Wow, almost a year since i last updated. You really don't know how many times ive tried to finish the chapter, but in the end i had to restart it. Since the last chapter, i have completed my GCSE's, lost a best friend, had emotional problems, started college, and almost finished one of my courses, oh and ive lost a best friend, and my dog. Just thought you needed to be updated :)


"Cleo!" Don shouted. "Your going to stay with Bella for 3 nights, and i have already asked them. Its for your birthday."

"Really dad? Thanks" Cleo ran downstairs and hugged him. "You've never let me stay more than one night before, what's so different now?".

"I've realised you are growing up, and i can't make these decisions once you turn 18."

"Aww, thanks dad."

Cleo ran through the house, and dived into the water out back to Bella's house.

3 Days Later (Cleo's Birthday).

Cleo, Rikki and Bella woke up, got some breakfast and Cleo's phone beeped indicating she had gotten a text from Sam.

Can you come home? Somethings happened.

Cleo gathered her things and walked home.

When Cleo walked through the front door:

"Surprise!" Shouted everyone, who was then crowding around her.

"Happy Birthday!" everyone kept repeating to her.

"Cleo, we have a surprise for you." Don said.

Emma appeared from the crowd, wearing white short shorts and a blue striped top, with a large present in her hands.

"Emma! I can't believe it! I can't believe you're here!"

"I know! I wanted to be here for your birthday. I actually planned on coming down anyway to visit."

"Aww! I have missed you so much!" Cleo smiled.

"I have missed you too. Here is your present."

Cleo took the large present from Emma's hands, and opened it immediately.

It was a large globe with little models of different things on it, like a Kangaroo (Australia) and an plate of fish and chips (England), and stars on Mako island to represent magic.

Cleo's face beamed with delight.

Rikki and Bella came up behind Cleo, making her jump.

"Happy Birthday Cleo!" they both sang.

"Did you two know about this?"

"Yeah, thanks to you dad, we wouldn't have had like a great few days if he didn't let you stay." Bella said.

The lights went out, and the birthday cake came with Don holding it.

"1…2…3… Happy Birthday…" Don got the birthday song going.

While everyone was focused on the cake, they didn't realise they were standing under five buckets of water.

Kim looked at Charlotte to signal when to let the water go.

When the song was on Hip Hip Hooray, the signal was made, and the water water let out. As the crowd was gathered around Cleo and her mermaid friends, they had no way to escape.

"Cleo, go! Quick". But then he saw the four girls trying to escape, and there was nothing he could do about it."

The crowd moved back with force, and Lewis appeared with towels as the girls had morphed.

"Here. Rikki, dry first, and help the other three".

"You…your all mer… mermaids" Don stuttered.

"I'm sorry dad" Cleo began to cry.


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