AUTHOR'S NOTE
Hey I m Gadhadada aka GD aka Dada, Author of This Story first overwhelmed on such Huge Response so a Big Round of applause and Thank you to All the Active and Silent Readers...
Initially, when RIYA (DREAMFANATIC) gave Me the Plot, I think and Researching about it as per Her giving Sites address as well with Google, but as She found Team concern and care towards DAYA sir so I changed the Disease cz if I will go as per Her Plot, I must bound by only DUO, which U mostly read in my every second story either here in FF too...
After Discussing with Her and with Her permission, I deviated the plot a bit and using EDEMAwith Brain Traumatic Injury...
the whole TODDLING Idea was mine and complete imaginary as I dunt know that in Brain traumatic injury and Edema, Doctors preferred which kind of treatment so Me and RIYA also mentioned it in First chapter of this story...
Now the most important query! readers find that Story finished Haphazardly, u all are correct as I also feels the sesame but As I m not a Chapter Writer so I wrote the whole in One Go and when I was thinking that it never be Finished if I continued in that AAA... AAA...AAA scenario so I wrapped it...
I showed that an Accidents always not coming with Pain... Sometime it will came up with happiness too...
The start of this Injury of DAYA Sir had done by an Accident and the End Up of thus Injury again with an accident...
Now, I will Tell You what's the problem... As being a Writer and as being a Reader We all wrapped in that Aroma, Feel of phase where a Baby Bear getting the Love, Care, Concern and protectiveness, Support of His Love ones and Not wanted to coming out from that Aura...
I can Understand your irritation or said Disappointment too but Guys, Every Good things should Ended... This also...
So many Readers Left the Story as find it repetition, to some Extent it's True... But Yes I wrote 4 Stories on Such topic and tried to show Different Childhood days of any Person either it'sTOSSING THE LIFE (toddling days)... DAYA vs DAYA (early days, kids started to learn words)... KUKKU n BABA (where the Stammering session started) and last LITTLE BEAR(where I showed the Kids stated Understanding the relations, situations)... So all are Different to each one... OK the Difference were Slight but Yes Different...
I m really Sorry to all Readers especially those finding it Incomplete, sad as it's finished, request about more chapters as I can't do it...
KRITTIKA... I really Like your FB especially your honest FB as it's Reader Right to give Criticism to Writer in Positive manner, told about their Expectation and sad that writer did not Fulfill their Hope as per their Criteria... I m really Thankful that U like and loved some flairs present in the story... I knew I can't write as per Classy as uh are writing KRITTIKA and somehow I m doing hardworking in Future to come on Your, RIYA, NANDITA, MRF, , DIYA, SHZK, LADY MIRINGUE, ABHIRIKAFAN (just DUO story tak), SHZK, PALAK, RAI etc level...
NANDITA... thank you so much for your FB either I commented U regarding missing Your FB in few Writers Story who Writing on DUO right now... I like that uh enjoy rather my story does not Crisp and gripped like Yours...
RAI... Thank you to You either my story is not such Cute and Sweet like yours...
SHZK... Thank You so very much SHZK either it's Not as much Practical as your last story where U showed DAYA Sir as ACP but at least I tried...
PALAK... Thank you so much PALAK, either I want that U told why U dunt Like it as it's give writer a better thought about readers idea in Future projects...
ARTANISH... Thank You so much for taking out time and love to read it and. Like it too...
NAINA MALIK... I feel U are Regular reader of my stories in IF too... I think either I did not get your FB there with This UserID... Thank you so much that You found it Soothing and lovely...
RSR... Thank you so very much...
MISTIC MORNING... a big thank you that You loved this Cute ride and like the story...
FATI SID... Hmmm, I really enjoyed your FB cz U are the first person who showed Discomfort regarding the Story... Now it's Really Nice that reader told writer about what feels them weird and odd so writer must. Careful about that in future... thank you so much...
PRIYA... Thank you so much for your Lovely reviews...
R N R... Thank you for liking that A.. BHI... BAR and the tests associated to His family concern...
COOLAK... Honestly I really like your USED ID first... It's always remind Me the CUCKOO tone... U are regular passenger of that Ride and loved to be part of it... Thank you so much... Yes RAHUL is my regular Character as DAYA Sir police academy frnd...
SAMI... Thank you so much...
HONEY... Thank you HONEY to openly showed Your hesitation... Honestly after reading Your first FB... I realised What a Big Blunder I did... Thank you for Realising Me that... Still I think You are SAME KHARGOSH giving FB as AASHI HONEY UserId too...
ASANJANA... Thank you so much to be with Us in this Story Journey having ups and downs...
AKANSHA... Thank you for your lovely feed back in all Chapters...
JYOTI... Hmmm... Bha Bha... Now it's my trademark... Hahah... II wanted to take out that label but still failed... Thank you so much...
BHUMI... Amazing that you mostly with this ONE WORD FB crossed the whole ocean of chapters... Thank you so much...
