hand made contact he felt his eyes go blurry. His stomached started to burn along with his skin, his eyes shut unable to open them, his body began to cramp and muscles began to lock in place.

As soon as Naruto feel over the 8 other bijuu that weren't Kurama all feel to one knee, they started panting heavily as each of them lost a Yin or Yang piece from themselves. All across the 5 great nations the current Jinchuuriki of the bijuu feel down gripping their stomach in pain as it felt as if though someone shoved their hands in their guts and ripped it out.

Kurama 'His blood is boiling as I'm slowly giving him back his memories of Hans' attack, with the sight of Fu in trouble, him feeling helpless and a piece of our Yin and Yang charka in him. His eyes will awaken now, go to your hosts and tell time to seek out Naruto-sama, but do not let time inform anyone else of his power… at least not yet.'

As the other 6 bijuus' got up from the pain, they gave a nod to Kurama and started leaving the Tailed Beast Realm. Kurama gave a smirk as he watch Naruto slowly getting up and turned to Chomei 'Your host is probably in pain as well from your Yin suddenly disappearing, go to her and make sure Naruto-sama's kit is unaffected by the effects'. Chomei just gave a mod and left to check on Fu and her larva.

Naruto was now fully standing up with his eyes still closed, his eye lids stayed glue shut as he felt a ghost of them pain he felt only moments ago "Kurama what do I do now?"

Kurama gave Naruto a smirk 'You keep your promise'

As soon as Kurama said those words he started to leave with Naruto.

xxXX Somewhere in The land of Hot Springs XXxx

"I can't die, not yet!" yelled Naruto as he shot open his eyes and turned to Han who was slowly getting up to finish of Fu. Naruto looked at Han as he just stood there in disbelief as his eyes made contact with Narutos. Fu slowly got up and turned to Naruto, he eyes also widened in disbelief at what she saw. Fu was still in pain from the surprise attack, her shoulder ached from the kick she received from Han.

Naruto look at Fu and couldn't believe what he saw, no longer was she a tan girl with faded mint green hair with a red bag and white outfit. She was black in white, her body glowed showing all her charka points in her body, he looked at her belly and saw a dark green ball of flame in the center, but his eyes drifted towards the small independent charka signature that barely visible but still starting to show.

Han looked at Naruto's eyes before asking "Tell me, just who exactly are you"

Naruto moved his eyes away from Fu and turned a cold hard glare at Han before saying with a smirk "I am the one who's going to rip the Gobi right out of you and make you beg for forgiveness to Fu-chan before I rip out your heart through your steam armor!"

Han could feel his legs starting to sake and sweat running down his back as he heard his Bijuu speak to him 'Naruto-sama is true to his words, he knows of your mistreatment towards me and with his eyes he will get me out of you keep his promise he made to me'

Han replied 'You aren't going anywhere Gobi'

Han stopped his shaking and stood his full height, he towered over Naruto and looked at him with a hidden smirk "It seems that the Gobi has taken a liking to you Naruto, but don't be so cocky before you fight an opponent who you have no knowledge of, I will be ripping out those eyes of yours and killing your whore"

Naruto anger started to rise as Han called Fu a whore "I know all about your use of steam Han, Kokuo told me everything. And you should listen to your own advice, because you're not the only one with a piece of her inside of you, and I promise you… WITH THESE EYES I WILL KEEP THE PROMISES I MADE TO HER!"

Han looked into Naruto's cold purple eyes "You can try Naruto, but I will not give up so easily. I do not know if you are lying about having a piece of the Gobi inside of you, but if you do I will have Iwa just rip it back out of you and give them your eyes so I can have that half of the Bijuu back inside of me"

Fu just sat there looking at Naruto with disbelief 'This isn't the Naruto-kun I know… Nanabi do you know what happened?'

Chomei 'He has Uchiha. Senju, and Uzumaki blood in him, and those 3 bloodlines are decadence from the Sage of Six Paths himself, apparently he has awaken his eyes after seeing someone attack you. He is still the same Fu-san, but I can tell you now, after this he will need you more than ever. When someone awakens those eyes that alone is a sign that the world will go through a great change, and every strong man will need a strong women Fu-san, to help guide them'

Fu just kept he eyes on Naruto, she couldn't believe that when that man hurt her it would awaken the most powerful of the Dojutsu. Fu placed her hand on her stomach and said "If your father is this powerful, I wouldn't be surprised if you came out even stronger." Fu closed her eyes and felt a tingling feeling go through out her body, she just smiled and whispered 'everything is going to be fine'

Naruto looked at Fu and noticed the independent charka signature flared up a tiny bit, he couldn't help but smile at his family before looked back at Han while his face turned emotionless again "So, shall we dance?"

A/N: In all honesty this chapter was a bit hard to write, but I will re-read it and make some changes before I post chapter 5. I haven't thought of a name for it yet and I suck at writing fight scenes, usually when I finish a chapter I just post it, then I wait a day and re-read it, then go back to editing it then re posting it.

Anyways I like the way I write the romance parts in the first couple of chapters so I was thinking of writing a Naruto / Karin Fan-Fic, alongside this one and my other one. Let me know what you guys think, if I don't hear anything I'll probably just scrap the idea.

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