Hey guys, chapter 11.

Disclaimer: Refer to previous chapters.


Flynn's POV

Sunlight poured into my room and eyelids, making me instantly open my eyes. Despite the pain from my eyes, I felt refreshed. I stood up and walked out of the room and assumed my position in front of Rapunzel's room. As I stood there, I heard crying. I slowly opened the doors and saw Rapunzel, wrapped up in her hair, crying.

"Why are you crying?" I asked, walking over to Rapunzel. She looked at me and hugged me. Her tears stained my shirt but I didn't mind. "They're… They're gone" I heard Rapunzel whisper. "Wh… Who?" I asked, deciding whether to hug her back or to just let my hands fall limp beside my waist. "My parents… they… died…" I heard her trail off; I couldn't help but feel her pain. Growing up, I never had anyone raise me, that's why I became a thief in the first place. I hugged her back and said: "I'm so sorry" burying my head partially into her hair.

"Don't be… It's not your fault anyway" she said, letting go off me and I let go instinctively. She walked out the door and said: "Come on, we had some duck to give people" she turned around and smiled at me, even though I knew it was fake, I smiled back. She walked away wordlessly and I followed.


"Ok, here you go" I said, passing some of the duck to the person in front of me. I was currently passing duck to everyone who was poor, and since I had a great judgement, greedy riches wouldn't be passing around here, even if they dressed up poor. I looked over to check on Rapunzel, who was sleeping and smiled.

"Excuse me" I heard, I turned around and looked at… her... I couldn't judge if she was poor or rich because I was… mesmerized by her. She had light brown hair, sky blue eyes and a figure that would please any man. "Could I get some duck?" she asked. "Uhh… yeah, sure, here you go." I said, giving some of the duck to her.

She smiled softly before walking away. I smiled and turned back to the man in front of me. "She's a beauty, eh?" asked the man, with his thick low sound while looking at me. "Yeah, whatever you say" I said, giving the last of the duck to him. "Hey, my name's Kreig, we'll keep in touch, eh?" he said, holding out his hands. I hesitantly shook it and went to wake Rapunzel up.

Rapunzel's POV

I felt someone shake me and I opened my eyes and saw Flynn, butterflies suddenly flying in my stomach. "Hey, I'm done selling it and a guard just informed that we're going to have the funeral tomorrow" he said, smiling softly. I couldn't help but smile a little bit though I was sad.

I sat up and held out my hand for him to pull me up. He got the signal and pulled me up. He pulled me a little too hard and I stopped a few inches away from his lips. I could feel his breath on my skin. My eyes flicked to his lips and I unconsciously kissed him.

I pulled away, my face flushed. I instantly looked away and ran, to where, I didn't know but I just ran. I stopped on a beach, panting for air.

Flynn's POV

Rapunzel just ran… after she kissed me… the weird thing was… I felt… nothing. I shook my thought off and walked towards the castle. As I was on my way to the castle, I heard a familiar voice. "Hey" called the voice, I turned around and saw the girl. "You're the guy who gave the duck away" she said, pointing at me. "Yeah…" I trailed off. "What's your name? Mine's Victoria, Victoria Mackenzie" said Victoria, holding out her hand.

Victoria… I like that name. "Mine's Flynn, Flynn Rider" I said, holding out my hand to shake hers. This was wrong… I've already fallen in love.


Aye… I'm done with Chapter 11, rather short but the last chapter (Which is not the next one) will be extra long. Anyway, R&R&Bye.