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Four smiles at my admitting defeat. "That's my girl." He says smugly. I roll my eyes. He picks me up like I'm a koala bear, which I really don't appreciate because of the length of this dress. I tuck Tobias's hair behind his ears and run my fingers through It as we walk. He kisses my nose. A squeek Is quite audible from down through the Pit. Only one person in Dauntless has the remote ability to create a squeek that high In tone. Chris. I bury my head In Tobias's shoulder as she comes running up to me. She has really healed any emotional scars quite well. Almost too well. I sigh.
"Tris! You look so cute! Woooww! So do you Four! You guys are so adorable! All matchy matchy!"
"Chris... The whole compund Is all 'matchy matchy.' We all wear black."
"You're right. Oh god... I'm rambling again. I hope I don't turn Into one of those annoying Amity girls."
"A little late for that.." I murmur under my breath. Thank god she didn't hear me.
"Okay guys, bye!"
"Bye Christina." I respond.
Once Christina Is out of sight, Tobias speaks. " I thought we could go to a resturaunt tonight, you know, instead of the dining hall. I talked to Jett, th guy that owns our coffee shop with his wife, and he has something special for us. He said that It was the, 'Super Dauntless leaders that save all the factions single handedly against our own cowardly traitors special.' I thought that sounded pretty good."
"Wow Four. Yeah, that sounds great."
"Perfect."
Four is still holding me when we walk into the little café. The few Dauntless that are there, stare for a moment. I hear murmurs, just as I always do, and just as false as always, coming from the people. I know that they mean well, but It really Irritates me.
"Did you hear about that girl? Six, she had to kill her own parents."
Not true.
"I know! I heard that her own brother betrayed her!"
True.
"And the man, Four, I heard he once tried to kill a guy that almost raped Six in a bathroom."
Not true. How did they get the idea that I was almost raped In a bathroom?
"I didn't hear that, but I did hear that they were both unstable- That one would throw themselves into the chasm If the other died or something. I also heard that Four won't sleep around. She seems to be the only girl he notices In the entire compound. It's a shame. He's sexy."
True. People's thoughts on us were just a jumble of lies and rumors and guesses and facts and assumptions. Four sets me down and laces his fingers with mine as we head to the back of the cafè. He was evidently listening to their conversations too, because he frowns at me.
"She's such a slut too, not even pretty. I don't get what he sees in her. He basicly fought through it all single handedly, except he had to drag her around everywhere." I frown. Bitches judging like that out loud are going to get killed someday. The Dauntless do not have much patiance for that kind of thing. Four stiffens and I squeeze his hand.
"It's okay." I mouth. He is bubbling with fury.
"No, it's not. It really isn't." He turns around.
"Excuse you. Who in hell do you think you are? You don't know her! You don't know what we've been though! How dare you! You better learn to shut your god damn mouth, or so help me, you won't live to see another day! Do you understand?!" The girl just sits there, scilent and terrified. "Are you going to answer me, or sit there like the damned coward you are?!" The girl recovers a bit. She sits up straight and evens out her facial expression.
"I don't need to be anything special to realize that she doesn't deserve you. She is nothing." As soon as the bitch finishes her sentence, Tobias goes off. I feel like the world is ending. Endless profanities and insults spew from his mouth and his face is beet red. He steps towards her, but I snatch his arms before he can swing at her. She smirks.
"Four." I whisper in his ear. "Calm. Down." He slowly stops struggling. He turns to face me, and wraps his arms around me.
"I'm sorry." He whispers into my hair. "I just... snapped."
"I know, I know. It's okay. I understand. If anyone said something like that about you, i'd probably do the same." He turns back to the girl.
"You, are nothing. Remember that. I'd also keep in mind that we," He gestures to us, "Are your new Dauntless leaders." And with that he gently pulls me to him and we walk away. Jett comes out.
"God, Four, I'm so sorry. Six, you too. I can't beleive that. She won't be coming back here anytime soon."
"Nah Jett, It's okay. You could use the business." I say with a smirk.
"I don't need her business." Jett walk owards her and kicks her out. Four smiles. I laugh. Jett comes back with an enormous grin. "Haven't done that in far too long." We both chuckle at his comment and he leads us to a strange terrace that is just outside a door in the back of the kitchen.
Everything is beautiful. There is a single table which is set with a tablecloth and beautiful china. There are tiny yellowish lights strung hanging across the rooftops above us, which resemble stars a bit to me. Flickering lanterns are located across the beautiful terace every few feet or so. There is beautiful black twisty metal fencing around the balcony, and the view is even better. It overlooks from one angle, the dazzling city lights of another faction, which, I am not sure. And from another angle, there are gorgous mountains that seem to cradle the stars and moon.
Jett smiles and leaves. I look up at Tobias, teary eyed, and smile. He smiles back, laughing a bit, and I kiss him hard. I run my fingers into his hair as it begins to rain. This feels like a fairytale moment. Like a dream, that could be torn away from me at any moment. I decide that i'd better enjoy it while it lasts. Tobias kisses me back, and pushes me against a wall. His hands run under my shirt, and hold my waist, in line with my belly button.
"I love you more than anything. More than anyone could ever love anybody." I say.
"There is one exception."
"I don't think so."
"You're my sun."
"You're my moon."
"You are all my stars."
A/N: Awww... Cute ending, dontcha think? That, btw, is origionally part of a quote by E.E. Cummings.
"Yours Is the light by which my spirit's born- You are my sun, my moon, and all my stars."
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~Al- Pal.
