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Chapter 2

Son of Whitebread: ooh gender swap

Joaquinofthefunk: Yep :)

A teenage a boy of average build was standing listening to a had white hair and black eyes. He wore a white shirt and blue jeans. But his most defining features was the black and white striped tail above his buttocks. " An army of humanoid aliens have attacked Earth. " The boy smirked. "Looks like I get to have some real fun."

Pan was assigned also for lookout but she had found nothing. She did however find a energy source. That was that boy. She intended the shop he was in. Pan no longer felt the energy. Pan yelled " Hello!" She didn't get a response. The boy was elsewhere but still in the shop. " Oh. This must be one of the individuals fighting against our army. I can deal with her." Pan kept on yelling to no response. Pan stopped yelling and gave up after a few minutes. She walked outside and was about to fly away, but then out of nowhere she got kicked in the face leaving a bruise. She looked to her side to she the boy descending with his arms crossed. His white hair was flowing all the way down to his waist. The boy landed and said " Come at me." Pan responded " With pleasure." Pan dashed towards the boy. She punched at lightspeeds but was talking " Hey what's your name. I want to know the person's name before I kick their butt." They boy while still dodging the punches ( Like Vegeta versus Frieza) " Call me Korne." As soon as he said that he back flipped and kicked Pan in the chin.

Korne was serious now. Korne grabbed Pan's arms and continuosly kneed her in the stomach. Korne after awhile of thrashing let go of her arms and grabbed her leg. Korne spun at an angle giving Pan a face full of dirt every few seconds. Pan was trying to resist the entire time but to no avail. Korne held her up by the head. Korne was angry." C'mon why won't you scream. I love to hear the agony of my test subjects. " Pan was able to mutter " Piss off." Korne replied " Oh got a sharp tounge do we?" Korne threw Pan into the ground. Korne then began to stomp on her head repeadately. " If you don't scream. you'll die right now." But the stomping stopped. Pan stood up slowy to see her 8 counterpart battering Korne. After a few seconds 8-Pan back flipped away landing besides Pan. She said " I felt your energy getting weaker. We have to deal with this guy." 8-Pan handed Pan a Senzu bean.

Pan ate the bean completely rejunvinated for the stand off. This could be a fight to the death.

Elsewhere a fight is just beginning. Goku and Kakkalotta punched each other's fist. Goku saw his chance to kick her so he tried to kick her in her side but Kakkalotta dodged and strikes Goku in the then used her tail to grab Goku leg. Goku thought I'm gonna need to take care of that. Goku grabbed the tail. Kakkalotta said " Y'know even if you knew a Saiyan I bet you've no one without that stupid weakness." Goku said " Well I wasn't trying to activate it." Goku then elbowed her in the face, knocking her through the hair and ripping off the tail. Goku said while rubbing the back of his head " Sorry if that hurt too much. I don't want to kill you. Heck you could even stay here. I know you'll change your ways. I do however want to fight." Kakkalotta said " As if I give a crap about what you say." Kakkalotta soared over to Goku. Kakkalotta punched forward but Goku dodged and was Kakkalotta. Goku then kicked her in the stomach stunning her for a second. Goku the chanted the famous word. "KAMEHAMEHA!" A blue beam launched out of Goku's feet and launched Kakkalotta in the sky breaking open her armor.

Vegeta had just received the Nappa Cannon. 8-Nappa was panting. He put one hundred percent into the attack. The dust cleared from tready for the laughed. He didn't see anything. He looked up. He saw Vegeta. He was surprised that he was still alive. Vegeta however was am little bruised. " Okay Nappa. Now you've officially pissed me off. Get ready for the maximum. " Vegeta started to yell as his hair flashed and lighting striked. Vegeta's hair waved in the wind. He hair also grew even spikier. 8-Nappa watched in awe as a Super Saiyan 2 stood before him. Vegeta moved so fast 8-Nappa couldn't even see him. Before he knew it he had been punched in the stomach. Vegeta then shot an energy beam from his fist. The blast punched a gaping hole straight through him. 8-Nappa was shot back with blood flying out of the new wound of his. He was bleeding out quickly.

Vegeta walked over 8-Nappa with a smirk on his face. He said " I know you won't change. I have full authority to kill you. I won't be fooled by any tricks." Vegeta grabbed 8-Nappa by his neck. 8-Nappa's eyes were barely open when he was sent flying into the air. The last words he would hear are " GALICK GUN!"

Back with the Pans and Korne things seemed to be going good for them. . Korne had wounds all over his body. The Pans were also injured but not as much as Korne. Everyone was tired, yet they did not know how long they had been fighting. Korne smiled. Korne then started to laugh maniacally. Pan said " What's so funny?" Korne replied " What if I told you this isn't my strongest form." Both Pans were surprised. Korne continued " I pretty sure you've heard of Super Saiyan and it's following transformations. Then you've also seen my black and white striped tail. Well let me also say this. I am a Saiyan Deity. Well to be more specific I am the latest of one of the 500,000 reincarnations. I am their god of the sun and moon This body is quite young and doesn't have my full power yet. Finally I'd like to reveal my true name Niy Gany ( Nee Gin-ee), but call me Korne."

"So let me finnaly show you this full power at the moment." Korne said Korne yelled as his hair grew spikier and longer. The Earth shook as he powered. His hair was now black and white alternating with each bang. His eyes' color was reversed with the eye being black and pupil being white. His shirt ripped off him revealing his bare chest. " This is the Yin Yang Super Saiyan Form!"

Woot Woot! I keeping Korne because it sounds funny. But I can't help but say that this is only the beginning. I've trying to keep things shorter for now though. Well here are the Power Levels! I don't know why sometimes they erase.

Power Levels

Vegeta: SS2:

8-Nappa:4.500.000 SS: 7.500.000

Pan:3.500.000

8-Pan:2.500

Korne: ( Holding Back Due to Handicap): 5.000.000 YYSS (O.2):

Goku:

Kakkalotta(75%)10.000.000