Hello! me again. i was in the keys, and just got back an hour ago. yes, i come home and start writing, haha.
PLEASE READ BELOW!!!
i know its long and intimidating looking but it is important for the story!!!
Absolute-ecstacy pointed out that my jail descriptions weren't life like. If you have the same concerns, here are my reasons. This is fanfiction. You can twist things up the way you want. I dont know about you but I didnt want to put shuichi through that, haha. I feel cruel enough putting him in jail! I know there are rules but this isnt a realy documentary or anything, so it doesnt matter. The way i set up my story is how it will be followed, and there will be curtians so shuichi and yuki can sex in peace, and there will be more free will so that it will be easier for Shuichi to get raped and for him and yuki to have relations.
Someone else mentioned that Shuichi is only getting 30 years for jail.
1. its shuichi!!! are u guys suggesting i do that to him?!?!
2. also, it wasnt comfirmed murder. nothing is set yet.
Though I have taken your comments into concideration, and I will be more harsh on Shu. Sadist time? yes.
Sorry for my spelling. I know some of it is incorrect, but, I'm not doing this on word, I'm typing it straight onto fanfiction. If I save my fics on word that means there is a chance a family member will read, even though i only share this computer with my sister sometimes. Just dont want to risk.
Also, a warning for my readers. I dont update constantly, like, every day. I update about 1-2 times a month. Or 2-3. if lucky. haha.
So enough babbling.
Thanks for reviews, and on with the fic!
Shuichi pranced into the room next to Hiro, and the first words he heard were:
"Woot! This is the new pretty boy they told us about? Noone told us he looked so much like a girl. Look at that pink hair! He's so tiny, he can be my little sister," A man commented, whistling loudly. Many other men in the room agreed and put in their comments too.
Discusting.
He glanced at Hiro, but the guard looked indifferent. I guess he saw this coming. 'Thanks, buddy...' Shuichi thought.
Hiro waved him goodbye and left Shuichi to his doom.
As soon as Hiro left, Shuichi investigated the room. To his relief, there were guards sitting on each end of the room, and one by the door.
The room, about the size of a garage, held simply workout equipment(nothing electric), tables, chairs, benches, and a telephone, that seemed segregated off to the side, being contained in a glass case.
Shuichi then looked around at the people occupying the room, or the men, rather.
Most were big and bulky, probably from working out, since they had nothing else to do. He glanced at a few bigger ones, all seeming close together, who were covered in tattoos, and seemed to have confidence in themselves.
And there was no boy in the room that looked like himself.
Here stood 22 year old Shindou Shuichi, in a room full of rather large men, who were looking at him predatorialy.
What had he gotten himself into?
He wondered why there were no other younger and less...big looking men. No other men looking like himself, lost, not fitting in. Didn't this happen to other people?
The only other man in the room that seemed to stick out was blonde and slim. Shuichi hadn't seen his face yet, but the man's slim figure and slender shoulders told Shuichi that he might be in a similar situation as this man.
But then the man turned halfway over his shoulder, and Shuichi lost his breath.
A golden eye glared at him, as if Shuichi had taken the last cookie that the man had wanted.
As soon as Shuichi's eyes met the other man's, the golden beauty turned away.
His breath taken out of him, Shuichi wondered why such a beautiful person was in jail. Even in the ugly jumpsuit, the man looked absolutely flawless.
Clear pale skin; blonde silky hair, the kind you want to just reach out and touch; peircing gold eyes; slim, yet still filled and muscular build; and a carefree and dominant, intimidating aurora.
Shuichi was snapped back to reality at the noise of a menicing laugh...that was right in his ear. He spun around and his face was inches from another man, who was about twice as big as Shuichi.
The man, with tan skin, brown shaggy hair, but a strangly soft face, towered above him, and had an evil smile gracing his face.
Suprisingly, the man wasnt ugly, like Shuichi had thought men in jail were(innocent boys believe their television). But he seemed scary to Shuichi, and even more threatening when another man came up behind him and rubbed his butt, with something that didnt seem like a hand to him.
"We're going to have fun, aren't we, Shu-I-Chi?" A third man whispered in his ear in a low, husky voice.
Shuichi gulped.
Fuck.
A/N well. it has been forever. haha.
My computers dead.
But thats no excuse, my mother has one i can go on. Even though she says not to. haha.
So sorry. havnt updated out of pure lazyness...
im horrible. T T
anyways...
review! seriously! i need it, coz then i know that my absence isnt making u guys hate me! its been like, a year since ive updated my other fics...i really have to get to that.
OH, AND ATTENTION!
I NEED MORE PEOPLE FOR MY GRAVITATION ROLEPLAY!!!
im sure u will want to join. haha.
anyways...
ill send u the link, if it doesnt show up on here.
it faded a while ago, and me and Tatsuha are restarting it.
We need a buncha people, so spread the word.
http://community. u wana participate, then say so in a message, email, or review!
