Episode 1- The Budget Darling, The Budget!
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Chris walks up to the camera, "Hello Total Drama fans everywhere! It's Chris McClean coming to you live from a revamped and low-budgeted Kiki Island! Surprised, huh? Anyways, because of the budget cuts, only 11 teenagers are competing for a prize of 500,000 dollars! Cheap...but I mean...it is what is...anyways...here's the boat with contestants!"
First, a boy and girl appear. The boy has a white vest, an unbuttoned blue shirt, brown pants and black sneakers. His name is Ben. The girl has a black and white shirt with deep red lipstick. She wears black jeans and black shoes. She is Evelyn.
"And here are our seasonal twins, Evelyn and Ben!"
Both walk up to Chris. "Hi Chris..." Ben says, he takes his hand out to shake Chris's hand, "Nice to meet you in person now..."
"Eek!" Chris squeals,bumping up against Chef, "Your...lobster hands...yeah...um...no thanks..." Chris says, a bit afraid.
Ben feels his hands, "Yeah...sorry..." he walks off with Evelyn behind him, "Loving the intro Chris!" Evelyn pipes out. Chris looks a bit annoyed.
Five people walk out next. Rayleen, a girl with a crop top and black leggings yells at the TV screen, "Hello world! You're looking at your next winner, Rayleen!
"A bit conceited, huh?" Andrew, a boy with a black hoodie and flaming pink skull, asks.
Rayleen whispers to him, "Gotta be likable...you're not really being all that excited..."
"Well...I'm not that kind of guy..." Andrew walks to the twins, with Rayleen following.
Cane and Bonnie walk out. Bonnie wears a Foxy styled sweatshirt, and is talking Cane, who is wearing a black robe and a ninja mask.
"So basically, the objective of the game is to survive Five Nights at Freddys...but there are some extra things...really..." Bonnie answers. Cane looks at Bonnie, "Wow...nice! I'm more into karate and stuff but...maybe I'll try the game later tonight!"
"Oh...' Chris said, "No phones! None whatsoever!" Cane nods.
Cane walks next to Evelyn, "Hi!"
Evelyn looks confused at Cane's mask, "So...um...are you hiding some deformity under there?"
Cane's eyes look awkward, "Oh...it's just a style..."
Evelyn smiles and nods, "Wow."
Another boy, Calvin, wearing a zippered shirt walks in with a snowboard, "What's up guys? I'm Calvin!"
"Hi Calvin!" Bonnie smiles and waves.
But, as Calvin walks up, Brendan jumps in, tripping the snowboarder.
Brendan throws his hands in the air, "Hey ladies!" Then, he looks at the girls..."Um...Chris...is there a confessional still?"
Chris nods, and points to an outhouse right next to the beach, and Brendan races to it.
Brendan: (CONF.) Well...Chris sure a'int wanting a whole lot of love this season...
Brendan walks up to Calvin and picks him up, "Sorry dude...accidents happen, you know?"
Calvin looks at Brendan, eyeing his blue shirt and khaki shorts. a frat? Calvin asks himself. Either, they shake and smile.
Emma walks in. She wears red pants and a peach shirt with a flower on it, "She smiles," Hey guys!"
Some wave, some don't. But, Emma stands next to Rayleen, and both have a tiny conversation.
Chris whispers to Chef, "Gotta pretty quiet group this year!"
Chef whispers back, "Give 'em a few days and then they hate each other. Both giggle.
"Um..." asks Ricky to Ben, "Is this Kiki Island? It feels like I'm at the wrong place..."
Ben answers back, "Oh you're here...I mean, everyone is here so...yeah..."
Ricky walks to the others, but eyes Ben's hands, all lobster looking-like.
Finally, the last contestant arrives. Adira walks in, waves to everyone and stands with the rest, "I'm Adira...nice to meet you all!" Some wave and smile but others look awkwardly at her.
Brendan taps Evelyn's shoulder, "What's that on her head? I've seen it before, but why do they have it?"
