This was a story written by my young neighbor years ago. She wanted it posted so I was nice and decided to help her because she was about nine at the time. I agree it is utterly awful, but some of the comments weren't necessary. It was never continued after the first chapter as you can tell. I'm only glad she never asked to see the comments or anything because it would have ripped her apart. I did not grammatically fix it or anything I just posted it as she asked. Sarah was an OC to fix some confusion on that. Please though, don't be so awful in reviews, you don't know what little girls dreams you could crush. Peace out - AgentAlly's "helper"