A/N
First of all, thank you so so much all the reviewers.
I think many of you are confused so a little short summary..
Basically in 1st chapter I showed a DUO happy moment with daya feeling guilty about something, next chapter showed abhijeet in bad condition and being killed by his kidnapper in later part, daya reaches him and abhijeet too is able to make out that daya is there, that's it, I don't know really that what was confusing…still it may have been for you. And confusion are always welcome.. :D
I want to clear a few things before proceeding with this story-
1) The story is set in two phases, first phase what happened before 2nd chapter scene and second phase what happens later. I will try to write both phases together but if at some point it becomes too boring or confusing I'll stick with main plot, that is second phase, fine?
2) The story is based on a bold concept, I want all the readers and reviewers to take a final decision now only.
3) If you have any problem with my characterizations kindly let me know, though I will try to keep my characters as I have always shown them but still if according to circumstances I change them, let me know this at that moment only. But just to inform you all, I may change some characters a bit according to this situation.
4) NO BASHING is allowed please. You don't like the plot, you don't like my writing, fine, just mention you don't like it you'll not review further and leave the story. I'll be more than happy.
5) Updates will be short and irregular, I mean not late, but yes irregular, I can't promise you to update in 2 days or 3 days because I know I can't so if you can cooperate with it then only read otherwise it's better you leave the story, no hard feelings at all.
6) Anything which seems hurtful to you, let me know about it. Please feel free to share your views, ideas regarding next chapter, about story itself, I will be really happy to read them all.
7) Since I am writing this story for KRITTIKA di, I will not abandon it for reviews, but yes I may stop updating if I find that reviews are too less because I can always share my chapter with krittika di.
Now, AGE WARNING! It's my personal request to all those young readers (14) to skip this story if there are any, I am sorry if you feel hurt, but the story may seem too bold to you, you know what is good for you what is not so it's better you yourself restrain as I don't know what age group you belong to and what culture you follow. No bad feeling at all, I am just worried for you all my friends.
Now read further, I'll meet you in the end once again to bore you… ;)
"Abhijeet…Abhijeet…ABHI..aankhen kholo yaar…Abhijeet?"
Daya tried to make abhijeet conscious but there was no response from his side, he seemed too deeply engrossed in his sleep.
Salunkhe sir who was also there with the team as they had predicted something similar to happen came forward and checked abhijeet's pulse, after a minute he in hurry ordered all as…
"freddy ambulance bulao jaldi…(freddy said he had already informed the hospital as the couldn't have brought it earlier in fear of any attack), Vivek koi kapda laao, hume khoon rokna hoga, (low tone) isski pulse rate bahot kam hai aur Sachin pradyuman ko phone karo, kuch batana nahi bas hospital bulalo, (vivek handed him a dirty cloth which Salunkhe sir tied tightly around abhijeet's stomach which was bleeding badly because of a stab wound and because abhijeet's body being too weak to carry out clotting processes, Salunkhe after that look towards daya who was completely silent) daya..(daya looked towards him with teary eyes, Salunkhe in soft smile) kuch nahi hoga daya, sabh theek hai..itne arse baad hume abhijeet mila hai…sabh theek hoga (low tone while looking at abhijeet's muddy face) sabh kuch.."
Daya nodded with teary eyes and said in guilty tone… "sabh meri wajah se hua hai sir…sirf meri wajah se…na main woh ghatiya plan..(teary tone) or na yeh sabh kuch…(while glancing towards abhijeet) najane kitna saha hoga sir issne…(in fear) aaj bhi agar hume zara si bhi deri toh…
They heard a laughing voice from pankaj's side and turned towards him, daya seeing that smiling face felt his heart and mind filled with anger and he immediately got up despite of Salunkhe sir's protests and hardly slapped the man who was standing there in pankaj's hold. He grabbed his collar in so much anger and said in teary strong tone…
"agar isse kuch bhi hua na toh tu soch bhi nahi sakta main tera kya karunga…(voice filled with anger and hate) apni maut ki bheekh tu khud mangega.."