"Um, it's something to be modest...Brendan..." Evelyn responds, "So...respect it!"
Brendan smiles, "Thanks!"
Evelyn (CONF.): That frat guy smells like poop...and why does he not know about the niqab Adira's wearing? So informed about the world...
Chris smiles, "Well you guys, welcome to the resurrected Kiki Island! I didn't find it underwater..the budget couldn't do that...so we located about 20 miles from there to here! And we called it Kiki Island again! A resurrection really!"
Ricky asks, "Hey, I heard that there was supposed to be 13 of us, why is there just 11?"
"You don't need to ask that..." Andrew mumbles.
"Well Ricky, I like that you're curious, but a'int nobody got time for that! The budget is on stake here so give this the best reality TV you can!"
Rayleen, Brendan, and Bonnie cheer while the others look.
Chris chuckles, "Thanks y'all! So...what we've all been waiting for! The teams! If I call your name...you are on Team Wakaflacka! Ben! Brendan! Cane! Ricky! Rayleen! And Bonnie!"
The team gathers up.
"Well guys, let's rock the show!" Rayleen happily says. Brendan, Cane, and Rayleen do a chest bump, leaving the others not doing anything.
"Now for Calvin, Andrew, Emma, Evelyn, and Adira, you guys shall be known as Team Onaka!"
"Cool!" Calvin responds.
"Um...Chris, I believe that that's not Hawaiian...with the theme and all..doesn't sound right..."
Chris scoffs, "Well...um...well...um...it's...it's an old language! Like..like the first language they made up, okay? Deal with it!"
Chef leans to Chris, "Didn't you have the money to get a translator?"
"Well when you're spending it on an island you sure can't!" Chris whispers loudly. Then, to everyone, "So, it's time for the classic first challenge...find your cabin challenge!"
Everyone groans.
"Now?" Emma asks, "But it's getting dark..."
Chris sighs, "Okay...budget...um...the budget has gotten really down this year, so we spent on what was needed. Sadly, we don't have cabins for you. But, we'll head over on Chef's jeep to the center of the island where there's a dump to build things!" He blows his horn, "GO!"
The teams sit on their seats, Chef starts the engine and roar off into the forest.
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The teams get off the jeep and run straight for the dump.
Calvin uses his snowboard to ride to the top of the dump.
"Whoah..." Emma says out loud.
"Don't think about others..." Andrew tells her, picking wood up, "Think for yourself..." he walks off. Emma looks confused, but starts working.
Adira brings up a wagon of tools, "There tools should be useful, I've done this before, would you mind if Il ed...for today?"
Andrew looks at Adira for a bit, "Sure...go ahead..."
Adira smiles and starts hammering, Andrew and Emma, you guys can help..."
Emma smiles, "Would be glad to!" And both start helping.
Meanwhile, on Team Wakaflacka, Cane is grabbing things in hard to reach places. As he walks over to Rayleen and Ricky building a cabin, Bonnie scares him, making him throw his stuff in the air, "Bonnie! You scared me!"
Bonnie chuckles, "Sorry! It's what happens on Five Nights At Freddys! You know...jump scares and all..."
Cane nods, "Okay...he walks off to another section of the dump,while Bonnie runs off.
Brendan eyes at pretty piece of wood, "Yay!" He then thinks.
Brendan (CONF.).: I'm not really into this whole "work" stuff so...
Ben walks by Brendan with a box. Brendan calls to him, "Ben! I have back problems! Could you bring this to Ricky and Rayleen?! Please?"
Ben walks up to him, "Sure!" He tries to pick up the wood, but struggles, "Sorry...hands are slippery..." He works harder, but his fingers slip.
"Wow, must be a pain with those hands," Brendan asks.
Nodding, Ben responds, "It is...but they're nice..."
Ricky walks by the guys, "Hey! Stop talking and work!"
"Um...who made you the boss?" Brendan asked.
"No one...I'm just being a loyal teammate, that's all!" Ricky answers. Ricky picks the wood up and runs off.
