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Sento Shinrai: Great man! Keep it up! Also, what's your account name on FictionPress? (I also have a story on FictionPress btw and I want to read yours)

Response: Thanks man. Also I know.


The Saiyan Spaceship drifted through space. It was course to Planet Kakkalotta. But little did they know...they were being followed.

The alarms in the ship buzzed and rang. Everyone was looked as the door busted open. A blue and white Arcosian/Frieza Clan member walked out, he chuckled. " So much more of you to massacre. I thought getting rid of your king was enough. I even did it through the queen's body to cause even more disfunction. Then I thought you'd all eventually kill yourselves. But no, you had to make this hard for me!" Raditz yelled out " You bastard!" He transformed into a Super Saiyan and dashed over to the arcosian. He chuckled once more " Know that you died by the hands of Eis you little monkey." He put on his arm stabbing Raditz through the heart. He coughed up his blood as the Super Saiyan transformation faded away. His life flashed before his eyes.

Raditz as a little four year old was eating some meat at a restaurant. Then suddenly a royal guard burst in through the door. " The king is dead!" " Raditz thought " Impossible!" He burst through doors and ran into the Royal Palace. He found the queen walking towards the princess,an energy blasts was forming in her hand. Raditz yelled out in tears " Stop It!" He turned Super Saiyan and shot a blast through the queen's stomach. The princess was bawling. The king was in her hands. The Super Saiyan transformation wore off. Raditz said " Don't worry I'll protect y-" he was interrupted by Kakkalotta punching him into a wall. Saying " Ew!"

The memories were cut off with the blood lost. He slowly passed out. When he finally fell to the ground Eis stomped on his head, killing him. The Saiyans ran at him each one falling before him. Kakkalotta thought quickly and busted open the pod. A grabbed the slightly injured Korne out of it. She carried the slightly wounded deity. She ran to an escape pod and sat the god down. The pod blasted away from the ship in the direction of Earth. Kakkalotta didn't want to go back but if someone would know what to do it would the people on Earth.


The pod broke the atmosphere of Earth. When it landed both versions of the Z-Fighters awaited then . Korne stepped out in white and black saiyan armor. He held the sleeping Kakkalotta in both of his arms. He said " It seems this universe's Frieza had appeared. He has...eradicated the Saiyans. " All of the Z-Fighters were surprised at the statement. Goku seemed to be thinking hard about something.Z Vegeta said " Why should we help you!" Goku said "Don't be mean Vegeta this a time of loss." " This means you other guys gotta go to this universe's Namek. We have to stay here and just try to figure out a way to get back. We can't interfere that much." Everyone on the Universe 7 side were marveled!. " How did YOU think of that?!"


Well tthat's it. Normally I would update this with more words because it's a little disappointing for such a long wait and I am truly sorry, BUT ( Underline But :) ) I will be super-ultra-hyperactive on FictionPress. So Fanfiction will be taking a hiatus ( Hopefully a lot less shorter than the one this summer. )

Power Levels

Raditz: 2.3Bil

Raditz SS: 12Bil

Eis: Not telling that...