Man(teasingly smiling)- tu kya karega inspector humare saath...(low tone so that only daya could hear) joh humne isske saath kiya haina…(hate tone) duniya dekhna thuke gi tum logo pe aur isspe bhi...
Daya slapped him even hardly and started punching him in extreme hurt and anger when…
Shrill sound of ambulance siren buzzed around the place. All the faces and bodies straightened inside the building as the ward boys walked in with stretcher, daya left that man in so much hate after bumping his head in floor and now ward boys with daya's help kept abhijeet's body on stretcher. Daya walked along with abhijeet while Salunkhe sir being in his toe as all others went in cid jeep with the kidnappers.
Daya sat on stool while his both hands gripped abhijeet's hand. He was continuously whispering…
"I am sorry abhijeet…I am really sorry boss…yeh sabh sirf meri wajah se hi toh…(touching abhijeet's face which was filled with many scars from his days there, the scars were a mixture of blood and dirt now" a tear slipped down daya's eyes as from those scars he felt more guilty, he remembered when he started to behave so strangely with his dear brother who drifted so apart from him…
Flashback
Abhijeet entered inside bureau and after seeing daya already there he moved towards him with confused angry expressions and hearing…
"freddy woh neena murder case wali file lana zara...(daya turned towards abhijeet but without a word turn back with) yeh rajat ne subah joh file di thi who kahan rakh di hai maine? "
Abhijeet after seeing his brother being too busy tried to initiate the talk as.. "daya…"
Daya(to freddy)- yaar freddy itni der lagti hai kya ek file lane mein?"
Abhijeet(again)- Daya…
Daya(again)- Rajat dekhna zara woh file tumhare paas hi toh nahi, mujhe mil nahi rahi hai yaar..
Rajat searched the file over his desk and found it and came towards daya and gave him that file while daya immediately open it and start checking with full concentration…
Abhijeet(trying last time after glancing towards all)- Daya…
Daya still engrossed in his file which irritated abhijeet so much now…
Abhijeet(in irritation)- Kya hai daya haan? Ho kya gaya hai, kab se bula raha hun main sahab ko ya sahab ke kaan kharaab hogaye hain?
Daya still be silent and got up to move when abhijeet clutched his hand tightly with a tough tone as…
"batao mujhe kya hua hai?"
Daya(turning back and replying in cold tone)- main tumhare har sawal ka jawab dene ka mohtaaz nahi abhijeet..
Abhijeet(confused, in angry tone)- ayen? Hua kya hai daya? (suspiciously) teri tabiyet toh theek haina? Subah se hi aise kyun…
Daya(coldly while leaving)- meri marzi abhijeet main jaise bhi karun, tumhe beech mein padhne ki jaroorat nahi hai, samjhe…(irritated) koi bacha nahi hun main…
Abhijeet was still confused, he was feeling something wrong with daya but seeing his mood kept quite now.
Whole day daya was behaving very oddly with abhijeet, he became irritated whenever abhijeet asked him anything or mostly ignored his presence. Abhijeet at some point felt hurt with that ignorance but he knew there must be a reason behind all this so just trying to get hold of situation and searching about anything that daya did weird in these days but he found nothing.
Here daya really trying hard to control his smiles and his little laughter bursts after seeing abhijeet in full mode trying to find something odd with daya through his informers and other members but of course his dejected face made so many smiles appear on daya's face….