When he leaves, Brendan asks Ben, "If we lose, wanna vote him off?"
Ben looks confused, "Vote him off? But the game just started..."
Brendan smiles, "Well...gotta thinker here, huh?" He laughs, and pats Ben's shoulder, "I'll give ya some time!" He walks back to the building.
Ben's (CONF). Um...This Brendan guy seems weird...like..I don't know...but...if he's already planning votes out, should he be a threat?
A bit later, Evelyn and Bonnie fight over a hammer.
"Let go!" Evelyn yells.
"No! You let go you crazy fox lady!" Bonnie screams back. Both continue fighting until Evelyn lets go, making Bonnie fall to the floor.
Evelyn holds her hands up to her shoulders, "Calm it down sweetie! It's just a hammer!" She walks off.
Bonnie (CONF.) I hope I make some friends here...things don't look all too promising...
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"Five minutes!" Chris yells, "We gotta eliminate someone!"
"Come on, hurry!" Adira yells, going faster. Team Onaka's cabin was almost complete.
"If someone messes this up..." Andrew mumbles.
Emma, looking tired, sits down, "Gotta take my insulin..." she injects herself with it.
Evelyn looks at her, "Type 1?" Emma nods, Evelyn nods as well, getting back to work.
Team Wakaflacka are not far behind either.
Cane is being very quick and agile about building. The faster he builds, the better it gets.
Ricky begins hammering the top of the building. He seems to be rushing, but tells everyone it's okay.
Rayleen asks Ricky, "Dude...you might wanna slow down there...you could make it fall apart...we really didn't focus too much on the roof..."
"It's fine!" Ricky says, "Don't worry about it!"
Brendan yells, "Be careful up there! You could slip and destroy the roof!"
"Yeah, I'm good! At least I'M doing something to help us!" Accidentally, he slips and destroys the roof, making it fall underneath him. "AHH!" he screams. Cane catches him in time before hitting the ground.
Chris blows his horn, "And we're done! Team Onaka wins!"
Team Onaka cheer. Team Wakaflacka gather up.
Ricky begins crying, "I'm sorry...I failed you guys..." he sobs more. The team all looks at him weird.
Ben gives him a pat, "Don't be upset..it was probably a mistake..."
Ricky sighs, "No...why would it be? I was the only one on the roof!"
Chris walks up to the team, "Well...guess you're up for elimination! Head to the Dock of Shame to vote each other off!" Sadly, the teams walks off. Chris then goes to Team Onaka, "Pretty cool that a 5 person team won! So, your reward is...nothing! We can't afford rewards...not like I'd give them to you anyways but...enjoy the night!"
He and Chef walk off.
"Let's celebrate everyone!" Calvin cheers. They head to the cafeteria that Chef let them go to during commercial break and decide to have a late night picnic under the stars.
Elimination Ceremony
Team Wakaflacka is sitting on the dock by the bay. There is a table with a plate of nothing. Chef walks up, opens a bag of large marshmallows, and puts them on the plate, "They're large this time for $2.99!" He laughs and walks of, and Chris enters.
"Welcome Team Wakaflacka to the first elimination ceremony! There marshmallows symbolize immunity, so you want there! You've voted in the outhouse confessional and it's time to reveal who is safe!...
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Ricky! Buh-bye!"
Ricky gets up, "Time to go...at least I was honest and voted myself off...a true boy scout..."
Chef places Ricky in their new elimination device, "The Duck Of Shame! Not much...just a boat, but it's okay!"
Ricky begins paddling away, waving at everyone, "Bye!"
Chris goes up to the team, "Enjoy your cabin that you all built!"
The team sighs, then all walk back.
Brendan (CONF.) How was I in the bottom 2? If Ricky voted himself off, then someone else must've voted for me! Hmmm...*he gasps* Smooth...real smooth...
Chris points at the screen, and there was the debut episode of Kiki Island 2! See ya next time! Then the minute he said, "time," the screen goes off.
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