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Ch4
(Artemis)
To say that I was shocked would be the understatement of the millennia. But what happen next shocked me even more. As we were staring at the place where the fates had vanished from, Perseus began to glow with a golden light. It was so bright that even Apollo had to shield his eyes. When the light dissipated standing there was the Percy with an extreme makeover.
He wore a sleeveless white tunic belted at the waist that fit tightly around his muscular torso and black jeans as dark as his hair. What made the makeover extreme is that he now had wings of the shades of white and pink. Even his eye color had changed from green to gold. He was the most handsome person I had ever seen. Even comparing Cupid with him would be an insult to him. In one hand he held a bow and had a quiver full of arrows over his shoulder. Aphrodite squealed loudly which brought me out of my trance.
"What?", he asked completely oblivious to the change. Even his voice had changed. It was now melodious and deep compared to his previously husky voice(I think it was husky). He paused to listen to his own voice. It was then that he realized that something had changed about him.
"Dude, you have wings. That's wicked!", exclaimed Hermes summoning a huge mirror so that Percy could see himself. We all heard him gasp as he saw his reflection. He then reached around his back to touch his wings as if to see if they were real. I heard another squeal from Aphrodite and saw that she was practically raping him with her eyes. This suddenly got me so angry that I almost summoned my bow and shot her.
Father cleared his throat loudly drawing everyone's attention away from Percy except for Aphrodite's who was still staring at him hungrily.
"The Fates have decided to make Perseus Jackson the god of tides, time, humility, hunt and desire. He has also been made the newest member of our council. All hail, Perseus Jackson."
I was surprised that father had accepted him as the 13th Olympian without a fight but then again the fates had said that it was an order from Chaos hence he didn't have much choice.
Suddenly there was a flash of light and out stepped Hades. "What is the meaning of this? This boy has barely entered godhood yet he has been made an Olympian already. I, on the other hand have waited for over three millennia, haven't been. This is preposterous. I don't agree to this."
"You are not welcome in Olympus, Hades. Leave right now."
"I demand an answer. You can't just avoid me, Zeus."
"Brother, it was the Fates decision to make Percy an Olympian. We can't go against them.", explained Poseidon but Hades wouldn't listen. The Big three started to argue as we all sat silently on our thrones while Percy shifted from one foot to another uncomfortably.
Suddenly a voice boomed above all the noise. "Stop your bickering or else…", it threatened.
"I know that voice.", exclaimed Percy while my father thundered, "Who dares threaten us?"
"It is I, Chaos, creator of the universe. Hades?"
Everyone gulped as we could feel the power of the voice.
"Yes, my lord?", squeaked Hades.
"You shall not interfere with Percy becoming an Olympian. Am I understood?"
"Yes, my lord."
"Good. Now behave, everyone." Saying so the voice faded.
Hades immediately flashed away leaving a stunned council. Suddenly there was a small quake and a golden throne with the pattern of waves rose out of the ground directly opposite to father's throne. Percy went and sat in it.
"Now we shall discuss about Percy's education."
"Wow! Wait. What do you mean by education?"
"As in how to learn to control your godly powers and how to look after your domains. Now Apollo shall teach you about your godly powers. Anyone has any objections?"
When no one said anything, Zeus continued, "Artemis will help you with tides and hunt while Aphrodite shall do the same with desire. As for time and humility, Athena shall give you any advice you want. For now the meeting has been adjourned. " Saying so Zeus flashed out. Ares and Athena also flashed out but the others stayed behind to congratulate Percy.
As I was approaching him to discuss when he wanted to start his training, I heard Apollo and Hermes say, "Now we can go woo some ladies as we have the god of desire by our side."
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