Daya(while watching abhijeet dejectedly keep another call down)- dekhna boss, iss baar itna sataunga na ki yaad rakhoge ki (naughty) tumne The Daya se panga liya tha…
Daya in smiling doing his all work when abhijeet look at him and found him smiling like this, here rajat who too was included in plan noticed that and came towards daya and say while signaling towards abhijeet…
"sir kaisa laga aapko woh joke…"
Daya(laughing fakely)- arre rajat badha mast joke tha yaar, kahan kahan se laato ho tum yeh sabh…(rajat smiling) dekho abhi tak hans raha hun...(a little loudly) abhijeet toh itne boring jokes sonata haiki pucho mat…
Abhijeet looking at both and after listening that whisper in angry tone… "acha toh abh sahab ko mere jokes boring lagte hain…(angrily moving out) ek baar pata chal jaaye ki kya chal raha hai isske dimaag mein toh aisa haal karunga na ki…"
He completely moved out while after his exit all those stored laughs burst out while freddy looking all in confusion as he can't get what going on because daya knew that it's too easy for abhijeet to take out anything from freddy stomach.
Flashback END
Daya's grip on abhijeet's hand tightened remembering that day, how they all had laughed on abhijeet's concern for daya, his antics regarding daya's odd behavior…
Daya down his head in extreme guilt as a tear slipped down his face, he felt a hand on his shoulder and just managed to say…
"sir…yeh…yeh mere liye uss din usse bachane…1 mahine sir…I mahine…yeh wahan kaise…unn logon ne najane kya kya…(the grip tightened on his shoulder)"
Salunkhe(strong tone)- kuch nahi hua hai isse daya, tum itna negative socho ge toh sirf dar lagega daya aur kuch nahi..aur abhijeet tum jaante hona kitna stong bacha hai..(daya nodded looking at abhijeet's face) chalo phir abh yeh sabh sochna aur apne aapko inn sabh ka karan thehrana band karo daya…abh abhijeet humare paas hai beta..sabh theek hoga…"
They reached hospital and doctors who were already ready immediately took abhijeet inside OT as his pulse rate was too low. Team be there in extreme restless position as feeling fear, anger and guilt. Acp sir also be there in one and half an hour as he went to an important meeting with some higher authorities but Salunkhe knowing that if they didn't inform acp now then what will be the consequences had asked sachin to inform acp that they had found abhijeet just to relax him.
After 5 painful hours of silence OT door opened and the doctors team came out lead by Doctor chandrashekhar, a neurologist/surgeon, he came forward and started while looking at team and nodding to a some other doctor as…
Doctor- "we'll talk in my cabin sir…(showing them the way) please sir…
Everyone looked confused and in fear, doctor sensing their restlessness said in smile… "he is fine but is unconscious right now because of sedatives, now please sir…"
All moved after glancing once towards abhijeet. They entered inside doctor's cabin and he after settling on his chair stated…
"he is stressed and it's very common in these cases, there had been a hit over his head but it's not much of a major wound though we'll do some scans for complete satisfaction, I can satisfy you with his brain. But there are many injuries otherwise, his face is filled with scars and his body with many wounds, some of them being deep, he'll have to stay here for a few days for proper medication and rest which we know he'll not do at home, other thing is, he must not be left alone, (to acp sir) 1 month is a really long duration sir, there can be many psychological problems besides physical and weakness, he needs your support sir, (to all) all of yours support, try to keep him happy and busy, discuss things with him, keep his mind working and in lively conditions, he may get irritated and shout but sir please understand, he is stressed, try to control him with love and care. You all are getting me right?"
Acp sir(confused and hesitant)- doctor, abhijeet has been in this profession from so many years, he has been on numerous missions, we are taught to handle such situations then why are you.."
Another doctor who was present there looked towards acp sir and then towards doctor chandrashekhar who too looked towards him, both be silent for a few minutes and now that another doctor continued…
"sir we are well aware that you all are well trained for such situations but sir there is a very big difference between your training and real situations, 1 month is indeed a much much longer duration…we know it seems odd sir, but we don't know how he was treated or even beaten (all felt pain in their hearts, doctor in deep tone) his wounds are deep and numerous sir, they need to be healed slowly…but healed properly with love and care."
All nodded in silence, a new journey they knew has started now but what they didn't know is that a big secret was still hidden from them.
A/N
So guys let me know your decision and that how was this chapter.
Next update will be late as I am busy next whole week, sorry guys, will still try to update faster.
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