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I wake up to a smiley Tobias who kisses me on the forehead when I open my eyes, still heavy from sleep.
"Hurry up and get ready. It's already 7:46." He says to me.
"But I'm still tired..." I reply in a whinny voice. Then, just to enhance the effect, I make a pouty face. He smiles against my mouth when pulls me up a bit and kisses me.
"Still tired?"
"Yes."
"Well, I'm going to get us breakfast. If you aren't ready in ten minutes when I get back, I'll be taking you to the training room as you are. Can't set a bad example for the initiates and be late, now can we?" He says with a smirk.
"You won't."
"And why Is that?"
"Because I'm barely wearing any clothes." It was true. I was only wearing a bra, underwear, and one of Tobias's tee shirts that comes to my upper thigh, and just past my butt.
Four just smiles and shruggs. "I have them scared enough. None of them will try anything on you."
And with that, he leaves. He won't do it... I think as I flop back down onto the pillow and fall asleep again.
I wake up when I hear a key jiggling In the lock at my door. I glance at the clock by the bed. 7:58. Crap. When Tobias comes in and sees me, he smirks and shakes his head. Then he grabs a chocolate muffin from the tray and offers it to me. I'm not really hungry so I decline. He just shruggs and picks me up, throwing me over his shoulder like a sack. I yell at him and pound on his back.
"Four! You will not! Put me down right now or I swear to god!" People laugh from down the hall. It must be a funny sight to see, one of your new Dauntless leaders carring another, almost naked one, through the Pit.
He laughs. "Love you." I just groan.
When Four enters the training room holding me, the initiates' chatter stops. Four puts me down laughing even more.
Someone asks, "What's with Six?" I roll my eyes and give Tobias the 'you're dead' look.
Still smiling, he responds, "She didn't really want to get up this morning. Eyes off. She's mine." He flashes to his scary instructor face when he says this, and then back to a smile when he looks at me. "But really though. You'll be dead." Instructor face again.
Now I talk. "Okay guys. Today we're going to play a game. It's called, get Four's keys from him and give them to Six first."
"What? No. No one listen to Six. She's crazy. Everyone get a gun." He counters. I make a face at him. He laughs and pulls me into him, trapping me in his arms. I roll my eyes again and look away. He tries to kiss me but I turn my head again. "Come onnnn Sixxxxx..." He whines. I look at him and make a reluctant face.
"Damn. Why do you have to be so attractive?" I wrap my arms around his neck, stand on my tiptoes, and kiss him. He moves his hands to my hips.
It's only then that I realize that all the initiates are watching, and I pull away, still facing Tobias. Someone pretends to gag, but I don't know who. Probably Alanna. "Go find a target." I say to the initiates, but still facing Four. I give him another quick kiss and turn back to them. No one moved. "I didn't know that you all wanted to be factionless. Maybe I shouldn't be wasting my time here." They scatter.
"God damnit Six. Let me have some of the fun." He whispers.
"Never." I say louder then Tobias. Some of the initiates look at me strangely. I grab a gun from the table and spin it in my hand a little to make them feel intimidated by me. I stand in front of an initate and point it at their target. I breath in, and when I breath out, I shoot, just as Four taught me. Dead center. I look around to see the initiates staring wide eyed. I turn back to the target and breath in again. Then something hits me. A memory. Will. I drop the gun. My eyes glaze over with tears, and one falls from them. I see my parents' bodies, riddled with bullets. I stumble away. Tobias catches me. Marlene jumps off the building.
"Tris." He whispers. "Tris, It's okay. I've got you." He hugs me tight.
"Is she okay?" Someone asks in a quiet voice. Elli. Of course.
"She'll be fine." Tobias responds. "She's been through more than you could possibly know. Get to practicing everyone." Then, he picks me up and carries me to the far end of the room, in a corner hidden away from the initiates. We sit down and he holds me in his arms while I cry and whispers soothing things into my hair.
"I'm sorry," I say. "You shouldn't have to deal with this. It's okay, really, go help them. I'm fine."
"You're not fine. It's okay Tris, don't be sorry." I smile at him half-heartedly.
"I love you Tris. Stay with me."
"I would never leave you."
"I know."
I stand up with Four and he pulls out his phone.
"What are you doing?" I ask.
"I'm texting Christina. She can watch them while we get you cleaned up."
"Okay." Is all I say.
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When we get to our apartment, Tobias unlocks it and pulls me inside. After shutting the door, he pulls the tee shirt of his that I was wearing off me and wipes the tears from my face with it. He doesn't look down at my almost naked body like most Dauntless men would do because he knows. He is such a gentleman. I smile and pull some black yoga pants and a dark purple v-neck top out of my drawers and put them on. I look down at the simple "4" on my left wrist. I then grab his hand and look at the "6" on his. I tilt my chin up, stand on my tiptoes, and kiss him. We both can't help but smile during the kiss. And then strangely, at the same time, we pull away and say, "I love you." To which I respond smiling:
"You read my mind."
Okay, I know, I know, They are supposed to have 4+6 tattoos. I changed It because I liked the sound of this better, and it seemed more original. Also, sorry for the bad ending. It was the best I could do for now.
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