NITU... yes, Little Bear only creating Difficulties for His family and his Bro... Thank You so much...
D... nice USERID... thank you for supporting the story on regular bases...
PINKI... Thank you so much for pricing Me your sweet FB...
KHUSHI... yes your FB spreading a KHUSHI inside the story and Fb thread automatically.. Thank you so much...
LOVEABHI... Thank you so much that u like the story either ABHI Sir was minimum in the Story...
DUOLOVER... thank you so much for your continuous lovely support...
RANI... Thank you so much for your FB...
RUKMANI... Glad that I found your Continuous hand on my black in every Chapter.. thank you so much...
KASHYPRFG... Thank You so much form our sweet FB...
DREAMYGIRL... Thank you fir your Lovely Support and Cute FBs...
SHERESHTA... Thank you so much for your continuous lovely FB...
GUDIA... Thank you GUDIA that U liked the Chapters of this ride...
... Thank ye you so very Much...
GUEST (current One with LONG reviews)... Seriously I m waiting for Your Reviews... Yes Guest, I tried to give Life either I have No Contact with KIDS as I the Youngest One in My Siblings and the Last BACCHA in Home (hahaha)... Yes LIFE is really Something Precious and When Its DEAD inside Us.. We thought ohhh We are Dead... I dunt know how This Ride Happened and Moving as when RIYA Discussed the Plot, I have NO IDEA to Touch This... Sub bas hota Chala gaya... Yes the END was Rushy cz I m really in Trouble that the Ride looking just without any END so give it an END... I make a Dead End ffor it... hahahha... I really Enjoyed Your Feedback as These Feed back told Writer about What Readers Learnt with their Stories or there Stories have Any Social Messages or Not... Yes 3 Triplets Baby Girl Idea was Personally Witnessed by Me as happened in My Uncle Family... about that BIKER PUNISHMENT... Yes That was a Big Laps as I forget that BIKER Completely even I think I forgot to Mention about Daya Sir Bike condition when Vivek went to that Spot... But Look Mostly Reader Forget it cz We all Wrapped in that AAA...AAA...AAA na... A Biggest Thank You so very much...
NOTE: why U Need Permission, U have the Responsibility to give Your FEEDBACK to Any Writer Story Published in FF/IF... I m warmly Welcoming and Waiting for Your Precious FB on My IF Stories...
Now, I m really obliged to All GUESTS, as they Visited my Story and read it! gives their precious Words of appreciation! Improvisation and giving their Supportive pat on My Shoulder in this big battle as this is my first such Big Story Posted at FF...
At last, I m really feeling Honoured that in This FF Site, Three big and legendary Story Writers asDAYA DAREDEVIL, KRITTIKA and DREAMFANATIC Posted my Small Work on their Behalf...
it's really giving a pleasurable Sooth as such Big writer giving Me opportunity to Spread my work under their names...
I m really thankful to All Three especially DREAMFANATIC and KRITTIKA for giving me such big opportunity in Free...
Yes, a Big Thank you to all SILENT READERS as They are the HIDDEN TRP RAISER of Any creative Person...
One more, yes I realised my fault so now after this attempt... Readers when seeing any Story coming under the Specific Writer name, considering the Story with their master peace...
I feels that when KRITTIKA Released my Story, Readers thought it's as Awesome and Fantastic asGHAME E LAZAWAL, ZINDAGI SY, DAYS OF FRIENDSHIP, AAJEEB DASTAAN, LOVE IS NOT ROMANCE, CID OFFICERS etc Stories ...
Same with DREAMFANATIC, as When My Story coming Under Her name, readers comparing it with Her Spectacular and Speechless attempts as HEALING, BROKEN TRUST, TOUCH OF FRIENDSHIP, CHOTE DUO, SMALL BITE, DILEMMA, A MISTAKE IT WAS, LITTLE BROTHER, UNDERSTANDING, UNCONDITIONAL INSPIRATION etc...
No GUYS, when U read any Different Name in A/N... Never Compere the matter with the person posting it...
I found that here, mostly readers Compering My this casual stuff with RIYA Outstanding Stuff either I felt the same happened with KRITTIKA Classy Efforts too...
Thank you so much to All of You and especially RIYA and KRITTIKA...
Jeeti raho, Khush and Healthy raho... Hamesha ... AAMEEN...
Publisher note.
Thank you so much guys for reading and giving your precious reviews on this precious story.
It's a story really close to me and that's why when I got the chance I didn't hesitate to share it with you all.
Guys it was a story from a different author best in herself and for me the best author till date and honestly there was no comparison between me and her. I agree with dada's point that yes when you see that it's a story from different author you do not compare as both are bound to be different.
We authors welcome critical criticism with open heart and we do this this time too. We are happy you expressed your true opinions and views and it was really encouraging. Thank you so much again guys.
Take care till we meet next time guys.
Phir toh I am there na... ;)
Chalo bye guys.