Authors note!
So over the night, I have read my story here from start to finish, and hopefully got some of my muse back. Though while reading, I realized something. I suck. Haha I know, you are your own worst critic, but ya. I suck. Haha my spelling sucks, grammar is a joke and I tend to confuse even myself. So once the story is done, I will have to go back and do edits (unless someone wants to do them for me. Haha)
Not to mention that I have given contradictory backgrounds. In chapter 10 I think, I said that Eddie, Mason and Rose met in defense classes, and that lissa and rose met when someone was picking on her. But in the last 2 chapters I said that they all met on a playground, what the hell me? That's another thing that needs to be fixed. I am going to go with the later one, where they all met on the playground.
And I learned that I DID in fact add Ivan into my story. He was Dimitri's cousin from Russia that was there for Thanksgiving, and kept poking Dimitri's bread. Lmao. So I have to go change that too. Ummmmm. Other than some character personally things at the beginning, I think those are the main things that need to be changed. If you guys have seen any other flaws, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me.
I am going to be trying to work on the next couple chapters soon, so keep an eye out for the next couple. They are going to be long like the last one.
